考生必備:托福寫作常見病句分析(五)

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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. 改進: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.
    42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
    改進: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
    43. They will learn the bad habits.
    改進: They will develop bad habits.
    44. In this continued process, people make progress.
    改進: In this cycle, people make progress.
    45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
    改進: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
    46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
    改進: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
    47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
    改進: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
    48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
    改進: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
    49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.
    改進: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.
    50. I felt alone.
    改進: I felt lonely