3月26日托福綜合寫(xiě)作
關(guān)于Gustave Whitehead 先于萊特兄弟成功試飛飛機(jī)
3月26日托福綜合寫(xiě)作范文：
Sample answer:
The reading puts forward three reasons to illustrate the badeffects brought by those prairie dogs. However, the professor refutes thesethree strongly.
Firstly, the listening argues that the reason why the reporthad no photo but only draft drawings lied in two aspects. First, thephotography technology at that time was not as advanced as it is now. As theimaging techniques was not good, the quality of the photos was low. Inaddition, when the experiment was conducted, it was cloudy; in such conditionto capture the image of a flying plane was too difficult.
Secondly, the reading claims the design of Whitehead’s planethat only had one wing was not logical, for the plane usually had two or threewings at that time. However, the professor disagrees. In the recent, someresearchers have made a copy of Whitehead’s plane based on his design diagram.They tested the copy planes four times, and each of them was successful.
Finally, the reading suggests that Whitehead had producedmany engines and sold them to several aircraft builders, but in fact none of thoseengines used in planes had ever succeeded, illustrating that Whitehead had notsuccessfully tested his plane. But the professor argues the problem that thoseengines did not work could not be blamed to Whitehead. It was because thetechnology was not so developed at that time and aircraft builders knew littleabout designing planes. The fact that there were people buying Whitehead’sengines actually proved that his design had no problem.
3月26日托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作題目：
It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or a new country because they will lose their friends.
題型類別:利弊類
題材類別：二選一
相關(guān)舊題：2014.09.21
寫(xiě)作思路：“搬到新的城鎮(zhèn)或國(guó)家不是一個(gè)好主意，因?yàn)槿藗儠?huì)失去朋友。”這個(gè)題目其實(shí)很好入手，只要結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況想想就可以。試想自己有沒(méi)有搬過(guò)家，為什么搬家，到底有沒(méi)有失去過(guò)好朋友，文章的論點(diǎn)可以很自然的出來(lái)。我們總會(huì)因?yàn)闉榱烁玫慕逃凸ぷ鞯?，或者為了伴侶等而搬家，我們?cè)谧鰶Q定的時(shí)候總是結(jié)合多個(gè)因素權(quán)衡取舍的。其次，我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)我們并不會(huì)因?yàn)榘峒叶ヅ笥?，因?yàn)楝F(xiàn)在溝通交流很方便。上面就是兩個(gè)理由，第三段可以寫(xiě)個(gè)讓讓步段。
寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：
1.首先，人生揮Ω煤ε率去而不去做改變。人們要搬到另一個(gè)城市肯定是有理由的，如為了更好的工作、更和家庭等。人生不只是有友情，還有親情愛(ài)情，自己的人生道路等。所以要權(quán)衡后得失weigh the pros and cons carefully，懂取舍。這就像我們不能為了不想離開(kāi)自己的朋友，放棄上上一個(gè)比本地大學(xué)好得很多的學(xué)校。
2.再者，搬到另一個(gè)城市并不一定會(huì)失去以前的朋友，因?yàn)榭萍嫉慕槿雐ntervention使人有更多途徑溝通 means of communication。現(xiàn)代社會(huì)的發(fā)展給人們帶來(lái)很多便利。一方面，通訊工具的發(fā)展可以讓我們打破空間的障礙obstacle，從最基本的手機(jī)和郵件到高科技的軟件如微信，Skype等，都讓朋友間可以隨時(shí)隨地地聯(lián)絡(luò)感情;另一方面，便利快捷的交通打破了時(shí)間的障礙，坐高鐵和飛機(jī)去與朋友面對(duì)面所花費(fèi)的時(shí)間其實(shí)都和同個(gè)城市里的朋友匯合花的時(shí)間差不多。
3.讓步：誠(chéng)然，我們會(huì)可能會(huì)失去一些朋友，但我認(rèn)為失去的也是一些泛泛之交tangentially related。如果是真的意氣相投 congenial、真的深交的朋友，并不會(huì)因?yàn)榭臻g上的分隔而疏遠(yuǎn)estrangement/alienation。
詞匯拓展：
weigh the pros and cons carefully 權(quán)衡后得失
intervention介入
means of communication使人有更多途徑溝通
obstacle障礙
tangentially related泛泛之交
congenial 意氣相投
estrangement/alienation 疏遠(yuǎn)
關(guān)于Gustave Whitehead 先于萊特兄弟成功試飛飛機(jī)
3月26日托福綜合寫(xiě)作范文：
Sample answer:
The reading puts forward three reasons to illustrate the badeffects brought by those prairie dogs. However, the professor refutes thesethree strongly.
