比較型作文之8分作文
比較型作文一般分為說(shuō)明式比較和議論式比較兩種。說(shuō)明式比較在比較過(guò)程中,作者不發(fā)表個(gè)人意見(jiàn),在文中不體現(xiàn)個(gè)人取向,單純以說(shuō)明介紹為目的。
在四、六級(jí)考試中的比較型作文多以議論式比較的形式出現(xiàn)。議論式比較以比較事物優(yōu)劣、闡明自己立場(chǎng)為目的,一般分為傾向型和中立型兩種類型。
一、傾向型比較論說(shuō)文
1.、首段 = 引言+ 主題句
引言句(第一句):引出比較的對(duì)象
主題句(第二句):提出主題,明確表明作者的個(gè)人取向與偏好。
2、主體部分
對(duì)比點(diǎn)的筆墨分配:應(yīng)有所側(cè)重,對(duì)于作者持否定態(tài)度的事物的優(yōu)勢(shì)要少寫(xiě),而肯定的事物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)則要多用筆墨,對(duì)于其缺點(diǎn)則可輕描淡寫(xiě)、一筆帶過(guò)。
3、結(jié)尾段 = 呼應(yīng)主題句 + 強(qiáng)調(diào)被肯定事物的積極作用等
第一句:呼應(yīng)主題句
第二句:可以用一句話歸納被肯定事物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)等。
結(jié)尾段 = 讓步句 + 呼應(yīng)主題句
第一句:以讓步的口吻,提出被否定事物的一個(gè)小優(yōu)點(diǎn)
第二句:筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn),用一句話歸納并突出被肯定事物的重大優(yōu)點(diǎn),進(jìn)一步確定自己的選擇,與主題句相互照應(yīng)。
二、中立型比較論說(shuō)文
首段和主體部分與傾向型比較論說(shuō)文相同,而結(jié)尾段一般采用簡(jiǎn)化總結(jié)模式:
結(jié)尾段 = 呼應(yīng)主題句 + 一句話總結(jié)
第一句:呼應(yīng)主題句
第二句:總結(jié)所比較對(duì)象最突出的優(yōu)點(diǎn),可用while,whereas 連接
萬(wàn)能模板:
傾向型
1. 有人認(rèn)為大學(xué)住宿應(yīng)該獨(dú)處一室 2.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該與同學(xué)合住 3.我的觀點(diǎn)
It is often difficult for ______ to decide whether A or B . In my opinion, A is always better.
Some students don't like B . First, they think ______ because ______. Second, _______. Third,_________.
The incomparable advantage of A is that ___________. First,___________. Second,________ .Third,________.
I regard A as a precious opportunity for it is the best way of ___________. And I confidently believe that _______.
中立型
1.有人喜歡鄉(xiāng)村生活 2.有人喜歡都市生活 3.我的觀點(diǎn)
Those who prefer A have their own reasons,while some other people prefer B . As for me ,both A and B have merits and demerits.
First and foremost,__________. Moreover, ____________. Last but not least, _______.
On the contrary _________. In addition,___________. What’s the commonest,________
Either ___________ or a _______gives _________ .I believe__________
引出不同觀點(diǎn):
1、 People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… . However, others believe that…. 人們對(duì)…的觀點(diǎn)因人而異.有些人認(rèn)為….. 然而其他人卻認(rèn)為...
2、 People may have different opinions on… 人們對(duì)…可能會(huì)有不同的見(jiàn)解.
3、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人們對(duì)待吸毒的態(tài)度因人而異.
4、There are different opinions among people as to… 關(guān)于…. 人們的觀點(diǎn)大不相同.
5、Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 對(duì)(失敗)人們的態(tài)度各不相同.
結(jié)尾:
1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有這些因素加以考慮,我們自然會(huì)得出結(jié)論…
2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考慮所有這些因素,我們可能會(huì)得出合理的結(jié)論…
3、Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我們得出這樣的結(jié)論…
4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫無(wú)疑問(wèn),跳槽有優(yōu)點(diǎn)也有缺點(diǎn).
5、All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
總之,我們沒(méi)有…是無(wú)法生活的.但同時(shí),我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來(lái)對(duì)付可能出現(xiàn)的新問(wèn)題.
比較型連接詞:like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.
比較型常用句型:
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.
2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...
4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that...
5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
6.Like anything else, it has its faults.
7.A and B has several points in common.
8.A bears some resemblances to B.
9.However, the same is not applicable to B.
10. A and B differ in several ways.
11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.
12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.
13. The same is true of B.
14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.
15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ...
四六級(jí)考試加分句型:
1. It作先行主語(yǔ)和先行賓語(yǔ)的一些句型。 She had said what it was necessary to say.
2. 強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。 It is not who rules us that is important, but how he rules us.
3. "All+抽象名詞"或"抽象名詞+itself"(very+形容詞)。 He was all gentleness to her.
4. 利用詞匯重復(fù)表示強(qiáng)調(diào)。 A crime is a crime a crime.
5. "something(much)of"和"nothing(little)of"
"something of"相當(dāng)于"to some extent",表示程度。在疑問(wèn)句或條件從句中,則為"anything of",可譯為"有點(diǎn)","略微等。""譯為毫無(wú)","全無(wú)"。"much of"譯為"大有","not much of"可譯為"算不上","稱不上","little of"可譯為"幾乎無(wú)"。something like譯為"有點(diǎn)像,略似。"
They say that he had no university education, but he seems to be something of a scholar.
