寫作模板2
（辯證對比話題)
第一段概述（大約40字）：
Nowadays, when it comes to the _______（作文的話題及某種社會現(xiàn)象，一般是作文標題）, the answers may vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that_______（第一種看法，觀點）， but others argue that_______（第二種看法，觀點）. As for as I’m concerned, both _______（上述觀點一） and _______（上述觀點二）. I will _______（陳述我的觀點）for the following reasons.
第二段正文：（大約70字）：
In my opinion, __________（第一種看法，觀點）can bring____ to________ (優(yōu)勢或者劣勢). For one thing________ (闡述理由一). And it is usually ____（闡述理由一). What's more _____ (闡述理由一). Despite many obvious advantages of the first opinion, we can still find the second one also has some advantages when compared with the first. First of all ______（闡述理由一）. Because of_______（闡述理由二）. Even more _____ (闡述理由三，及帶來的后果及影響).
第三段總結(jié)（大約40字）：
From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion. It is undoubted that _______（第一種看法，觀點）is as important as_______（第二種看法，觀點）. So as for me, I agree to take the middle road. They both should be play extremely important role in our modern society. Only in this way can we become_______（總結(jié)，展望，呼吁）
各種文體寫作要求
1.議論文
1.1．寫作技巧，布局結(jié)構(gòu)。
第一段：
開頭句指出某種社會現(xiàn)象，擴展介紹，所產(chǎn)生的影響和后果，大約30-40字。
第二段：
出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因和后果，大約50-60字。
第三段：
你的觀點和建議，解決問題的方法。重復(fù)主題，
與前呼應(yīng)，簡要結(jié)論，提出展望，大約50-60
字。
1.2．寫作常用詞句：
第一段
1. When it comes to the access to (Internet surfing / private schools /e-business / high rate of unemployment / China's football / recycling / widespread corruption /...), most people believe that... but other people argue that...
說到……問題，許多人認為……，但是也有人爭辯說……
2. Currently, there is a widespread concern over drug abuse (high unemployment rate / wildlife extinction / environmental pollution /organized crime / widespread corruption / energy crisis / water shortages / traffic jams / increasing traffic accidents / ...).
最近，人們廣為關(guān)注……
3. With the (rapid) development of science and technology (market economy / electronic industry / information industry / higher education / ...) an increasing number of people come to realize that (knowledge is power / a weak nation has no international prestige / education is of vital importance / …)， an increasing number of people come to realize that (knowledge is power / a weak nation has no international prestige / education is of vital importance)
隨著科學(xué)技術(shù)……的迅速發(fā)展，越來越多的人認識到……
4. People's opinions about …… vary from person to person. Some people say that ……To them,……But others……
人們對待……的觀點各自不同，有的人認為……。對他們來說……。而另一些人……
5. .It goes without saying that...
不言而喻……
6. There's no denying the fact that...
毫無疑問，無可否認……
第二段
1. 表示比較和對比
1）…… is completely different from…….
……和……完全不同
2）Compared with（In contrast to/Unlike）…….and…….
把…….和…….相比
3）on the other hand,/in contrast,/
與……相反
4）Despite their similarities, …….and……. are also different.
盡管他們相似，但…….和…….還是不同
2．陳述觀點
1）． There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones. 有很多個原因…….，但總的說來，有以下三個最重要的原因
3）． Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.
解決問題的辦法很多，但下面這種是的
4）．Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.
總的來說，優(yōu)勢如下
5）．The reasons are as follows.
理由如下
3．因果推理
1）Because/Since we ……., we have learned a lot…….
因為我們…….，所以我們知道…….
2）As a result of （Because of/Due to/Owing to）……., we……..
作為……結(jié)果，我們……
3） The cause of （reason for/overweight） is ……
……的起因是……
4）……causes（results in/leads to overweight.）
……導(dǎo)致了……結(jié)果
4．舉例說明
1）Here is one more example.
這里還有一個例子
2）Take … for example.
以……為例
3）Just think of….
聯(lián)想到……
5. 陳述順序
At first…second…third…and finally…
第一，第二，第三，最后……
6. 并列轉(zhuǎn)承
And…和，并且That is to say…也就是說……Not only…but also…不僅……而且……
7. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折
But…但是……However…然而……
8. 表示遞進
Besides…
除了……之外還有
Even more…
更為……
第三段
1. Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that…….