Firstly, the listening argues that the reason why the reporthad no photo but only draft drawings lied in two aspects. First, thephotography technology at that time was not as advanced as it is now. As theimaging techniques was not good, the quality of the photos was low. Inaddition, when the experiment was conducted, it was cloudy; in such conditionto capture the image of a flying plane was too difficult.
Secondly, the reading claims the design of Whitehead’s planethat only had one wing was not logical, for the plane usually had two or threewings at that time. However, the professor disagrees. In the recent, someresearchers have made a copy of Whitehead’s plane based on his design diagram.They tested the copy planes four times, and each of them was successful.
Finally, the reading suggests that Whitehead had producedmany engines and sold them to several aircraft builders, but in fact none of thoseengines used in planes had ever succeeded, illustrating that Whitehead had notsuccessfully tested his plane. But the professor argues the problem that thoseengines did not work could not be blamed to Whitehead. It was because thetechnology was not so developed at that time and aircraft builders knew littleabout designing planes. The fact that there were people buying Whitehead’sengines actually proved that his design had no problem.
3月26日托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作題目：
It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or a new country because they will lose their friends.
題型類別:利弊類
題材類別：二選一
相關(guān)舊題：2014.09.21
寫(xiě)作思路：“搬到新的城鎮(zhèn)或國(guó)家不是一個(gè)好主意，因?yàn)槿藗儠?huì)失去朋友。”這個(gè)題目其實(shí)很好入手，只要結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況想想就可以。試想自己有沒(méi)有搬過(guò)家，為什么搬家，到底有沒(méi)有失去過(guò)好朋友，文章的論點(diǎn)可以很自然的出來(lái)。我們總會(huì)因?yàn)闉榱烁玫慕逃凸ぷ鞯?，或者為了伴侶等而搬家，我們?cè)谧鰶Q定的時(shí)候總是結(jié)合多個(gè)因素權(quán)衡取舍的。其次，我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)我們并不會(huì)因?yàn)榘峒叶ヅ笥?，因?yàn)楝F(xiàn)在溝通交流很方便。上面就是兩個(gè)理由，第三段可以寫(xiě)個(gè)讓讓步段。
寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：
1.首先，人生揮Ω煤ε率去而不去做改變。人們要搬到另一個(gè)城市肯定是有理由的，如為了更好的工作、更和家庭等。人生不只是有友情，還有親情愛(ài)情，自己的人生道路等。所以要權(quán)衡后得失weigh the pros and cons carefully，懂取舍。這就像我們不能為了不想離開(kāi)自己的朋友，放棄上上一個(gè)比本地大學(xué)好得很多的學(xué)校。
2.再者，搬到另一個(gè)城市并不一定會(huì)失去以前的朋友，因?yàn)榭萍嫉慕槿雐ntervention使人有更多途徑溝通 means of communication。現(xiàn)代社會(huì)的發(fā)展給人們帶來(lái)很多便利。一方面，通訊工具的發(fā)展可以讓我們打破空間的障礙obstacle，從最基本的手機(jī)和郵件到高科技的軟件如微信，Skype等，都讓朋友間可以隨時(shí)隨地地聯(lián)絡(luò)感情;另一方面，便利快捷的交通打破了時(shí)間的障礙，坐高鐵和飛機(jī)去與朋友面對(duì)面所花費(fèi)的時(shí)間其實(shí)都和同個(gè)城市里的朋友匯合花的時(shí)間差不多。
3.讓步：誠(chéng)然，我們會(huì)可能會(huì)失去一些朋友，但我認(rèn)為失去的也是一些泛泛之交tangentially related。如果是真的意氣相投 congenial、真的深交的朋友，并不會(huì)因?yàn)榭臻g上的分隔而疏遠(yuǎn)estrangement/alienation。
詞匯拓展：
weigh the pros and cons carefully 權(quán)衡后得失
intervention介入
means of communication使人有更多途徑溝通
obstacle障礙
tangentially related泛泛之交
congenial 意氣相投
estrangement/alienation 疏遠(yuǎn)