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下面是美國的一個中學(xué)生Catherine給你寫的一封信。請你根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容寫一封110詞左右的回信，內(nèi)容必須包括：
1． 對她的感謝作出符合英美習(xí)慣的禮貌答復(fù)；
2． 回答她提出的問題；
3． 你的愿望和再次邀請。
International Community School
Washington State
The USA
April 6, 2010
Dear Luo Lin,
I’m writing to express my thanks to you and your parents for your great kindness and help during my stay at your home while in China to join in the Chinese Bridge activities. It was a very good time that I’ll never forget. Besides, your beautiful campus as well as the students’ high spirits in study are also deeply impressed in my memory. Can you tell me why you work so hard at your lessons? And how do you usually relax yourselves after study?
Welcome to my home in Washington State some day.
Give my best regards to your parents!
Affectionately yours, Catherine
寫作指導(dǎo)
完成本文的寫作，可分以下三步走：
一、審題。可從體裁、內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)三方面進行審題，同時有必要明確統(tǒng)籌全篇的主要時態(tài)。
1、體裁。寫作要求是根據(jù)來信寫一封回信，所以其體裁是書信，在就要求我們首先有熟悉書信的基本格式；
2、內(nèi)容?；匦诺奶攸c就是根據(jù)來函內(nèi)容作出必要的答復(fù)，同時恰當?shù)乇磉_自己的情感和其他想說的話。這里，必須答復(fù)是“Why you work so hard at your lessons？”和“How do you usually relax yourselves after study?”同時還應(yīng)禮節(jié)性地向?qū)Ψ奖硎靖兄x、問候以及再次熱情地邀請等內(nèi)容；
3、結(jié)構(gòu)。一般說來，中學(xué)英語寫作多采用兩段或三段式（再多了就顯得繁復(fù)雜亂），后者多用于議論文等體裁。根據(jù)來信的內(nèi)容，除前后呼語和謙稱之外，本篇寫作可采用兩段式：第一段表達感謝，表述友情，再度表示歡迎；第二段回答來信中的提問；
4、時態(tài)。與其他故事情節(jié)的敘述一樣，英文書信內(nèi)容的時態(tài)遵循這樣的原則：（1）當敘舊或純粹談?wù)摪l(fā)生在過去的事時，用一般過去時態(tài)，例如在Catherine來信中的第二句，而非謂語動詞則用完成式表發(fā)生在過去的事，例如I’m glad to have received your letter this morning.；（2）表達一般的沒有時間限制的思想情感交流等，則用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，例如Catherine來信中的第三句后的內(nèi)容；當然表述未來將發(fā)生的事情，則用一般將來時；（3）學(xué)生在書信中易犯的錯誤有，重復(fù)來信講述的自己要做或要求你做的事時常誤用過去時態(tài)，如*You said you would come next week. 這里應(yīng)該說You say you’ll come next week. 又如，*You asked if I could find a school in China for me to study in. 一般說來，由于所談的事還沒過去，所以通常應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，包括本篇回信中對本校學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)情況的介紹等。另外，整篇文章在邏輯（不是形式）關(guān)系上，要始終注意保持時態(tài)一致。
二、構(gòu)思。根據(jù)上面的審題，可先大致勾勒出文章中的主要句子，明確需要用到的主要詞語和表達。
1、第一段，對Catherine的感謝和欣喜之情作出相應(yīng)的回應(yīng)，可包括下面的句式和內(nèi)容：
(1) I’m very glad that you feel it a good time to stay in my family during your stay in China for the Chinese Bridge activities.
(2) It’s very kind of you to praise my family for the little we did for you.
(3) I expect you to come to China again.
2、第二段，回答Catherine信中的提問，可包括下面的句式和內(nèi)容：
(4) we’re living a happy school life
(5) because we know we’re studying for our own future as well as for our country
(6) we sometimes feel tired after hard work, so we often take some sports and games after study to relax ourselves or take part in some campus interest groups activities.
三、寫作。用適當?shù)倪^渡詞和關(guān)聯(lián)詞語，將上述主要內(nèi)容和句子連接起來，便成了一篇比較令人滿意的回信和優(yōu)秀的書面表達（見參考范文）。
參考范文
Dear Catherine,
Thanks for your letter. I’m very glad that you feel it a good time to stay in my family during your stay in China for the Chinese Bridge activities. It’s very kind of you to praise my family for the little we did for you. I, on behalf of my parents, sincerely expect you to come to China again.
As you know, we’re living a happy school life. We are all in high spirits in study because we know we’re studying for our own future as well as for our country, but actually we sometimes feel tired after hard work, so we often take some sports and games after study to relax ourselves, or take part in some campus interest groups activities.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Luo Lin
亮點評析
范文用平實而流暢的語言表達了作者對收到來信的欣喜之情和對來信人的感謝之意，并
第2/3頁
緊接著向?qū)Ψ桨l(fā)出了再次來中國訪問的邀請，在情感展現(xiàn)的邏輯關(guān)系上適時而恰到好處；接著用一個方式狀語從句As you know便引出了對來函要求了解的問題的答復(fù)，過渡自然簡練，同時回答也簡明扼要，且真實可信。結(jié)束的謙稱分別用了Best wishes和Yours sincerely，符合通信人之間的關(guān)系和身份，十分貼切，整體上給人一種駕輕就熟和輕松自然的感覺。
下面是美國的一個中學(xué)生Catherine給你寫的一封信。請你根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容寫一封110詞左右的回信，內(nèi)容必須包括：
1． 對她的感謝作出符合英美習(xí)慣的禮貌答復(fù)；
2． 回答她提出的問題；
3． 你的愿望和再次邀請。
International Community School
Washington State
The USA
April 6, 2010
Dear Luo Lin,
I’m writing to express my thanks to you and your parents for your great kindness and help during my stay at your home while in China to join in the Chinese Bridge activities. It was a very good time that I’ll never forget. Besides, your beautiful campus as well as the students’ high spirits in study are also deeply impressed in my memory. Can you tell me why you work so hard at your lessons? And how do you usually relax yourselves after study?
