2015年11月08日托福獨(dú)立寫作預(yù)測
Governments have done enough to educate the people the importance of a healthy lifestyle and balanced eating.
【波波老師點(diǎn)睛】：此題目含義為“政府是否在向人們倡導(dǎo)健康生活方式和均衡飲食方面做得足夠好了”。稍加思考就會發(fā)現(xiàn)，這個題目暗含著兩個方面即：健康的生活方式和均衡的飲食。波波老師建議，觀點(diǎn)選擇不同意，理由就從以上這兩個方面分別展開
具體如下：
理由一：段首句：政府在教育人們健康生活方式上面做得工作遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠，尤其是在宣傳工作和公共設(shè)施上。(Governments need to do more work on educating people the importance of healthy lifestyle, especially on publicity and the construction of public sports facilities.)
展開句：一方面政府在宣傳上力度不夠，以致于現(xiàn)代人們有各種各樣的不利于健康的生活習(xí)慣，比如說熬夜，吸煙，酗酒甚至吸毒。另一方面公共體育設(shè)施嚴(yán)重缺乏，導(dǎo)致人們無處健身。比如說我們小區(qū)周圍只有一個操場，體育設(shè)施也非常的有限，每次去鍛煉的時候，人都很多，而且有的設(shè)備已經(jīng)老化甚至根本無法正常使用。(For one thing, due to lack of programs about healthy lifestyle, many people in the modern society pick up various bad habits, such as staying up late, smoking, drinking excessively and even taking drugs. For another, owing to the desperate shortage of public sports facilites, people can do exercises nowhere. For example, in my community, there is only a small playcourt with few sports equipments, which is full of people. Even worse, some equipments are out of use because of no maintanence. )
理由二：段首句：政府在飲食健康教育上做得也不好，尤其是在食品安全衛(wèi)生的監(jiān)管和規(guī)律飲食習(xí)慣的宣傳上。(In addition, the education of balanced eating habits require more efforts from government, especially in the inspection of food hygiene and safety as well as publicity of regular eating habits.)
展開句：一方面，食品安全在我國一直以來都是熱議話題。但是由于政府監(jiān)管不力，有很多商家在食品上以次充好。比如說三鹿。另外，政府沒有很好地強(qiáng)調(diào)均衡飲食的重要性，所以很多人會有非常不健康的飲食習(xí)慣。比如說，人們由于快節(jié)奏的生活大都會吃一些垃圾食品，以致于他們會患上高血壓，肥胖得疾病。同時，有些人甚至不吃早飯，這些習(xí)慣多對身體危害極大。On one hand, food safety has always been one of the hottest topic in our country. Due to the limited inspection of government, many business owners use many illegal food addictives or chemicals in their products. On the other hand, many people formed bad eating habits without gaining sufficient guides from government. For example, many white-collars choose to eat junk foods due to the rapid pace of life. Other young people even do not have breakfast, all that do great harm to their health. )
2015年11月08日托福獨(dú)立寫作預(yù)測NO.2
In order to have an enjoyable vacation, which of the following three selections is the most important for you.
1. Good food
2. Good location
3. The company of goodfriends to travel.
題干為A/B/C三選一的題目，對于三選一的題目解題的基本思路是：假如選擇A時的，論證段只需去說，A好，B和C不好即可。此題目筆者建議選擇good food
具體思路如下：
1. 段首句：選擇好的食物，不僅可以讓我們了解食物背后的飲食文化和禮儀而且也是一種放松的方式。(First of all, enjoying the good food can keep us informed of the traditional culture and manners involved in the food as well as serve as a good way to release pressure.)
展開句：一方面，食物是一個國家或民族文化的一種體現(xiàn)。比如去吃西餐，我們就可以學(xué)會如何使用刀叉，以及在餐桌上的一些禮儀。吃地方小吃我們就可以了解它的制作過程，以及它的歷史來源。另一方面，慢慢的享受一頓美食可以讓我們享受一種慢節(jié)奏的生活，從而讓我們從日常噪雜的食物中解脫出來。比如說，我自己的經(jīng)歷就可以作為一個很好的例子。每當(dāng)我自己壓力大的時候，我都會選擇一家獨(dú)特的餐廳去慢慢享受美食，這也給了我一個反思的時間，從而更容易打開心結(jié)。
2. 段首句：另外，選擇一個好的地點(diǎn)和朋友的陪伴各有缺陷。一個好的地點(diǎn)通常會伴隨著人多擁擠的問題，這會很大程度上影響我們度假的心情。同時，有朋友的陪伴使得旅行不夠自由，因為你要時刻考慮對方的想法。有時候，兩人意見不一致還會產(chǎn)生矛盾，使整個度假變得都不開心。(there are some disadvantages of the other two options. For one thing, a good location will definitely attract overcrowded throngs of people, which makes us feel upset and unhappy. For another, while traveling with another person, you have to take his/ her feeling into account and thus may have conflicting ideas of the destination with your friend. )
2015年11月08日托福獨(dú)立寫作預(yù)測NO.3
A leader should have strong opinions and not change his or her mind about those opinions.
【波波老師點(diǎn)睛】
題目大意：領(lǐng)導(dǎo)要有主見，不輕易改變。此題筆者建議選擇同意，思路具體如下：
1. 段首句：首先，有助于樹立自己的權(quán)威，讓成員更相信自己(First of all, it is of great necessity for a leader to hold strong opinions and not change them easily in order to build up his/her authority and win the trust of the team members.)
展開句：Confucius once commented that the recognition of someone is the precondition of listening to his instruction.
2. 段首句：有助于讓團(tuán)隊有明確的共同目標(biāo)，從而提高團(tuán)隊的效率。(Having strong viewpoint and not easily changing them can make the team share a definite and common goal and thus improve the work efficiency.)
3. 結(jié)尾段：不得不承認(rèn)，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)參考團(tuán)隊成員的建議修正自己的觀點(diǎn)，可以提升團(tuán)隊成員的參與熱情。但是，這個優(yōu)點(diǎn)與我方優(yōu)點(diǎn)相比可以被忽略。(Admittedly, leaders revise their opinions by referring to the suggestions from team members, which can improve the enthusiasm of their participation.However, compared with the huge benefits of our position, this tivial advantage can be neglected.)
2015年11月08日托福獨(dú)立寫作預(yù)測NO.4
If a constructor wants to use the land in your community to build one of the following places, which one will you prefer?
【波波老師點(diǎn)睛】：
此題目是三選一，筆者建議選擇 shopping mall, 總體的結(jié)構(gòu)：寫出shopping mall 的兩個好處，然后一段概括performance arts center 和hotel 的缺陷，最后總結(jié)即可。
具體思路如下：
中間段1：商場的好處之一是方便購物和娛樂。(First and formost, one major benefits of building a shopping mall in our community is that people can purchase anything they need conveniently and relax themselves by using various entertainment facilities.)
中間段2：商場的好處之二是可以提供更多的就業(yè)崗位以及創(chuàng)業(yè)的機(jī)會。(In addition, another main advantage of contructing a shopping center is to provide more job vacancies and more opportunities to start one’s own business. )
結(jié)尾段：hotel/ performances art center 兩者存在的共同問題就是投入的金錢和獲得的收益不成比例。Hotel建設(shè)在小區(qū)內(nèi)，很少會有人去住。同樣的，arts center的吸引力也不強(qiáng)，因為很少有人對此感興趣。(the common weakness of building hotel and performance art center is that the investments are not in a positive proportion to the revenues gained from them. Few people will choose to order a room in a hotel built in a community. Similarly, performance arts center is not attractive because the public have no interest in appreciating what is on exhibit. )
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