i'm from XI'an and my name is LiYao. 然后告訴人家你的年齡，學(xué)校,這些相信你不知道怎么說吧? when i was child,i have a dream.a beautiful dream.I dreamed to fly in the blue sky someday. Now I have the opportunity to make it come true.如果是面試的話,自我介紹盡量掌握在1-2分鐘之內(nèi).但是按照你的語言,顯然有些單薄,你應(yīng)該在自我介紹中加上自己的性格特點(diǎn).比如你有團(tuán)隊(duì)合作精神,這點(diǎn)對(duì)于任何企業(yè)來說都很重要!You should say "i'm supportive , dependable and cooperative.i'm also a good team player.i like working with all types of people,even bad-tempered people.而且,你要面試的是你的工作單位!不是學(xué)校. 不應(yīng)該說 "如果我能被貴校錄取"應(yīng)該說"如果我有幸成為你們的一員" : If I have the honor to become a member of yoursi will try my best to give the last measure of devotion . because i know the weakest goes to the wall,and the most important is i have a strong love on this career. Thanks for listening .