control the talking pace and time 應該和to indicate a change of topic并列，作為conversational traffic signal 的定語，也要用動詞不定式。To be called beautiful is thought to name something essential to women’s character and concerns. (In contrast by men whose __1__ essence is to be strong, or effective, or competent.) It does not need someone in the throes of feminist awareness to perceive that __2__ the way women are taught to be involved in beauty encourages __3__ narcissism, reinforces independence and immaturity. Everybody knows __4__ that. For it is “everybody”, a whole society, which has identified __5__ being feminine with caring about how one looks. Giving these __6__ stereotypes, it is no wonder that beauty enjoys, at best, a rather mixed reputation.
It is not, of course, the desire to be beautiful is wrong but the __7__ obligation to be. Women are taught to see their bodies in parts, and to assess each part separately. Breasts, feet, hips, waistline, neck, __8__ eyes, nose, complexion, hair, and so on – each by turn is submitted __9__ to an anxious scrutiny. Even if some pass the scrutiny, some will always be found wanted. Nothing less than perfection will do. __10__
答案：
1.by改為 to/with。詞組 in contrast to/ with 表示“與……相比”，不能用其他介詞。
2. need改為take。雖然need的漢語意思是“需要”，但英語中It takes 往往作為一個固定搭配，表示“做某事需要某物或者某種品質(zhì)”。
3.in改為with。be involved in 表示“介入，參與”，后面一般跟事。而 be involved with 則表示“和……有關(guān)系，有關(guān)聯(lián)”，后面一般跟人。
如： He was involved in a car accident.
I never wanted to get emotionally involved with him.
4.independence改為dependence。
5.which改為that。句子的主干是 it is…that…表示強調(diào)。
6.giving改為given。given 一詞后面接名詞詞組可表示“考慮到，鑒于…”。
7.beautiful 后面加that。此句同樣也是一個強調(diào)句型，后面須跟that引導的從句。
8.assess改為evaluate。assess往往指對某物在金錢上的價值進行權(quán)威的評估。
如： We should assess an apartment on the amount for which it is likely to be rented.
本句話指每一個平常的女性對自己身體的每一部分進行評判，評價，應該用evaluate，因為該詞表示對事物的本質(zhì)或價值進行判斷，如：Teachers evaluate a student’s thesis for content and organization.
9.by改為in。by turns 表示“交替地，輪番地 ”。 in turn 表示一系列動作按照一定順序發(fā)生，或者某人先后做某事。根據(jù)題意，這里要用in turn。
10. wanted改為wanting。to find something or somebody wanting 表示“（某物或某人）缺乏應有的素質(zhì)，不夠格”。wanted往往指“被通緝”或者“被愛，被照顧的”。
It is not, of course, the desire to be beautiful is wrong but the __7__ obligation to be. Women are taught to see their bodies in parts, and to assess each part separately. Breasts, feet, hips, waistline, neck, __8__ eyes, nose, complexion, hair, and so on – each by turn is submitted __9__ to an anxious scrutiny. Even if some pass the scrutiny, some will always be found wanted. Nothing less than perfection will do. __10__
答案：
1.by改為 to/with。詞組 in contrast to/ with 表示“與……相比”，不能用其他介詞。
2. need改為take。雖然need的漢語意思是“需要”，但英語中It takes 往往作為一個固定搭配，表示“做某事需要某物或者某種品質(zhì)”。
3.in改為with。be involved in 表示“介入，參與”，后面一般跟事。而 be involved with 則表示“和……有關(guān)系，有關(guān)聯(lián)”，后面一般跟人。
如： He was involved in a car accident.
I never wanted to get emotionally involved with him.
4.independence改為dependence。
5.which改為that。句子的主干是 it is…that…表示強調(diào)。
6.giving改為given。given 一詞后面接名詞詞組可表示“考慮到，鑒于…”。
7.beautiful 后面加that。此句同樣也是一個強調(diào)句型，后面須跟that引導的從句。
8.assess改為evaluate。assess往往指對某物在金錢上的價值進行權(quán)威的評估。
如： We should assess an apartment on the amount for which it is likely to be rented.
本句話指每一個平常的女性對自己身體的每一部分進行評判，評價，應該用evaluate，因為該詞表示對事物的本質(zhì)或價值進行判斷，如：Teachers evaluate a student’s thesis for content and organization.
9.by改為in。by turns 表示“交替地，輪番地 ”。 in turn 表示一系列動作按照一定順序發(fā)生，或者某人先后做某事。根據(jù)題意，這里要用in turn。
10. wanted改為wanting。to find something or somebody wanting 表示“（某物或某人）缺乏應有的素質(zhì)，不夠格”。wanted往往指“被通緝”或者“被愛，被照顧的”。