托福寫作指導(dǎo):托福綜合寫作考試高分經(jīng)驗(yàn)

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很多初次接觸托??荚嚨膶W(xué)生總是非常擔(dān)心寫作的綜合寫作部分,也就是我們說的小作文。他們常提出這樣的疑問:“怎么考得這么變態(tài)???讀了又聽再寫!”其實(shí)大家完全不必為此如此焦慮,等看完下面的文章,讀完下面的四大必殺技,我相信你一定會(huì)豁然開朗!
    首先,summarize,也就是概括閱讀和聽力文章的主要內(nèi)容和各三個(gè)分論點(diǎn)。這其實(shí)就是Introduction要寫的內(nèi)容,掌握了概括,第一段就不成問題咯!
    其次,Paraphrase,也就是改寫。掌握好了改寫句子,你寫起文章來將會(huì)感覺到如魚得水,游刃有余。
    改寫其實(shí)主要有下面的兩種方法:
    第一,使用不同的詞匯
    a.使用同義詞,比如以下的一些寫作高頻詞匯的同義詞,你一定要掌握,出現(xiàn)的尤為頻繁。
    important→essential, crucial, vital, significant,
    think→claim, believe, consider, deem, figure out
    nowadays→currently, at present, now, recently, in recent years,these days
    b.改變?cè)~性,這是一種稍微難一些的方法,要求你的語法基礎(chǔ)非常好,你才能靈活自如的運(yùn)用。
    n. → v.
    Eg:When we look at a comparison between Aand B…
    When we compare A and B…
    Adj. → n.
    There are a variety of solutions to the problem.
    There are various solutions to the problem.
    c. 使用不同的承接詞。承接詞在文章當(dāng)中的使用相當(dāng)頻繁,不僅是段落和段落的連接,還包括句子和句子的連接。背住一些常用的承接詞比你的改寫將會(huì)有極大的作用。
    because of → due to, owing to, because, as, since, for
    but → however, nevertheless, nonetheless, whereas
    so→ therefore, hence, thus, consequently
    d.形容詞的逆向表達(dá)。在某些形容詞上進(jìn)行修改,會(huì)達(dá)到非比尋常的效果。
    Eg: not as easyas…→more difficult than…
    Not uncommon→common
    Thecheapest → the least expensive
    第二,使用不同的句型
    a. 改變?cè)~序。這是非常簡(jiǎn)單的一種方法,完全不用動(dòng)腦筋就可以進(jìn)行改寫。常常將句子中的狀語(包括狀語從句)換位置。
    Eg: For manyyears, people have believed ….
    →People believed… for many years.
    After this programs has been solved, work on … can continue.
    b. 主動(dòng)語態(tài)和被動(dòng)語態(tài)的互相替換Eg: Trained scientists performed this research.
    →This research was performed by trained scientists.
    c. 使用“there be” 句型,可以將一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句,馬上變成一個(gè)加入定語從句或者分詞的復(fù)雜句。Eg: Severalcomputer programs can be used to solve this problem.
    →There areseveral computer programs that can be used to solve this problem.或There areseveral computer programs used to solve this problem.
    d.定語從句,分詞和插入語的互相替換
    Eg: Study…, conducted by sociologists in 2004,shows that…
    →Study…, which was conducted by sociologists in 2004,shows that…
    Eg: This…, which is one of the most powerful … in theworld, has…
    →This…, one of the most powerful… in the world, has… 
    接下來,Cite,即引用。綜合寫作乃客觀寫作,只是一個(gè)旁觀者的角度對(duì)這兩篇文章的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述,因此,某觀點(diǎn)是出自哪篇文章一定要說清楚。所以,下面的這些句型在綜合寫作中必不可缺。
    a.According to+noun.
    Eg: According to thepassage/lecture/author/professor,…
    b.Subject+verbs of reporting+that clause
    Eg: The authortells/reports/suggests/explains/says/argues/states/indicates/claims/pointsout/thinks/believes that…
    或The speakeragrees/disagrees/rejects/disputes/challenges/takes a different view….
    c. As is indicated/displayed/illustrated in thepassage/lecture,...  
    最后,Synthesize,也就是連接。具體來講,就是承接詞的使用是相當(dāng)重要的,將文章當(dāng)中的重要信息連接起來,體現(xiàn)作者對(duì)于兩篇文章的理解正確,說明作者的思路清楚。由于綜合寫作是對(duì)兩篇文章的比較,所以下面表對(duì)比和遞進(jìn)的承接詞使用的最頻繁。
    a.Transitional words showing contrast: however, on the other hand,in contrast, on the contrary
    b.Transitional words showingaddition: moreover, furthermore, in addition, besides, as well
    現(xiàn)在,是不是感覺清晰很多了呢?也沒有那么懼怕綜合寫作了呢?我相信,只要你掌握了上述四大技巧,綜合寫作對(duì)你來說將不再是個(gè)難以跨越的關(guān)口。