2010.8.21——8.31 GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng) AA篇
AA4 The argument was about a paragraph from a restaurant business newsletter about small franchise restaurants.
A small restaurant owner, George, opened a pita restaurant in a college town Sallon. His restaurant has been quite successful for the last 2 years. So he decided to open another 3 restaurants in nearby cities and towns. He also plans to promote his 3 employees who have been trained under him to be the managers of the new restaurants. He expects his profits will trip after all restaurants are opened.
AA5 The following appeared in an article in the health section of a newspaper.
“There is a common misconception that university hospitals are better than community or private hospitals. This notion is unfounded, however: the university hospitals in our region employ 15 percent fewer doctors, have a 20 percent lower success rate in treating patients, make far less overall profit, and pay their medical staff considerably less than do private hospitals. Furthermore, many doctors at university hospitals typically divide their time among teaching, conducting research, and treating patients. From this it seems clear that the quality of care at university hospitals is lower than that at other kinds of hospitals.”
提綱：
1. 從一個醫(yī)院的情況就推廣到整個太草率
2. 治愈率低可能是因為接受的患者得的病都比較罕見等原因造成的
3. 工資低，總體利潤低，時間分配給教學(xué)都不能一定說明質(zhì)量差?？赡芷渌＠?，接受的病人少，教學(xué)研究有助于進(jìn)步
1. 首先，醫(yī)生的人數(shù)與質(zhì)量之間沒有必然的因果原因。profit跟質(zhì)量也無關(guān)系。很可能treating price is significantly lower。
2. 成功率不能說明問題。缺乏其他的證據(jù)，忽略了他因：比如因為質(zhì)量高，所以很多serious illness的，而送往其他醫(yī)院的一般都是common cases.
3. 時間不能代表問題。因為那些醫(yī)生所做的研究很可能幫助他們進(jìn)行治療。
AA4 The argument was about a paragraph from a restaurant business newsletter about small franchise restaurants.
A small restaurant owner, George, opened a pita restaurant in a college town Sallon. His restaurant has been quite successful for the last 2 years. So he decided to open another 3 restaurants in nearby cities and towns. He also plans to promote his 3 employees who have been trained under him to be the managers of the new restaurants. He expects his profits will trip after all restaurants are opened.
AA5 The following appeared in an article in the health section of a newspaper.
“There is a common misconception that university hospitals are better than community or private hospitals. This notion is unfounded, however: the university hospitals in our region employ 15 percent fewer doctors, have a 20 percent lower success rate in treating patients, make far less overall profit, and pay their medical staff considerably less than do private hospitals. Furthermore, many doctors at university hospitals typically divide their time among teaching, conducting research, and treating patients. From this it seems clear that the quality of care at university hospitals is lower than that at other kinds of hospitals.”
提綱：
1. 從一個醫(yī)院的情況就推廣到整個太草率
2. 治愈率低可能是因為接受的患者得的病都比較罕見等原因造成的
3. 工資低，總體利潤低，時間分配給教學(xué)都不能一定說明質(zhì)量差?？赡芷渌＠?，接受的病人少，教學(xué)研究有助于進(jìn)步
1. 首先，醫(yī)生的人數(shù)與質(zhì)量之間沒有必然的因果原因。profit跟質(zhì)量也無關(guān)系。很可能treating price is significantly lower。
2. 成功率不能說明問題。缺乏其他的證據(jù)，忽略了他因：比如因為質(zhì)量高，所以很多serious illness的，而送往其他醫(yī)院的一般都是common cases.
3. 時間不能代表問題。因為那些醫(yī)生所做的研究很可能幫助他們進(jìn)行治療。