比較型作文一般分為說(shuō)明式比較和議論式比較兩種。說(shuō)明式比較在比較過(guò)程中,作者不發(fā)表個(gè)人意見(jiàn),在文中不體現(xiàn)個(gè)人取向,單純以說(shuō)明介紹為目的。
在四、六級(jí)考試中的比較型作文多以議論式比較的形式出現(xiàn)。議論式比較以比較事物優(yōu)劣、闡明自己立場(chǎng)為目的,一般分為傾向型和中立型兩種類型。
一、傾向型比較論說(shuō)文
1.、首段 = 引言+ 主題句
引言句(第一句):引出比較的對(duì)象
主題句(第二句):提出主題,明確表明作者的個(gè)人取向與偏好。
2、主體部分
對(duì)比點(diǎn)的筆墨分配:應(yīng)有所側(cè)重,對(duì)于作者持否定態(tài)度的事物的優(yōu)勢(shì)要少寫(xiě),而肯定的事物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)則要多用筆墨,對(duì)于其缺點(diǎn)則可輕描淡寫(xiě)、一筆帶過(guò)。
3、結(jié)尾段 = 呼應(yīng)主題句 + 強(qiáng)調(diào)被肯定事物的積極作用等
第一句:呼應(yīng)主題句
第二句:可以用一句話歸納被肯定事物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)等。
結(jié)尾段 = 讓步句 + 呼應(yīng)主題句
第一句:以讓步的口吻,提出被否定事物的一個(gè)小優(yōu)點(diǎn)
第二句:筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn),用一句話歸納并突出被肯定事物的重大優(yōu)點(diǎn),進(jìn)一步確定自己的選擇,與主題句相互照應(yīng)。
二、中立型比較論說(shuō)文
首段和主體部分與傾向型比較論說(shuō)文相同,而結(jié)尾段一般采用簡(jiǎn)化總結(jié)模式:
結(jié)尾段 = 呼應(yīng)主題句 + 一句話總結(jié)
第一句:呼應(yīng)主題句
第二句:總結(jié)所比較對(duì)象最突出的優(yōu)點(diǎn),可用while,whereas 連接
萬(wàn)能模板:
傾向型
1. 有人認(rèn)為大學(xué)住宿應(yīng)該獨(dú)處一室 2.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該與同學(xué)合住 3.我的觀點(diǎn)
It is often difficult for ______ to decide whether A or B . In my opinion, A is always better.
Some students don't like B . First, they think ______ because ______. Second, _______. Third,_________.
The incomparable advantage of A is that ___________. First,___________. Second,________ .Third,________.
I regard A as a precious opportunity for it is the best way of ___________. And I confidently believe that _______.
中立型
1.有人喜歡鄉(xiāng)村生活 2.有人喜歡都市生活 3.我的觀點(diǎn)
Those who prefer A have their own reasons,while some other people prefer B . As for me ,both A and B have merits and demerits.
First and foremost,__________. Moreover, ____________. Last but not least, _______.
On the contrary _________. In addition,___________. What’s the commonest,________
Either ___________ or a _______gives _________ .I believe__________
引出不同觀點(diǎn):
1、 People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… . However, others believe that…. 人們對(duì)…的觀點(diǎn)因人而異.有些人認(rèn)為….. 然而其他人卻認(rèn)為...
2、 People may have different opinions on… 人們對(duì)…可能會(huì)有不同的見(jiàn)解.
3、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人們對(duì)待吸毒的態(tài)度因人而異.
4、There are different opinions among people as to… 關(guān)于…. 人們的觀點(diǎn)大不相同.
5、Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 對(duì)(失敗)人們的態(tài)度各不相同.
結(jié)尾:
1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有這些因素加以考慮,我們自然會(huì)得出結(jié)論…
2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考慮所有這些因素,我們可能會(huì)得出合理的結(jié)論…
3、Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我們得出這樣的結(jié)論…
4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫無(wú)疑問(wèn),跳槽有優(yōu)點(diǎn)也有缺點(diǎn).
5、All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
總之,我們沒(méi)有…是無(wú)法生活的.但同時(shí),我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來(lái)對(duì)付可能出現(xiàn)的新問(wèn)題.
比較型連接詞:like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.
比較型常用句型:
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.
2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...
4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that...
5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
6.Like anything else, it has its faults.
7.A and B has several points in common.
8.A bears some resemblances to B.
9.However, the same is not applicable to B.
10. A and B differ in several ways.
11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.
12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.
13. The same is true of B.
14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.
15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ...
四六級(jí)考試加分句型:
1. It作先行主語(yǔ)和先行賓語(yǔ)的一些句型。 She had said what it was necessary to say.
2. 強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。 It is not who rules us that is important, but how he rules us.
3. "All+抽象名詞"或"抽象名詞+itself"(very+形容詞)。 He was all gentleness to her.
4. 利用詞匯重復(fù)表示強(qiáng)調(diào)。 A crime is a crime a crime.
5. "something(much)of"和"nothing(little)of"
"something of"相當(dāng)于"to some extent",表示程度。在疑問(wèn)句或條件從句中,則為"anything of",可譯為"有點(diǎn)","略微等。""譯為毫無(wú)","全無(wú)"。"much of"譯為"大有","not much of"可譯為"算不上","稱不上","little of"可譯為"幾乎無(wú)"。something like譯為"有點(diǎn)像,略似。"
They say that he had no university education, but he seems to be something of a scholar.