Volunteer Work, Harmoniass Would
韓葉
江蘇省張家港市張家港外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校高三3班
Have you ever guided a passenger losing his or her way? Have you ever donate your pocket monkey to strangers suffering disasters? Have you ever kept a homeless ouimal? If your ouswer is ‘Yes’, then congratulations you have done volunteer work.
To my mind you do need to exactly join a certain organization form is not important. Volunteer work means the work we want to do to help others out of our hearts withostconsidering whether it is renording. To sum up, sympathy, sacrifice passion and warm hearts make up volunteer work. And volunteer work really makes the world better.
Firstly, as far as individuals are concerned, volunteer work makes them take responsibilities for the society. Nowadays, most families have only one child. And the late 90s are considered to be a settish useless generation. However, one of my friends says that volunteen work made me mature. He was one of the volunteers of Beijing Olympic Ganes. He gained patience, stung will and an open mind through all the tough work. And now he understands that: ‘One should hever gain without payling.’
Secondly, to the society it is also signifigant. With volunteer work, people facing difficulties are helped, poor people are financidly asisted, so that the frinction will be reduced and the interpersonal relationships will be improved. How a harmonious society will it be! There is a couple living in Beijing. They began the in volunteer work when they were only college students. They went to a medical center to take care of and play with children there once a week. Neither wind nor snow stopped them. However, one sunday in 2007 they didn't appear. And the reason ness that, the girl got cancer! The bay kept on going to the center on Sunday while taking cane of his girlfriend and working for medical expenses. The doctors ses and the childnes were touched deeply. Their story was published and the douation came soon. At the same time, more people went to help children there. In this way, their spirit transferred. Their volursteer work was paid back to them selves, which was hever inagined by them. Their sympathy waked up others'.
Laste I firmly believe that a nation full of helpful respousible people is surely a strong one a world full of spirit of symporthy and devotion is surely a beautiful one. I call on all people to do volunteer work, whatever it is, whatever the form it is in, just do it and we can harvest a harmonious world together!
專家建議:
有一定英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)感,但不是很強(qiáng),中式英語(yǔ)有時(shí)還會(huì)出現(xiàn),建議多讀些英文原著,或看一些優(yōu)秀范文,抓住里面的經(jīng)典句型,自己多多練習(xí)。
專家點(diǎn)評(píng):
文章以及疑問(wèn)句開頭,步步引出主題,很吸引人。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,語(yǔ)言表達(dá)比較準(zhǔn)確,但句式變化不多,有些句子結(jié)構(gòu)不緊湊。