Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice of College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below:
1）各大學(xué)在假期都會組織學(xué)生參加各種社會實(shí)踐活動
2）這些活動給大學(xué)生帶來了哪些好處
3）參加社會實(shí)踐活動應(yīng)該注意些什么
Social Practice of College Students
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析這種現(xiàn)象帶來的好處，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求指出注意事項，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：概述大學(xué)生社會實(shí)踐活動及其主要內(nèi)容;分析社會實(shí)踐活動給大學(xué)生帶來的好處;指出大學(xué)生參加社會實(shí)踐應(yīng)該注意些什么。
高分范文
Social Practice of College Students
Nowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities. During the holidays, more and more students choose to [1]be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. It's obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in China's college education.
[2]Undoubtedly, college students have [3]benefited a lot from social practice. [4]Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside the campus. [4]Moreover, in social practice activities, students can [5]apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems. So their practical skills are improved greatly. [4]Besides, social practice helps [6]strengthen students' sense of social responsibility.
[7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice. [4]However, social practice may bring some problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study. [4]Therefore, we should try to [8]balance the relationship between social practice and study.
亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評
[1]平行結(jié)構(gòu)。alike意為“類似的”，作后置定語。
[2]“毫無疑問”，副詞使用恰當(dāng)。
[3]“從…中受益很多”。
[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[5]“把知識運(yùn)用到解決實(shí)際問題中”。
[6]“加強(qiáng)社會責(zé)任感”。
[7]用于得出結(jié)論。considering用作介詞，意為“考慮到，鑒于”。
[8]“平衡…之間的關(guān)系”。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：More and more students choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other activities alike.
臨摩：參加社交活動、結(jié)識新人和結(jié)交新朋友是新生融入大學(xué)生活的有效辦法。
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2.佳句：Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice.
臨摩：毫無疑問，閱讀經(jīng)典書籍使人們受益匪淺。
3.佳句：Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice.
臨摩：鑒于這些情況，義務(wù)教育必須被強(qiáng)制執(zhí)行。
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KEY:
1. To take part in social activities, meet new people and make new friends are effective ways for freshmen to get on with college life.
2. There is no doubt that people have benefited a lot from reading classics.
3.Considering the situation, it is necessary to enforce the compulsory education.
1）各大學(xué)在假期都會組織學(xué)生參加各種社會實(shí)踐活動
2）這些活動給大學(xué)生帶來了哪些好處
3）參加社會實(shí)踐活動應(yīng)該注意些什么
Social Practice of College Students
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析這種現(xiàn)象帶來的好處，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求指出注意事項，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：概述大學(xué)生社會實(shí)踐活動及其主要內(nèi)容;分析社會實(shí)踐活動給大學(xué)生帶來的好處;指出大學(xué)生參加社會實(shí)踐應(yīng)該注意些什么。
高分范文
Social Practice of College Students
Nowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities. During the holidays, more and more students choose to [1]be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. It's obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in China's college education.
[2]Undoubtedly, college students have [3]benefited a lot from social practice. [4]Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside the campus. [4]Moreover, in social practice activities, students can [5]apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems. So their practical skills are improved greatly. [4]Besides, social practice helps [6]strengthen students' sense of social responsibility.
[7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice. [4]However, social practice may bring some problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study. [4]Therefore, we should try to [8]balance the relationship between social practice and study.
亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評
[1]平行結(jié)構(gòu)。alike意為“類似的”，作后置定語。
[2]“毫無疑問”，副詞使用恰當(dāng)。
[3]“從…中受益很多”。
[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[5]“把知識運(yùn)用到解決實(shí)際問題中”。
[6]“加強(qiáng)社會責(zé)任感”。
[7]用于得出結(jié)論。considering用作介詞，意為“考慮到，鑒于”。
[8]“平衡…之間的關(guān)系”。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：More and more students choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other activities alike.
臨摩：參加社交活動、結(jié)識新人和結(jié)交新朋友是新生融入大學(xué)生活的有效辦法。
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2.佳句：Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice.
臨摩：毫無疑問，閱讀經(jīng)典書籍使人們受益匪淺。
3.佳句：Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice.
臨摩：鑒于這些情況，義務(wù)教育必須被強(qiáng)制執(zhí)行。
___________________________________________________________________________.
KEY:
1. To take part in social activities, meet new people and make new friends are effective ways for freshmen to get on with college life.
2. There is no doubt that people have benefited a lot from reading classics.
3.Considering the situation, it is necessary to enforce the compulsory education.