高分作文造句原則Ｂ

英語造句時(shí)，不應(yīng)使用不必要的詞。只要意思得到完全表達(dá)，那么所用的詞應(yīng)該是越少越好。
    原句：In China, some cities are seriously polluted, and some cities are being polluted.
    優(yōu)化：In China, some cities are seriously polluted, some being polluted.
    原句：She likes collecting stamps which is her hobby.
    優(yōu)化：Collecting stamps is her hobby.
    原句：Gone with the wind was a good film which I enjoyed watching very much.
    優(yōu)化：I enjoyed watching Gone with the wind very much