Welcome to my home in Washington State some day.
Give my best regards to your parents!
Affectionately yours, Catherine
寫作指導(dǎo)
完成本文的寫作，可分以下三步走：
一、審題。可從體裁、內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)三方面進行審題，同時有必要明確統(tǒng)籌全篇的主要時態(tài)。
1、體裁。寫作要求是根據(jù)來信寫一封回信，所以其體裁是書信，在就要求我們首先有熟悉書信的基本格式；
2、內(nèi)容?；匦诺奶攸c就是根據(jù)來函內(nèi)容作出必要的答復(fù)，同時恰當?shù)乇磉_自己的情感和其他想說的話。這里，必須答復(fù)是“Why you work so hard at your lessons？”和“How do you usually relax yourselves after study?”同時還應(yīng)禮節(jié)性地向?qū)Ψ奖硎靖兄x、問候以及再次熱情地邀請等內(nèi)容；
3、結(jié)構(gòu)。一般說來，中學(xué)英語寫作多采用兩段或三段式（再多了就顯得繁復(fù)雜亂），后者多用于議論文等體裁。根據(jù)來信的內(nèi)容，除前后呼語和謙稱之外，本篇寫作可采用兩段式：第一段表達感謝，表述友情，再度表示歡迎；第二段回答來信中的提問；
4、時態(tài)。與其他故事情節(jié)的敘述一樣，英文書信內(nèi)容的時態(tài)遵循這樣的原則：（1）當敘舊或純粹談?wù)摪l(fā)生在過去的事時，用一般過去時態(tài)，例如在Catherine來信中的第二句，而非謂語動詞則用完成式表發(fā)生在過去的事，例如I’m glad to have received your letter this morning.；（2）表達一般的沒有時間限制的思想情感交流等，則用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，例如Catherine來信中的第三句后的內(nèi)容；當然表述未來將發(fā)生的事情，則用一般將來時；（3）學(xué)生在書信中易犯的錯誤有，重復(fù)來信講述的自己要做或要求你做的事時常誤用過去時態(tài)，如*You said you would come next week. 這里應(yīng)該說You say you’ll come next week. 又如，*You asked if I could find a school in China for me to study in. 一般說來，由于所談的事還沒過去，所以通常應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，包括本篇回信中對本校學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)情況的介紹等。另外，整篇文章在邏輯（不是形式）關(guān)系上，要始終注意保持時態(tài)一致。
二、構(gòu)思。根據(jù)上面的審題，可先大致勾勒出文章中的主要句子，明確需要用到的主要詞語和表達。
1、第一段，對Catherine的感謝和欣喜之情作出相應(yīng)的回應(yīng)，可包括下面的句式和內(nèi)容：
(1) I’m very glad that you feel it a good time to stay in my family during your stay in China for the Chinese Bridge activities.
(2) It’s very kind of you to praise my family for the little we did for you.
(3) I expect you to come to China again.
2、第二段，回答Catherine信中的提問，可包括下面的句式和內(nèi)容：
(4) we’re living a happy school life
(5) because we know we’re studying for our own future as well as for our country
(6) we sometimes feel tired after hard work, so we often take some sports and games after study to relax ourselves or take part in some campus interest groups activities.
三、寫作。用適當?shù)倪^渡詞和關(guān)聯(lián)詞語，將上述主要內(nèi)容和句子連接起來，便成了一篇比較令人滿意的回信和優(yōu)秀的書面表達（見參考范文）。
參考范文
Dear Catherine,
Thanks for your letter. I’m very glad that you feel it a good time to stay in my family during your stay in China for the Chinese Bridge activities. It’s very kind of you to praise my family for the little we did for you. I, on behalf of my parents, sincerely expect you to come to China again.
As you know, we’re living a happy school life. We are all in high spirits in study because we know we’re studying for our own future as well as for our country, but actually we sometimes feel tired after hard work, so we often take some sports and games after study to relax ourselves, or take part in some campus interest groups activities.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Luo Lin
亮點評析
范文用平實而流暢的語言表達了作者對收到來信的欣喜之情和對來信人的感謝之意，并
第2/3頁
緊接著向?qū)Ψ桨l(fā)出了再次來中國訪問的邀請，在情感展現(xiàn)的邏輯關(guān)系上適時而恰到好處；接著用一個方式狀語從句As you know便引出了對來函要求了解的問題的答復(fù)，過渡自然簡練，同時回答也簡明扼要，且真實可信。結(jié)束的謙稱分別用了Best wishes和Yours sincerely，符合通信人之間的關(guān)系和身份，十分貼切，整體上給人一種駕輕就熟和輕松自然的感覺。