Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)現(xiàn)在很多大學生都喜歡追求
2)產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么
3)你如何看待這一現(xiàn)象
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點要求談談“我”對該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內(nèi)容：描述目前熱衷于大學生追求的現(xiàn)象;分析大學生熱衷的原因;闡述“我”對大學生追求的看法并提出建議。
高分范文
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.
[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.
[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.
【亮點點評】
[1]“有…傾向”。
[2]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、意義連貫。
[3] follow表示“跟隨，追求(趨勢或時尚)”
[4]用于引出原因。
[5]which引導非限制性定語從句。
[6] it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。
[7]“遠遠超出他們的消費能力”。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。
[8]強調(diào)句型，此處是強調(diào)主語。not…but連接并列成分。
[9]“而不是”。
佳句臨摹
1. 佳句：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.
臨?。簩Υ髮W生來說，了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。
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2. 佳句：In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.
臨?。涸谑澜缟匣蛟S沒有什么游戲像賭博
像賭博的那么有害和危險了，它經(jīng)常會導致一個人破產(chǎn)，還會玷污人的心靈。
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3. 佳句：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.
臨?。汉芏嗤瑢W經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費時間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。
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【KEY】
1. It is quite necessary for college students to get to know the world outside the campus.
2. In the world on other game is as harmful and dangerous as gambling, which often makes one bankrupt and pollutes one’s mind.
3. Many students often play on-line games, which is a waste of time rather than a beneficial way of relaxation.
四六級考前，一定要許愿哦!
1)現(xiàn)在很多大學生都喜歡追求
2)產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么
3)你如何看待這一現(xiàn)象
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點要求談談“我”對該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內(nèi)容：描述目前熱衷于大學生追求的現(xiàn)象;分析大學生熱衷的原因;闡述“我”對大學生追求的看法并提出建議。
高分范文
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.
[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.
[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.
【亮點點評】
[1]“有…傾向”。
[2]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、意義連貫。
[3] follow表示“跟隨，追求(趨勢或時尚)”
[4]用于引出原因。
[5]which引導非限制性定語從句。
[6] it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。
[7]“遠遠超出他們的消費能力”。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。
[8]強調(diào)句型，此處是強調(diào)主語。not…but連接并列成分。
[9]“而不是”。
佳句臨摹
1. 佳句：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.
臨?。簩Υ髮W生來說，了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。
___________________________________________________________________________
2. 佳句：In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.
臨?。涸谑澜缟匣蛟S沒有什么游戲像賭博
像賭博的那么有害和危險了，它經(jīng)常會導致一個人破產(chǎn)，還會玷污人的心靈。
___________________________________________________________________________
3. 佳句：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.
臨?。汉芏嗤瑢W經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費時間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。
___________________________________________________________________________
【KEY】
1. It is quite necessary for college students to get to know the world outside the campus.
2. In the world on other game is as harmful and dangerous as gambling, which often makes one bankrupt and pollutes one’s mind.
3. Many students often play on-line games, which is a waste of time rather than a beneficial way of relaxation.
四六級考前，一定要許愿哦!