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文都版:12月英語四級作文真題及點評
Education Pay
What is shown in the chart above is that those people with high degree earn more than those with lower. For example, staff with master’s degree receive a better payment than those with bachelor’s degree, according to a survey of the payment to the employee. These survey indicates that education degree does have a relationship with earnings, contrary to the recent theory of useless education.
Recently, there is a heated discussion about the significance of the education. Some people hold a view that higher education is useless since college education cannot mesh with the social needs. Some think that higher education is indispensable if you want to go far in both your studies and life. Now that survey has proved which part is wiser.
As for me, I definitely support the view that education is necessary for people’s life. Reading can not only make me survive well in this society with fierce competition but also help me make sense of life. I pursue for it for my whole life.
2012年12月英語四級作文點評（文都教育版）如下：
學術造假academic cheating主要可以談談它的危害，在表述過程中高分作文與低分作文主要在于以下方面的區(qū)別：1 內容是否具體；2 表達是否地道。
內容方面，切忌空話套話，這點必然會導致閱卷者痛恨。表達不要片面追求句子的長度，我們追求的應該是“地道”的英語。
例如這個關于academic cheating危害的段落可以在內容上寫，這樣做會損害學習積極性dampen the learning initiative。進而在內容上拔高，這樣做還會損害了社會的公平性，阻礙社會的發(fā)展 be injurious to the fairness of society and baffle social progress.
所以整個段落可以這樣布局：
For my part, the harmfulness of academic cheating can be summarized in the following respects. For one thing, such illegal behavior is bound to dampen our learning initiative . For another thing, academic cheating must be injurious to the fairness of society and, in turn, baffle social progress.