When I decided to return back to school at the __1__
age of thirty-five, I wasn’t at all worried for my __2__
ability to do the work. After all, I was a grown
woman who has raised a family, not a confused__3__
teenager freshly out of school. But when I __4__
started classes, I realized that those “confused
teenagers” who sitting around me were in __5__
more better shape for college than I was. They still__6__
had all their classroom skills in bright, shiny__7__
condition, while mine grown rusty from disuse. I__8__
had totally forgotten how to locate information in
a library, what to write a report, __9__
or even how to speak up in class discussion. __10__
答案及解析：
1.
去掉back
return本身就相當(dāng)于back或go back，此處back意義重復(fù)
2.
for改為about
worry about是固定詞組，表示“為……擔(dān)心”，而worry for后加人時(shí)表示“為某人擔(dān)心”
3.
has改為had
定語(yǔ)從句中時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)與主句一致
4.
freshly改為fresh
fresh out of school作后置定語(yǔ)修飾teenager。freshly只有與過(guò)去分詞連用時(shí)才表示recently
5.
去掉who或?qū)itting改為sat
6.
more改為much
修飾強(qiáng)調(diào)比較級(jí)better
7.
classrooms改為classroom
classroom在此處是名詞作定語(yǔ)修飾skill，不能用復(fù)數(shù)
8.
mine后加had
過(guò)去分詞grown不能單獨(dú)作謂語(yǔ)，并且需要表示出在過(guò)去的過(guò)去“我的技能早已生銹”
9.
what改為how
write后已有賓語(yǔ)，應(yīng)用how表示方式
10.
or改為and
age of thirty-five, I wasn’t at all worried for my __2__
ability to do the work. After all, I was a grown
woman who has raised a family, not a confused__3__
teenager freshly out of school. But when I __4__
started classes, I realized that those “confused
teenagers” who sitting around me were in __5__
more better shape for college than I was. They still__6__
had all their classroom skills in bright, shiny__7__
condition, while mine grown rusty from disuse. I__8__
had totally forgotten how to locate information in
a library, what to write a report, __9__
or even how to speak up in class discussion. __10__
答案及解析：
1.
去掉back
return本身就相當(dāng)于back或go back，此處back意義重復(fù)
2.
for改為about
worry about是固定詞組，表示“為……擔(dān)心”，而worry for后加人時(shí)表示“為某人擔(dān)心”
3.
has改為had
定語(yǔ)從句中時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)與主句一致
4.
freshly改為fresh
fresh out of school作后置定語(yǔ)修飾teenager。freshly只有與過(guò)去分詞連用時(shí)才表示recently
5.
去掉who或?qū)itting改為sat
6.
more改為much
修飾強(qiáng)調(diào)比較級(jí)better
7.
classrooms改為classroom
classroom在此處是名詞作定語(yǔ)修飾skill，不能用復(fù)數(shù)
8.
mine后加had
過(guò)去分詞grown不能單獨(dú)作謂語(yǔ)，并且需要表示出在過(guò)去的過(guò)去“我的技能早已生銹”
9.
what改為how
write后已有賓語(yǔ)，應(yīng)用how表示方式
10.
or改為and