很明顯，我們可以得出……結(jié)論
2. To sum up（in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus）
總之……
3. Obviously, it is high time that we……solve the problem.
顯然，解決……的問題已經(jīng)題迫在眉睫。
4. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
總之，要解決這個問題，必須采取一些措施。
5. Taking into account all the factors, we may safely come to the conclusion that…. 考慮到諸多因素，我們可以總結(jié)如下……
6. From（Through/According） to what has been discussed above, we can come to/reach/arrive at/draw the conclusion that….
從以上的討論，我們可以總結(jié)為……
7. It is believed that….
據(jù)信……
8. I take (hold) a negative（positive view） of….
對此，我持否定意見。
9. There is still a long way to go towards solving the problem. We hope that efforts should be made to….
解決這個問題還要很大的努力。我們希望我們的努力能……
10. It is necessary that effective（proper/quick actions/steps/measures ）be taken to…. 有必要采取有效地措施來……
2.圖表作文
（說明文＋議論文）
2.1． 寫作技巧，布局結(jié)構(gòu)。
第一段：解讀圖表中的信息，圖表要表達的主題，弄清文字說明，對圖表內(nèi)容做簡要概述，說出所涉及的問題，大約30-40字。
第二段：分析信息和表上具體數(shù)字，找出規(guī)律，發(fā)現(xiàn)問題或所代表的社會普遍現(xiàn)象，對其進行議論說明， 大約50-60字。
第三段：你的憂慮，一些建議，解決問題的方法，期待或展望。大約40-50字。
2.2．寫作常用詞句
第一段圖表說明
1．As shown in the table (graph, chart)…
2．The table (graph, chart) displays…
3．The percentage remained steady/stable at…
4．As can be clearly observed from the chart…
5. The figures stayed the same….
第二段分析圖表數(shù)字信息
1. As indicated by the result…
2. The table (graph, chart, figures) shows the increase…decrease…
3.The data（figures） leads us to the conclusion that….
4. The graph provides some interesting data regarding….
第三段結(jié)論
1) It should be noted that…
2) This suggests…
3) It must be realized…
4) We look forward to further changes…
3.看圖作文
（說明文＋議論文）
3.1．寫作技巧，布局結(jié)構(gòu)。跟圖表作文相似，不同之處是圖表要分析數(shù)字，對比數(shù)字。
看圖作文著重分析圖片內(nèi)容。
第一段：
理解圖片及文字，看圖作文都有文字說明，這里必須對圖片及文字內(nèi)容都給予描述，大約30-40字。
第二段：
分析圖片內(nèi)容，理解其深刻含義。對圖片所包含的現(xiàn)狀發(fā)表議論，可以以生活中的名人為例子，或者以自己的親身經(jīng)歷來支持你的觀點，加以論證。大約50-60字。
第三段：
你的憂慮，一些建議，解決問題的方法，期待或展望。大約40字。
3.2．寫作常用詞句
第一段：說明圖片及文字
1.The picture with words shows that…
2.The picture with words provides some interesting facts….
第二段：聯(lián)想，感想，觀點
1. Firstly, it will bring us to think …Secondly….
Thirdly….And finally…
2.Take…as an example例子論證:
---the man enrolled in Harvard as a genius ---quitted from Harvard
---became a billionaire in his first thirty
---was named as the World Computer God Father
---was invited as a professor at Harvard
---Bill Gates showed such an example of
第三段總結(jié):
1．We must realize that…
2. We look forward to further changes about…
4.讀后感
4.1．寫作技巧，布局結(jié)構(gòu)。
第一段：
仔細閱讀提供的文章，理解作者的寫作意圖，所包含的意義，對人的啟示，并對其進行敘述，大約50字。
第二段：
根據(jù)所提供的文章得深刻含義，表明自己的態(tài)度，發(fā)表自己的聯(lián)想和感想, 也可以生活中的名人為例子來舉例說明，大約50字；第三段：；歸納評述，得出結(jié)論，大約50字；4.2．寫作常用詞句；第一段概述；1.Theshortparagraphabove；2.Afterreadingthestory,I；第二段正文；1.Whatdowelearnfrom…?；2.Firstly,itwillbringpeo；Thirdly….Andfina
以以生活中的名人為例子來舉例說明，大約50字。
第三段：
歸納評述，得出結(jié)論，大約50字。
4.2．寫作常用詞句
第一段概述
1. The short paragraph above tells us a story about…
2. After reading the story, I…
第二段正文
1. What do we learn from…?
2. Firstly, it will bring people …Secondly….
Thirdly….And finally…
3. Take…as an example…
第三段總結(jié)
1. In conclusion…
2. Have the same meaning.
3.As far as I am concerned….
