2013年6月大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考試作文真題及答案(1)

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "A smile is the shortest distance between two people". You may cite some examples to support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
    難度:
    典型的諺語(yǔ)警句型的文章,相比其他三篇難度低很多,諺語(yǔ)本身非常好理解,并且是用諺語(yǔ)警句模板套用的一篇。
    思路:
    第一段:開(kāi)篇引用+表義(微笑縮短了人與人的距離)+深意(生活中,我們應(yīng)該微笑面對(duì)他人)
    第二段:正能量(微笑的魔力,比如可以讓我們交到更多朋友,可以化解尷尬,對(duì)于商家來(lái)說(shuō)微笑可以帶來(lái)更多商機(jī)等,還可反面論證一下,沒(méi)有了微笑, 生活就會(huì)失去溫暖和色彩,等等)+舉例(必須要舉例!題目要求了??梢詫懩称髽I(yè)微笑服務(wù)取得成功,或者你自己參加面試因?yàn)槲⑿λ垣@得面試官認(rèn)可等)
    第三段:再次強(qiáng)調(diào)微笑的重要性+我們自己具體應(yīng)該怎么做
    范文:
    A smile, as the proverb has it, is the shortest distance between two people. In other words, a smile could serve as a bridge to connect two people and shorten the distance between two hearts. Simple as the remark may sound, it conveys a thought-provoking notion that we should always be friendly and polite to other people.
    First and foremost,a smile proves to be the most effective way to break the ice between two strangers. In addition, being warm-hearted and friendly could promote mutual understanding and friendship. Those who always wear a warm smile are sure to be more popular than those who treat others with coldness and indifference. Zhu Dan is a case in point. She is said to practice smiling in front of the mirror for hours everyday before walking up onto the stage. Finally, she becomes one of the most famous hostesses in China.
    To conclude, nothing can be more effective than a warm smile in bringing people closer. Hence, it is advisable for people to open their mind and treat others with sincerity and warmth. Only in this way can we win more friends.