I had a good weekend.
On Saturday morning,I did my homework and studied .On Sauurday (Saturday)afternoon, I played
the volleyball with my friends. It was a little difficult (After that, I was a little tired.).on the night(in the evening),I watched tv(TV) and
played(played some games. play一般不單獨使用。) .
On Sunday morning,I went to the library,I read a(an) interested(interesting) book. On Sund(Sunday) afternoon(,)
I went shopping. On Sungay night(Sunday evening) , I cleaned my room.
點評：1、全文的時態(tài)都用過去時，很好。2、有一些拼寫錯誤，不夠細(xì)心。3、全文的句式比較簡單單調(diào)，要想得高分，還是要多用一些不同句式。4、文章內(nèi)容不夠豐富，在周末做的這么多事情中，您可以選擇一兩件詳細(xì)描寫，這樣就不會有記流水賬的感覺。5、但是作為小學(xué)生，能寫出這樣已經(jīng)不錯了，繼續(xù)加油。
On Saturday morning,I did my homework and studied .On Sauurday (Saturday)afternoon, I played
the volleyball with my friends. It was a little difficult (After that, I was a little tired.).on the night(in the evening),I watched tv(TV) and
played(played some games. play一般不單獨使用。) .
On Sunday morning,I went to the library,I read a(an) interested(interesting) book. On Sund(Sunday) afternoon(,)
I went shopping. On Sungay night(Sunday evening) , I cleaned my room.
點評：1、全文的時態(tài)都用過去時，很好。2、有一些拼寫錯誤，不夠細(xì)心。3、全文的句式比較簡單單調(diào)，要想得高分，還是要多用一些不同句式。4、文章內(nèi)容不夠豐富，在周末做的這么多事情中，您可以選擇一兩件詳細(xì)描寫，這樣就不會有記流水賬的感覺。5、但是作為小學(xué)生，能寫出這樣已經(jīng)不錯了，繼續(xù)加油。