5. 摘要寫作
5.1 寫作技巧
1．去掉細節(jié)2．取消舉例 3．簡化描述 4．用間接引語 5．去掉重復(fù)詞句
6.少用從句
5.2．寫作步驟
1．通讀全文，把握要旨2．逐段細讀，劃出主題3．組織要點，連貫統(tǒng)一4．通讀概要，修改潤色
17句搞定考研英語作文
1.總共寫十七個句子.
第一段四個句子,第一句宏觀描述圖畫,并談圖畫看似可笑但發(fā)人深思.第二句寫出圖畫烈的視覺效果,第三句是主題句,談用二十個單詞的爆發(fā)力句型談該現(xiàn)象對個人的發(fā)展和進步有破壞性,并引發(fā)思考,第四句是用貶義詞批判這個現(xiàn)象是強烈的指責(zé)。
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ，which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.
(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ，
(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主題 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity.
(4)This phenomenon of 主題 should be condemned severely or made illegal.
(5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中間段落從兩方面論證問題的危害，并舉例論證，預(yù)測危害的趨勢
第二段七個句子,
(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put
forward.
(2)To begin with,主題 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than主題 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主題 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.
最后一段要強調(diào)解決問題，談的兩點建議通常是提高人們的意識，加強執(zhí)法
第三段六個句子,
(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主題. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
2.積極有利型的文章 文章以團隊精神為例子
第一段談的是三個句子,第一,二個句子都是在描述圖畫,第三句子這個現(xiàn)象對社會發(fā)展的積極的現(xiàn)象,第四個句子是圖畫簡單,寓意深刻.
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述圖畫).(2) The most striking feature is(圖畫重點信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
第二個段子 (1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.
第三個段子 (1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing
things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
（辯證對比話題)
第一段概述（大約40字）：
Nowadays, when it comes to the _______（作文的話題及某種社會現(xiàn)象，一般是作文標題）, the answers may vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that_______（第一種看法，觀點）， but others argue that_______（第二種看法，觀點）. As for as I’m concerned, both _______（上述觀點一） and _______（上述觀點二）. I will _______（陳述我的觀點）for the following reasons.
第二段正文：（大約70字）：
In my opinion, __________（第一種看法，觀點）can bring____ to________ (優(yōu)勢或者劣勢). For one thing________ (闡述理由一). And it is usually ____（闡述理由一). What's more _____ (闡述理由一). Despite many obvious advantages of the first opinion, we can still find the second one also has some advantages when compared with the first. First of all ______（闡述理由一）. Because of_______（闡述理由二）. Even more _____ (闡述理由三，及帶來的后果及影響).
第三段總結(jié)（大約40字）：
From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion. It is undoubted that _______（第一種看法，觀點）is as important as_______（第二種看法，觀點）. So as for me, I agree to take the middle road. They both should be play extremely important role in our modern society. Only in this way can we become_______（總結(jié)，展望，呼吁）
各種文體寫作要求
1.議論文
1.1．寫作技巧，布局結(jié)構(gòu)。
第一段：
開頭句指出某種社會現(xiàn)象，擴展介紹，所產(chǎn)生的影響和后果，大約30-40字。
第二段：
出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因和后果，大約50-60字。
第三段：
你的觀點和建議，解決問題的方法。重復(fù)主題，
與前呼應(yīng)，簡要結(jié)論，提出展望，大約50-60
字。
1.2．寫作常用詞句：
第一段
1. When it comes to the access to (Internet surfing / private schools /e-business / high rate of unemployment / China's football / recycling / widespread corruption /...), most people believe that... but other people argue that...
說到……問題，許多人認為……，但是也有人爭辯說……
2. Currently, there is a widespread concern over drug abuse (high unemployment rate / wildlife extinction / environmental pollution /organized crime / widespread corruption / energy crisis / water shortages / traffic jams / increasing traffic accidents / ...).
