2012上半年英語四級作文范文及點評(文都版)
四級寫作這次還是出得沒什么新意，還是結合生活的細節(jié)事情來命題，考“過度包裝”。其實徐可風認為這也怪不了命題的兄弟，畢竟四六級的命題也就是那些套路了，用多了，自然就很難再創(chuàng)新了。“過度包裝”這種現(xiàn)象可風倒是常?？吹?，例如朋友中秋送的月餅啊，那月餅盒包裝得比無比奢華，比骨灰盒還奢華。
命題還是按照“描述現(xiàn)象”“分析原因”“建議措施”這老掉牙的三板斧，盡管老套，那也是“斧斧”生輝。(突然看到韓國再次扣押我國漁船的新聞，先鄙視一下)考前的YY里已經把的方式給了大家，就照寫吧(佛祖會保佑信文都的孩子的！)。昨天微博(新浪，騰訊)再次針對具體寫作的思路內容給出了建議，不負眾望，也有部分內容命中。
下面徐可風就結合考前YY給出的模式，加上考前徐可風微博(新浪，騰訊)的預測內容，按照四級閱卷要求，寫一份符合四級閱卷要求的的考場參考文章，以供參考。關注文都關注徐可風的童鞋，在看這篇文章時，相信你會有似曾相似的感覺的。WenDu blesses you!
On Excessive Packaging
① Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over excessive packaging in our country。
② It is known to all that excessive packaging has negative influences on consumers。
③ And people would turn pale at the very mention of excessive packaging。
① There are many reasons why excessive packaging emerges, but in general, they come down to three major ones。
② For one thing, I argue, Chinese consumers care more about packaging than product itself。
③ For another, the packaging often represents the quality of product, so the manufacturer is eager to do excessive packaging。
④ But the prime reason is perhaps that the department concerned turns a blind eye to this irrational phenomenon。
① In regard to this problem, steps should be taken to minimize it。
② The first thing we should do is to emphasize product's quality over its packaging。
③ Another thing we can do is to strengthen the supervision on excessive packaging。
④ In addition, the Weibo is one of the most effective media that remind consumers to spend reasonably。
四級寫作這次還是出得沒什么新意，還是結合生活的細節(jié)事情來命題，考“過度包裝”。其實徐可風認為這也怪不了命題的兄弟，畢竟四六級的命題也就是那些套路了，用多了，自然就很難再創(chuàng)新了。“過度包裝”這種現(xiàn)象可風倒是常?？吹?，例如朋友中秋送的月餅啊，那月餅盒包裝得比無比奢華，比骨灰盒還奢華。
命題還是按照“描述現(xiàn)象”“分析原因”“建議措施”這老掉牙的三板斧，盡管老套，那也是“斧斧”生輝。(突然看到韓國再次扣押我國漁船的新聞，先鄙視一下)考前的YY里已經把的方式給了大家，就照寫吧(佛祖會保佑信文都的孩子的！)。昨天微博(新浪，騰訊)再次針對具體寫作的思路內容給出了建議，不負眾望，也有部分內容命中。
下面徐可風就結合考前YY給出的模式，加上考前徐可風微博(新浪，騰訊)的預測內容，按照四級閱卷要求，寫一份符合四級閱卷要求的的考場參考文章，以供參考。關注文都關注徐可風的童鞋，在看這篇文章時，相信你會有似曾相似的感覺的。WenDu blesses you!
On Excessive Packaging
① Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over excessive packaging in our country。
② It is known to all that excessive packaging has negative influences on consumers。
③ And people would turn pale at the very mention of excessive packaging。
① There are many reasons why excessive packaging emerges, but in general, they come down to three major ones。
② For one thing, I argue, Chinese consumers care more about packaging than product itself。
③ For another, the packaging often represents the quality of product, so the manufacturer is eager to do excessive packaging。
④ But the prime reason is perhaps that the department concerned turns a blind eye to this irrational phenomenon。
① In regard to this problem, steps should be taken to minimize it。
② The first thing we should do is to emphasize product's quality over its packaging。
③ Another thing we can do is to strengthen the supervision on excessive packaging。
④ In addition, the Weibo is one of the most effective media that remind consumers to spend reasonably。