業(yè)：（以下為一篇11分范文，請(qǐng)練習(xí)按要求改寫成漂亮的14分作文）
There is used tobe heated discussion over whether cooperation is more essential than competition. As for me , both of them are important.
要求：1、糾正is used to be 誤用
2、把常用的“be +形容詞”的結(jié)構(gòu)改寫為動(dòng)態(tài)動(dòng)詞作謂語的句子。
Firstly,each person is a member of the society. And several tasks need the cooperation of all the members of a group.You must perform your own tasks carefully.Keep pace with your classmates or colleagues and listen to others' suggestions helps you succeed in the end
要求：
1、把藍(lán)色粗體第一句改為使用明喻的句子；
2、把need 改為動(dòng)態(tài)動(dòng)詞作謂語的句子；
3、用平行結(jié)構(gòu)合并、改寫粉色詞匯的句子
4、糾正最后一句中主謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤；
5、糾正最后一句中的動(dòng)詞原形作主語的錯(cuò)誤；
However,being competitive also has a place in life. As a member of the group, if we want to achieve more and be better than others, you must pay much more efforts, working harder or studying more diligently.Moreover,we should have the competitive spirit and adapt ourselves to competition.
要求：糾正指代不一致的問題
In a word , we must learn to be both cooperative and competitive in order to succeed in lift. What we need to learn are when to be cooperative and when to be competitive.
要求：糾正藍(lán)色粗體句中主謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤。
參考答案：
There used to be heated discussion over whether cooperation is more essential than competition. As for me , the importance of cooperation and competition equals.
Firstly,each person is like a screw of the machine. And several tasks call for the cooperation of all the members of a group.You must perform your own tasks carefully.Keeping pace with your classmates or colleagues and listening to others' suggestions help you succeed in the end
However,being competitive also has a place in life. As a member of the group, if you want to achieve more and be better than others, you must pay much more efforts, working harder or studying more diligently.Moreover,you should have the competitive spirit and adapt yourselt to competition.
In a word , we must learn to be both cooperative and competitive in order to succeed in lift. What we need to learn is when to be cooperative and when to be competitive.
There is used tobe heated discussion over whether cooperation is more essential than competition. As for me , both of them are important.
要求：1、糾正is used to be 誤用
2、把常用的“be +形容詞”的結(jié)構(gòu)改寫為動(dòng)態(tài)動(dòng)詞作謂語的句子。
Firstly,each person is a member of the society. And several tasks need the cooperation of all the members of a group.You must perform your own tasks carefully.Keep pace with your classmates or colleagues and listen to others' suggestions helps you succeed in the end
要求：
1、把藍(lán)色粗體第一句改為使用明喻的句子；
2、把need 改為動(dòng)態(tài)動(dòng)詞作謂語的句子；
3、用平行結(jié)構(gòu)合并、改寫粉色詞匯的句子
4、糾正最后一句中主謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤；
5、糾正最后一句中的動(dòng)詞原形作主語的錯(cuò)誤；
However,being competitive also has a place in life. As a member of the group, if we want to achieve more and be better than others, you must pay much more efforts, working harder or studying more diligently.Moreover,we should have the competitive spirit and adapt ourselves to competition.
要求：糾正指代不一致的問題
In a word , we must learn to be both cooperative and competitive in order to succeed in lift. What we need to learn are when to be cooperative and when to be competitive.
要求：糾正藍(lán)色粗體句中主謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤。
參考答案：
There used to be heated discussion over whether cooperation is more essential than competition. As for me , the importance of cooperation and competition equals.
Firstly,each person is like a screw of the machine. And several tasks call for the cooperation of all the members of a group.You must perform your own tasks carefully.Keeping pace with your classmates or colleagues and listening to others' suggestions help you succeed in the end
However,being competitive also has a place in life. As a member of the group, if you want to achieve more and be better than others, you must pay much more efforts, working harder or studying more diligently.Moreover,you should have the competitive spirit and adapt yourselt to competition.
In a word , we must learn to be both cooperative and competitive in order to succeed in lift. What we need to learn is when to be cooperative and when to be competitive.