最近，人們廣為關(guān)注……
3. With the (rapid) development of science and technology (market economy / electronic industry / information industry / higher education / ...) an increasing number of people come to realize that (knowledge is power / a weak nation has no international prestige / education is of vital importance / …)， an increasing number of people come to realize that (knowledge is power / a weak nation has no international prestige / education is of vital importance)
隨著科學(xué)技術(shù)……的迅速發(fā)展，越來越多的人認識到……
4. People's opinions about …… vary from person to person. Some people say that ……To them,……But others……
人們對待……的觀點各自不同，有的人認為……。對他們來說……。而另一些人……
5. .It goes without saying that...
不言而喻……
6. There's no denying the fact that...
毫無疑問，無可否認……
第二段
1. 表示比較和對比
1）…… is completely different from…….
……和……完全不同
2）Compared with（In contrast to/Unlike）…….and…….
把…….和…….相比
3）on the other hand,/in contrast,/
與……相反
4）Despite their similarities, …….and……. are also different.
盡管他們相似，但…….和…….還是不同
2．陳述觀點
1）． There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones. 有很多個原因…….，但總的說來，有以下三個最重要的原因
3）． Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.
解決問題的辦法很多，但下面這種是的
4）．Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.
總的來說，優(yōu)勢如下
5）．The reasons are as follows.
理由如下
3．因果推理
1）Because/Since we ……., we have learned a lot…….
因為我們…….，所以我們知道…….
2）As a result of （Because of/Due to/Owing to）……., we……..
作為……結(jié)果，我們……
3） The cause of （reason for/overweight） is ……
……的起因是……
4）……causes（results in/leads to overweight.）
……導(dǎo)致了……結(jié)果
4．舉例說明
1）Here is one more example.
這里還有一個例子
2）Take … for example.
以……為例
3）Just think of….
聯(lián)想到……
5. 陳述順序
At first…second…third…and finally…
第一，第二，第三，最后……
6. 并列轉(zhuǎn)承
And…和，并且That is to say…也就是說……Not only…but also…不僅……而且……
7. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折
But…但是……However…然而……
8. 表示遞進
Besides…
除了……之外還有
Even more…
更為……
第三段
1. Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that…….
很明顯，我們可以得出……結(jié)論
2. To sum up（in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus）
總之……
3. Obviously, it is high time that we……solve the problem.
顯然，解決……的問題已經(jīng)題迫在眉睫。
4. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
總之，要解決這個問題，必須采取一些措施。
5. Taking into account all the factors, we may safely come to the conclusion that…. 考慮到諸多因素，我們可以總結(jié)如下……
6. From（Through/According） to what has been discussed above, we can come to/reach/arrive at/draw the conclusion that….
從以上的討論，我們可以總結(jié)為……
7. It is believed that….
據(jù)信……
8. I take (hold) a negative（positive view） of….
對此，我持否定意見。
9. There is still a long way to go towards solving the problem. We hope that efforts should be made to….
解決這個問題還要很大的努力。我們希望我們的努力能……
10. It is necessary that effective（proper/quick actions/steps/measures ）be taken to…. 有必要采取有效地措施來……
2.圖表作文
（說明文＋議論文）
2.1． 寫作技巧，布局結(jié)構(gòu)。
第一段：解讀圖表中的信息，圖表要表達的主題，弄清文字說明，對圖表內(nèi)容做簡要概述，說出所涉及的問題，大約30-40字。
第二段：分析信息和表上具體數(shù)字，找出規(guī)律，發(fā)現(xiàn)問題或所代表的社會普遍現(xiàn)象，對其進行議論說明， 大約50-60字。
第三段：你的憂慮，一些建議，解決問題的方法，期待或展望。大約40-50字。
2.2．寫作常用詞句
第一段圖表說明
1．As shown in the table (graph, chart)…
2．The table (graph, chart) displays…
3．The percentage remained steady/stable at…
4．As can be clearly observed from the chart…
5. The figures stayed the same….
第二段分析圖表數(shù)字信息
1. As indicated by the result…
2. The table (graph, chart, figures) shows the increase…decrease…
3.The data（figures） leads us to the conclusion that….
