托??谡ZTask1、Task2、Task3實(shí)例賞析

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復(fù)習(xí)計劃-----具體情況具體分析
    我所負(fù)責(zé)的客戶的復(fù)習(xí)規(guī)劃時間長短不一,大多數(shù)是在2-3月之間,當(dāng)然凡事都有例外,也有極個別的客戶復(fù)習(xí)跨度為5-6個月,或者是另外一個極端20天,針對這兩種情況,前者我建議不要過早地投入高密度的復(fù)習(xí)中,那樣會使自己過早產(chǎn)生厭倦感,到真正考試前一個鋁朔炊岵黃鵓窶?,蕦?shí)悶浞?!而针对后諗]頤竊蛞斕墩堵衣?,不要灾k鍪裁醋ㄏ鈦盜罰度?00%的精神好好地做5-8套Delta/Klaplan/OG模擬試題才為上上之策,然后更重要的是做完后認(rèn)真分析模擬題,把它吃透嘍!
    今天我所列舉的這幾道實(shí)例的托友就屬于上面的第二種情況,看過他的初步測試題后,我驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)這位仁兄的口語部分Task4- Task6都掌握得不錯,反而是屬于personal reference的Task1- Task3中的錯誤相對較多!而且在語音、語調(diào)、流利程度方面也存在些問題,我在想這難道就是所謂的“遇強(qiáng)則強(qiáng)遇弱則弱”,哈哈,再次感慨世界真奇妙!那么大家就一起來分析借鑒一下吧!
    實(shí)例1
    Choose a place you go to often that is important to you and explain why it is important. Please include specific details in your explanation.
    Sample answer
    The place I often go to that is important to me is school. I spend most of my time in school. I study in school and I love with other classmates. This is most favorite important that school brings to me. I not only study knowledge at school, but also learn how to be a good person. I live with other friends, live in group and how to treat others. This is useful in my lifetime.
    解析
    1、W: I love with other classmates.
    R: I love to be with other classmates.
    2、W: This is most favorite important that school brings to me.
    R: That is the joy of living which school brings to me.
    說明:這位托友要表達(dá)的是這是學(xué)校所帶給我的生活樂趣,他通過把一系列的形容詞堆砌在一塊來表達(dá),這種方法是錯誤的!
    3、W: I live with other friends, live in group and how to treat others.
    R: I can develop/ cultivate the team spirit and improve the capacity of interpersonal communication through communicating with my classmates.
    說明:這位托友要表達(dá)的是通過與同學(xué)、朋友相處讓其學(xué)會了怎么和別人相處而且培養(yǎng)了自己的團(tuán)隊(duì)精神,但是他的表述還是顯得詞不達(dá)意!
    實(shí)例2
    Some college students choose to take courses in a variety of subject areas in order to get a broad education. Others choose to focus on a single subject area in order to have a deeper understanding of that area. Which approach to course selection do you think is better for students and why?   Sample answer
    A varies of subject courses is better for college students. Because it may make the college students to be an independent and complete person, but not a professor in one subject. Those knowledge might be for useful use in lifetime.
    解析
    (1)W: A varies of subject courses is better for college students.
    R: To study a variety of subject courses is better for college students.
    說明:托友要表達(dá)的意思是掌握多學(xué)科的知識對大學(xué)生有益!故第一句的表達(dá)是錯誤的,這種初級的語法錯誤是極其不可取得!
    (2) W: Because it may make the college students to be independent complete person, but not a professor in one subject.
    R: It makes students to acquire/ grasp a great deal of knowledge on different subjects, not just well informed about one subject.
    (3)W: Those knowledge might be for useful use in lifetime.
    R: Extensive knowledge does good to them throughout their lives.
    說明:如上面2和3解析,這位托友完全是采用中國式英語的表達(dá),或者是把自己所想的對應(yīng)翻譯成英文,并不是用英文思維來構(gòu)思表達(dá)。