法則一： 多運用動詞和主動語態(tài)
作為文章的編寫者，你主要的任務(wù)是把你想說的用文字的方式傳達(dá)給你的讀者。為了達(dá)到這個目的，你可以多使用動詞和主動語態(tài)來為你的文章增加生命力。 例如；
在文章中把一個主要的名詞換成動詞
例1 Verb to be: the use of leaf blowers before 8 am is a violation of local noise abatement laws.
Action verb: the use of leaf blowers before 8 am violates local noise abatement laws.
用一個動詞來替代句子中的其中一個重要的名詞或形容詞
例2 Verb to be: The quarterback’s wretched performance was a disgrace to his team
Action verb: The quarterback’s wretched performance humiliated his team
如果你不知道該如何更改動詞，可以重新整理語句形式
例3 Verb to be: Jamie was happy to be part of the all-star soccer team.
Action verb: Being a part of the all-star soccer team thrilled Jamie.
以上的例子已經(jīng)解析了，運用動詞可以是句子更具生動性，也更能吸引讀者的眼球。
主動語態(tài)
例4 Passive Voice: the main idea for my essay was stated as the first sentence in the first paragraph.
Active Voice: I stated the main idea of my essay in the first sentence in the first paragraph.
例5 Passive voice: money for the new recreation building was raised quickly
Active voice: the recreation committee quickly raised money for the new building.
動詞和主動語態(tài)練習(xí)題 （運用動詞修改以下句子）
1. The completion of the homework assignment was immensely pleasing to Tori.
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2. Laughing and joking was heard from the sailor as they scrubbed the decks of the ship.
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3. A study of the life cycles of various South American monkeys was made by the zoologists.
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4. since Liz was pursuing her goal to be a physician, all her spare time was spent studying
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5. The sounds that were made by the ghosts in the haunted house were frightening to me.
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參考答案
1. Tori completed the homework assignment, to her immense pleasure.
2. The sailors laughed and joked as they scrubbed the decks of the ship.
3. The zoologists studied the life cycles of various South American monkeys.
4. Liz pursued her goal to be a physician by spending all her spare time studying.
5. The sounds of the ghosts in the haunted house frightened me.
作為文章的編寫者，你主要的任務(wù)是把你想說的用文字的方式傳達(dá)給你的讀者。為了達(dá)到這個目的，你可以多使用動詞和主動語態(tài)來為你的文章增加生命力。 例如；
在文章中把一個主要的名詞換成動詞
例1 Verb to be: the use of leaf blowers before 8 am is a violation of local noise abatement laws.
Action verb: the use of leaf blowers before 8 am violates local noise abatement laws.
用一個動詞來替代句子中的其中一個重要的名詞或形容詞
例2 Verb to be: The quarterback’s wretched performance was a disgrace to his team
Action verb: The quarterback’s wretched performance humiliated his team
如果你不知道該如何更改動詞，可以重新整理語句形式
例3 Verb to be: Jamie was happy to be part of the all-star soccer team.
Action verb: Being a part of the all-star soccer team thrilled Jamie.
以上的例子已經(jīng)解析了，運用動詞可以是句子更具生動性，也更能吸引讀者的眼球。
主動語態(tài)
例4 Passive Voice: the main idea for my essay was stated as the first sentence in the first paragraph.
Active Voice: I stated the main idea of my essay in the first sentence in the first paragraph.
例5 Passive voice: money for the new recreation building was raised quickly
Active voice: the recreation committee quickly raised money for the new building.
動詞和主動語態(tài)練習(xí)題 （運用動詞修改以下句子）
1. The completion of the homework assignment was immensely pleasing to Tori.
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2. Laughing and joking was heard from the sailor as they scrubbed the decks of the ship.
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3. A study of the life cycles of various South American monkeys was made by the zoologists.
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4. since Liz was pursuing her goal to be a physician, all her spare time was spent studying
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5. The sounds that were made by the ghosts in the haunted house were frightening to me.
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參考答案
1. Tori completed the homework assignment, to her immense pleasure.
2. The sailors laughed and joked as they scrubbed the decks of the ship.
3. The zoologists studied the life cycles of various South American monkeys.
4. Liz pursued her goal to be a physician by spending all her spare time studying.
5. The sounds of the ghosts in the haunted house frightened me.