4. The graph provides some interesting data regarding….
第三段結(jié)論
1) It should be noted that…
2) This suggests…
3) It must be realized…
4) We look forward to further changes…
3.看圖作文
（說明文＋議論文）
3.1．寫作技巧，布局結(jié)構(gòu)。跟圖表作文相似，不同之處是圖表要分析數(shù)字，對比數(shù)字。
看圖作文著重分析圖片內(nèi)容。
第一段：
理解圖片及文字，看圖作文都有文字說明，這里必須對圖片及文字內(nèi)容都給予描述，大約30-40字。
第二段：
分析圖片內(nèi)容，理解其深刻含義。對圖片所包含的現(xiàn)狀發(fā)表議論，可以以生活中的名人為例子，或者以自己的親身經(jīng)歷來支持你的觀點，加以論證。大約50-60字。
第三段：
你的憂慮，一些建議，解決問題的方法，期待或展望。大約40字。
3.2．寫作常用詞句
第一段：說明圖片及文字
1.The picture with words shows that…
2.The picture with words provides some interesting facts….
第二段：聯(lián)想，感想，觀點
1. Firstly, it will bring us to think …Secondly….
Thirdly….And finally…
2.Take…as an example例子論證:
---the man enrolled in Harvard as a genius ---quitted from Harvard
---became a billionaire in his first thirty
---was named as the World Computer God Father
---was invited as a professor at Harvard
---Bill Gates showed such an example of
第三段總結(jié):
1．We must realize that…
2. We look forward to further changes about…
4.讀后感
4.1．寫作技巧，布局結(jié)構(gòu)。
第一段：
仔細閱讀提供的文章，理解作者的寫作意圖，所包含的意義，對人的啟示，并對其進行敘述，大約50字。
第二段：
根據(jù)所提供的文章得深刻含義，表明自己的態(tài)度，發(fā)表自己的聯(lián)想和感想, 也可以生活中的名人為例子來舉例說明，大約50字；第三段：；歸納評述，得出結(jié)論，大約50字；4.2．寫作常用詞句；第一段概述；1.Theshortparagraphabove；2.Afterreadingthestory,I；第二段正文；1.Whatdowelearnfrom…?；2.Firstly,itwillbringpeo；Thirdly….Andfina
以以生活中的名人為例子來舉例說明，大約50字。
第三段：
歸納評述，得出結(jié)論，大約50字。
4.2．寫作常用詞句
第一段概述
1. The short paragraph above tells us a story about…
2. After reading the story, I…
第二段正文
1. What do we learn from…?
2. Firstly, it will bring people …Secondly….
Thirdly….And finally…
3. Take…as an example…
第三段總結(jié)
1. In conclusion…
2. Have the same meaning.
3.As far as I am concerned….
5. 摘要寫作
5.1 寫作技巧
1．去掉細節(jié)2．取消舉例 3．簡化描述 4．用間接引語 5．去掉重復(fù)詞句
6.少用從句
5.2．寫作步驟
1．通讀全文，把握要旨2．逐段細讀，劃出主題3．組織要點，連貫統(tǒng)一4．通讀概要，修改潤色
17句搞定考研英語作文
1.總共寫十七個句子.
第一段四個句子,第一句宏觀描述圖畫,并談圖畫看似可笑但發(fā)人深思.第二句寫出圖畫烈的視覺效果,第三句是主題句,談用二十個單詞的爆發(fā)力句型談該現(xiàn)象對個人的發(fā)展和進步有破壞性,并引發(fā)思考,第四句是用貶義詞批判這個現(xiàn)象是強烈的指責(zé)。
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ，which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.
(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ，
(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主題 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity.
(4)This phenomenon of 主題 should be condemned severely or made illegal.
(5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中間段落從兩方面論證問題的危害，并舉例論證，預(yù)測危害的趨勢
第二段七個句子,
(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put
forward.
(2)To begin with,主題 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than主題 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主題 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.
最后一段要強調(diào)解決問題，談的兩點建議通常是提高人們的意識，加強執(zhí)法
第三段六個句子,
(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主題. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
2.積極有利型的文章 文章以團隊精神為例子
第一段談的是三個句子,第一,二個句子都是在描述圖畫,第三句子這個現(xiàn)象對社會發(fā)展的積極的現(xiàn)象,第四個句子是圖畫簡單,寓意深刻.
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述圖畫).(2) The most striking feature is(圖畫重點信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
第二個段子 (1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.
第三個段子 (1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing
things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.