恩波巨獻(xiàn):08年6月英語四級作文考前

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(一)
    Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Letter of Apology. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
    1. 表達(dá)自己對晚交論文一事的歉意。
    2. 說明未能按時交論文的原因。
    3. 表示自己將盡快把論文補(bǔ)交上并表示以后將按時交作業(yè)。
    ●審題概述●
    這是一封道歉信,寫的時候要遵循道歉信的一般模式:開篇直奔主題,然后說明原因,最后提出可能的補(bǔ)救措施。第一段,對晚交論文及對此造成的后果表示歉意;第二段,說明理由(可信的理由,而不是隨便應(yīng)付老師的借口);第三段,表示盡快完成論文。
    【范文】
    A Letter of Apology
    Dear Mr. Wang,
    ①I am writing to apologize for my late homework. The paper which you have ②assigned to us last Monday was ③due this Friday, but to my regret, I haven’t even started it yet. I feel really sorry for not handing in the paper on time and ④for the inconvenience it would bring to you.
    I have caught a serious cold last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was very cold these days. Therefore, I couldn’t go to the library to get the necessary ①referential information which was needed for my paper. As a result of this, I have not started writing the paper yet and could not hand it in on time.
    Fortunately I have finally fully recovered. I will finish the paper as soon as I can and ①try my best to hand in homework on time in the future. 
    Sincerely yours,
    Li Ming
    ◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評:
    表明歉意
    ◇語言點(diǎn)提示:
    ① I am writing to apologize (say sorry) for :道歉信的常用開頭句式
    ② assign: 分配,指定,布置
    ③ due;到期的,預(yù)期的
    ④ I’m sorry for the inconvenience it would bring to you: 另一句常用句式
    ◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評:
    解釋原因,雖然不是真的給人道歉,但是理由還是要充分的好。
    ◇語言點(diǎn)提示:
    ① referential: 用作參考的
    ◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評:
    表明盡快完成論文,并表示以后會按時交論文
    ◇語言點(diǎn)提示:
    ① try my best to….. in the future: 道歉信常用結(jié)尾
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    (二)
    Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of
    Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
    1. 有些人認(rèn)為收入差距的存在是合理的;
    2. 有些人認(rèn)為收入差距的存在是不合理的
    3. 收入差距對社會的影響
    ●審題概述●
    議論文,根據(jù)題目要求文章可分為三點(diǎn):收入差距的合理性;收入差距的不合理性;對社會的影響。在敘述第一、二點(diǎn)時,可適當(dāng)?shù)氐恼归_一兩個小點(diǎn)。注意各點(diǎn)之間的銜接,以及論證的邏輯。
    ● 范文●
    Income Gap
    ○1There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it ○2reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. ○3In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high ○4efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay.
    ○1On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they ○2risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is ○3another point to ○4back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction
    that they obtain from work.
    ○1As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may ○2motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too
    wide, however, our government should make some policies to ○3get rid of its negative consequences.
    ◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評:
    收入差距的合理性
    ◇語言點(diǎn)提示:
    ○1 There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接點(diǎn)題
    ○2 reflect 意為“反映”
    ○3 in one’s view 意為“在某人看來”(分析觀點(diǎn)時常用詞組)
    ○4 efficiency 意為“效率”
    ◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評:
    收入差距的不合理性
    ◇語言點(diǎn)提示
    ○1On the other hand:意為“另一點(diǎn)、另一方面”(提出相反觀點(diǎn),與上文銜接)
    ○2risk doing something 意為“冒險做某事”
    ○3another point: 提出另一小點(diǎn)
    ○4back up 意為“支持”
    ◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評:
    收入差距的影響
    ◇語言點(diǎn)提示
    ○1As anything has two sides, so…... 議論文常用句式
    ○2motivate:意為“激勵,刺激”
    ○3get rid of:意為“擺脫,除去”