漢譯英最易翻錯(cuò)的句子(4)

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16. 我的學(xué)習(xí)很忙。
    [誤] My study is very busy.
    [正] I am very busy with my study.
    注:第一句譯文完全套用漢語(yǔ)的結(jié)構(gòu)和語(yǔ)序,卻犯了英文的句法錯(cuò)誤。因?yàn)樵谟⒄Z(yǔ)中,study(學(xué)習(xí))是一個(gè)行為,并不懂得忙不忙,感到忙的應(yīng)是進(jìn)行這一行為的人。所以,be busy with sth. 或 be busy (in) doing sth. 才是地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)。
    17. 給他當(dāng)二把手我看也值得。他太能干了。
    [誤] I feel it worth being a second hand to him. He is so capable.
    [正] I feel it worth playing second fiddle to him. He is so capable.
    注:英語(yǔ)的 second hand 作名詞指“中間人”、“舊貨”或“助手工人”,而漢語(yǔ)的“二把手”是“副手”,即“第二負(fù)責(zé)人”的意思,所以二者不是一回事。play second fiddle 則源于管弦樂(lè)隊(duì)中第一提琴手(first violin)不在的時(shí)候由第二提琴手負(fù)責(zé),并被人們引申為“當(dāng)主要領(lǐng)導(dǎo)人的副手”,也就是我們所說(shuō)的“當(dāng)?shù)诙咽帧?。由此,不難猜出“當(dāng)一把手”譯成英語(yǔ)應(yīng)該是 paly first fiddle了。
    18. 電車(chē)上十分擁擠,幾乎沒(méi)有立足之地。
    [誤] The tram was so crowded that there was hardly sufficient room for you.
    [正] The tram was so crowded that there was scarcely sufficient room for you.
    注:副詞 hardly 和 scarcely 雖然都含有“幾乎不”等否定含義,有些時(shí)候也可以互換,如:I could hardly/scarcely recognize her(我?guī)缀跽J(rèn)不出她來(lái)了),但仍有細(xì)微的差異。如在強(qiáng)調(diào)數(shù)量“不足”時(shí)只能用 scarcely,這時(shí)它常與 enough、sufficient等詞連用。
    19. 他被戴上了綠帽子。
    [誤] He is made to wear a green hat.
    [正] He is a cuckold.
    注:中文的“戴綠帽子”是指某人之妻與他人私通,但直譯成英文西方人只會(huì)按字面意思理解為“某人頭上被戴了頂綠色的帽子”,無(wú)論如何也不會(huì)理解漢語(yǔ)的喻義。而英語(yǔ)的 cuckold 是指“*婦的丈夫”(a man whose wife deceives him by having a sexual relationship with another man),所以用 be a cuckold 才能正確表達(dá)原文的意思。
    20. 我在新聞片里看到你站在總裁的身旁。
    [誤] I saw you stand by the president in the newsreel.
    [正] I saw you stand beside the president in the newsreel.
    注:stand by someone 的意思是“支持某人”(to support someone);to stand beside someone 才是“立于某人旁邊”(to stand by the side of someone)。但是,如果 stand by 后面的賓語(yǔ)不是人,那倒是可以與 stand beside 互換,表示“在...之旁”,例如:Their house stands by a forest(他們的房子在森林旁邊)。除此之外,stand by 還有“袖手旁觀(guān)”之意,例如:How can you stand by and watch while your allies are attacked?(當(dāng)你們的盟友受到攻擊時(shí),你們?cè)跄苄涫峙杂^(guān)呢?)