Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of application for a MBA program in Columbia University. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1． 介紹你目前所學(xué)專業(yè)；
2． 介紹個(gè)人特長愛好以及性格；
3． 說明為什么申請?jiān)撔５腗BA.
●審題概述●
這是一封留學(xué)申請信。要提供申請人的個(gè)人資歷，寫明申請學(xué)校和所學(xué)專業(yè)以及申請的理由。
「范文」
Dear Sir,
①I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in the MBA program in your university.
My name is Li Ming, and I am an ①undergraduate student of Marketing in Nanjing University. During the last four years, I have been studying hard and also working hard for the Students' Union. I am careful to ②keep a balance between study and ③extracurricular activities. I have won from the University various scholarships for my good study and my efficient Student's Union work.
I'm interested in business and wish I could ①further my study overseas. I choose Columbia University because you have a long history and enjoy a good reputation in this field. I believe my interests are extremely ②congruent with the strengths of your school, and my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評：
直接表明要申請的專業(yè)
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
①I am writing in the hope that：申請信常用句式
◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評：
個(gè)人情況簡介
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
①undergraduate：意為“大學(xué)生”
②keep a balance between：意為“保持平衡”
③extracurricular activities：意為“課外活動(dòng)”
◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評：
說明申請?jiān)撔５脑?BR> ◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
①further：意為“促進(jìn)，進(jìn)一步”
②congruent with：意為“適合的，適當(dāng)?shù)摹?BR>
1． 介紹你目前所學(xué)專業(yè)；
2． 介紹個(gè)人特長愛好以及性格；
3． 說明為什么申請?jiān)撔５腗BA.
●審題概述●
這是一封留學(xué)申請信。要提供申請人的個(gè)人資歷，寫明申請學(xué)校和所學(xué)專業(yè)以及申請的理由。
「范文」
Dear Sir,
①I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in the MBA program in your university.
My name is Li Ming, and I am an ①undergraduate student of Marketing in Nanjing University. During the last four years, I have been studying hard and also working hard for the Students' Union. I am careful to ②keep a balance between study and ③extracurricular activities. I have won from the University various scholarships for my good study and my efficient Student's Union work.
I'm interested in business and wish I could ①further my study overseas. I choose Columbia University because you have a long history and enjoy a good reputation in this field. I believe my interests are extremely ②congruent with the strengths of your school, and my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評：
直接表明要申請的專業(yè)
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
①I am writing in the hope that：申請信常用句式
◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評：
個(gè)人情況簡介
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
①undergraduate：意為“大學(xué)生”
②keep a balance between：意為“保持平衡”
③extracurricular activities：意為“課外活動(dòng)”
◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評：
說明申請?jiān)撔５脑?BR> ◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
①further：意為“促進(jìn)，進(jìn)一步”
②congruent with：意為“適合的，適當(dāng)?shù)摹?BR>