Our obsession with thinness is also fueled by health concerns.It is true that in this country we have more overweighted people __1__ than ever before, and that, in many cases, being over weight correlates an increased risk of heart and blood vessel disease. __2__ These diseases, therefore, may have as much to do with our __3__ way of life and our high-fat diets as with excessive weight. And __4__ the associate risk of cancer in the digestive system may be more __5__ about a dietary problem—too much fat and a lack of fiber than a __6__ weight problem.The real concern, then, is not that we weigh too much, but that we neither exercise enough or eat well. Exercise is necessary __7__ for strong bones and both heart and lung health. A balanced diet
without a lot of fat can also help the body avoid many diseases.We should surely stop paying so much attention on weight. __8__ Simply being thin is not enough. It is actually hazardy if those who __9__ get(or already are) thin think they are automatically healthy and thus free from paying attention to their overall life-style. Thinness can be purely vainglory. __10__
1.overweighted改為overweight overweight本身就可以做形容詞修飾people，不需要加ed。
2.correlates后加with.Correlate應(yīng)與with連用，表示“A與B有關(guān)聯(lián)”。
3.therefore改為however.從上下文來看，這里是轉(zhuǎn)折而不是因果。
4.excessive改為excess.excess往往指數(shù)量上超過所需，多余。excessive 往往有不贊同，否定的含義在里面，另外，excessive除了可以表示數(shù)量以外還可以表示程度，表達抽象概念。比如After cooking fish, pour off the excess fat.The government says that local authority spending is excessive.
5.associate 改為associated.associated 表示“關(guān)聯(lián)的，相關(guān)的”。
6.about改為of.這里的意思是“與之相關(guān)的消化系統(tǒng)患癌癥的危險實際上是飲食問題引起的，而非體重問題” ，about意思為“相關(guān)的”，這里應(yīng)該為of，表性質(zhì)。
7.or改為nor.neither應(yīng)和nor連用表示兩者皆否定，而not才和or連用。
8.on改為to
9.hazardy改為hazardous.hazard的形容詞是hazardous而不是hazardy。
10.purely改為pure
without a lot of fat can also help the body avoid many diseases.We should surely stop paying so much attention on weight. __8__ Simply being thin is not enough. It is actually hazardy if those who __9__ get(or already are) thin think they are automatically healthy and thus free from paying attention to their overall life-style. Thinness can be purely vainglory. __10__
1.overweighted改為overweight overweight本身就可以做形容詞修飾people，不需要加ed。
2.correlates后加with.Correlate應(yīng)與with連用，表示“A與B有關(guān)聯(lián)”。
3.therefore改為however.從上下文來看，這里是轉(zhuǎn)折而不是因果。
4.excessive改為excess.excess往往指數(shù)量上超過所需，多余。excessive 往往有不贊同，否定的含義在里面，另外，excessive除了可以表示數(shù)量以外還可以表示程度，表達抽象概念。比如After cooking fish, pour off the excess fat.The government says that local authority spending is excessive.
5.associate 改為associated.associated 表示“關(guān)聯(lián)的，相關(guān)的”。
6.about改為of.這里的意思是“與之相關(guān)的消化系統(tǒng)患癌癥的危險實際上是飲食問題引起的，而非體重問題” ，about意思為“相關(guān)的”，這里應(yīng)該為of，表性質(zhì)。
7.or改為nor.neither應(yīng)和nor連用表示兩者皆否定，而not才和or連用。
8.on改為to
9.hazardy改為hazardous.hazard的形容詞是hazardous而不是hazardy。
10.purely改為pure