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Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous 76. _____
Mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77. _____
Was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. _____
the mountain, the three of them were very excited. As we 79. _____
climbed the mountain, we ed monkeys, visiting temples 80. _____
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 81._____
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82. _____
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83. _____
of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 84. _____
good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85. _____
head touched the pillow.
答案與簡析：
76. famous前加上a。 （名詞數(shù)）。 77. 正確 78. we前面加when，引導(dǎo)一個時間狀語從句。（句子成分多分析） 79. them→us （邏輯錯誤須關(guān)注） 80. visiting→visited（非謂動詞細(xì)辨別） 81. picture→pictures（名詞數(shù)） 82. passes→passed（動詞形） 83. 去掉down（習(xí)慣用法要記?。?84. and→but（but, and, or和so） 85. 去掉at（句子成分多分析 / 習(xí)慣用法要記住）。
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous 76. _____
Mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77. _____
Was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. _____
the mountain, the three of them were very excited. As we 79. _____
climbed the mountain, we ed monkeys, visiting temples 80. _____
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 81._____
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82. _____
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83. _____
of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 84. _____
good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85. _____
head touched the pillow.
答案與簡析：
76. famous前加上a。 （名詞數(shù)）。 77. 正確 78. we前面加when，引導(dǎo)一個時間狀語從句。（句子成分多分析） 79. them→us （邏輯錯誤須關(guān)注） 80. visiting→visited（非謂動詞細(xì)辨別） 81. picture→pictures（名詞數(shù)） 82. passes→passed（動詞形） 83. 去掉down（習(xí)慣用法要記?。?84. and→but（but, and, or和so） 85. 去掉at（句子成分多分析 / 習(xí)慣用法要記住）。