作文話題：
Model 2 Shopping on the Net 網上購物
近來在一些發(fā)達地區(qū)出現網上購物熱。
一些人喜歡網上購物。
另一些人不喜歡網上購物。
四、六級作文類型：提綱式對比分析類議論文。
考點分析：
本文屬對比分析類議論文，也有人將其歸類于對比比較類或匹配對比類作文。此類作文要求對同種或兩種事物進行比較，然后得出結論。嚴格地說比較類的作文一般要求比較一件事物正反、優(yōu)劣等，然后下結論;而對比類作文大多是對兩個事物或兩種觀點從兩方面進行比較，再提出自己的看法。
本文實際上是從客觀公正的角度對比網上購物與傳統購物。文章首先指出如今網絡時代我們在網上無所不能，網上購物悄然受到人們青睞。隨即圍繞網上購物這一中心議題提出兩種不同態(tài)度。一些人喜歡網上購物，他們認為與傳統購物方式相比，它快捷、方便、省時，選擇面大。實際上他們是拿網上購物的長處比傳統購物的短處。而另一些人對此不感興趣，他們對假冒偽劣產品十分謹慎，很怕上當受騙。這些人是拿傳統購物長處比網上購物的短處，最后作者得出結論：網上購物勢必會發(fā)展成不可抗拒的新的購物趨勢。
審題構思：
“網上購物“屬提綱式作文。根據題中所給漢語提示句提示，本文可用三段式的謀篇形式。開篇段照應提綱開門見山地指出目前不僅出現了“上網熱”，而且出現了“網上購物熱”――Nowadays many people tend to shop on the net。隨后在第二和第三段中闡明對網上購物的兩種不同觀點，并就此展開討論。最后用一句話得出結論。因此第二段的主題句應為：Some people prefer this new way of shopping。第三段主題句為：Others dislike the new trend of shopping。結論為：I believe it is an irresistible trend of shopping in the 21st century。全文和各段落具體框架結構如下：
全文構思：
1.Nowadays many people tend to shop on the Net.
2.Some people prefer this new way of shopping.
3.Others dislike the new trend of shopping.
段落構思
第一段：Topic Sentence Nowadays many people tend to shop on the Net.
Developing Sentence 1 Internet is revolutionizing our world.
Developing Sentence 2 We can do many things online.
第二段： Topic Sentence Some people prefer this new way of shopping..
Developing Sentence convenient and time-saving
第三段： Topic Sentence others dislike the new trend of shopping.
Developing Sentence fear of buying fake commodities
新詞拾貝
online網上;在線
on the WebNet網上
Website網站
Web page網頁
e-commerce電子商務
e-business電子商務
virtual shopping center網上虛構的購物中心
絕妙銜接
Nowadays,… As a matter of fact,… To illustrate,… However,…
Some…First, …besides, … Most important of all,…
However, others…First, …Besides,…Finally,… However,…
良好開端
Nowadays Internet is revolutionizing our world and greatly facilitating our modern life, so that we can do many things on the Net.
Nowadays, with the arrival of knowledge economy age, we can do many things on the Web, such as conducting e-business, buying and selling stocks and even shopping at home via the Internet.
Nowadays, we can do many things via Internet. To illustrate, we can conduct e-commerce ,buy and sell stocks, buy train or air tickets and even shop on the Net.
Nowadays, shopping at home via Internet is becoming popular in many parts of the country.
成功收口
Therefore, they don’t think it’s the best way to shop on the Web.
Therefore, they doubt whether its advantages can outweigh its disadvantages, hence, they still continue their old practice.
Therefore, they didn’t show any interest in online shopping.
Therefore, they find it difficult to adopt the new way of shopping and still stick to he old way.
組段成篇
讀讀范文，看看文章的謀篇方式。先談悄然興起的網上購物熱，引出中心議題“人們對網上購物的兩種不同觀點”。最后作者從中得出自己的結論。
Model 2 Shopping on the Net 網上購物
近來在一些發(fā)達地區(qū)出現網上購物熱。
一些人喜歡網上購物。
另一些人不喜歡網上購物。
四、六級作文類型：提綱式對比分析類議論文。
考點分析：
本文屬對比分析類議論文，也有人將其歸類于對比比較類或匹配對比類作文。此類作文要求對同種或兩種事物進行比較，然后得出結論。嚴格地說比較類的作文一般要求比較一件事物正反、優(yōu)劣等，然后下結論;而對比類作文大多是對兩個事物或兩種觀點從兩方面進行比較，再提出自己的看法。
本文實際上是從客觀公正的角度對比網上購物與傳統購物。文章首先指出如今網絡時代我們在網上無所不能，網上購物悄然受到人們青睞。隨即圍繞網上購物這一中心議題提出兩種不同態(tài)度。一些人喜歡網上購物，他們認為與傳統購物方式相比，它快捷、方便、省時，選擇面大。實際上他們是拿網上購物的長處比傳統購物的短處。而另一些人對此不感興趣，他們對假冒偽劣產品十分謹慎，很怕上當受騙。這些人是拿傳統購物長處比網上購物的短處，最后作者得出結論：網上購物勢必會發(fā)展成不可抗拒的新的購物趨勢。
審題構思：
“網上購物“屬提綱式作文。根據題中所給漢語提示句提示，本文可用三段式的謀篇形式。開篇段照應提綱開門見山地指出目前不僅出現了“上網熱”，而且出現了“網上購物熱”――Nowadays many people tend to shop on the net。隨后在第二和第三段中闡明對網上購物的兩種不同觀點，并就此展開討論。最后用一句話得出結論。因此第二段的主題句應為：Some people prefer this new way of shopping。第三段主題句為：Others dislike the new trend of shopping。結論為：I believe it is an irresistible trend of shopping in the 21st century。全文和各段落具體框架結構如下：
全文構思：
1.Nowadays many people tend to shop on the Net.
2.Some people prefer this new way of shopping.
3.Others dislike the new trend of shopping.
段落構思
第一段：Topic Sentence Nowadays many people tend to shop on the Net.
Developing Sentence 1 Internet is revolutionizing our world.
Developing Sentence 2 We can do many things online.
第二段： Topic Sentence Some people prefer this new way of shopping..
Developing Sentence convenient and time-saving
第三段： Topic Sentence others dislike the new trend of shopping.
Developing Sentence fear of buying fake commodities
新詞拾貝
online網上;在線
on the WebNet網上
Website網站
Web page網頁
e-commerce電子商務
e-business電子商務
virtual shopping center網上虛構的購物中心
絕妙銜接
Nowadays,… As a matter of fact,… To illustrate,… However,…
Some…First, …besides, … Most important of all,…
However, others…First, …Besides,…Finally,… However,…
良好開端
Nowadays Internet is revolutionizing our world and greatly facilitating our modern life, so that we can do many things on the Net.
Nowadays, with the arrival of knowledge economy age, we can do many things on the Web, such as conducting e-business, buying and selling stocks and even shopping at home via the Internet.
Nowadays, we can do many things via Internet. To illustrate, we can conduct e-commerce ,buy and sell stocks, buy train or air tickets and even shop on the Net.
Nowadays, shopping at home via Internet is becoming popular in many parts of the country.
成功收口
Therefore, they don’t think it’s the best way to shop on the Web.
Therefore, they doubt whether its advantages can outweigh its disadvantages, hence, they still continue their old practice.
Therefore, they didn’t show any interest in online shopping.
Therefore, they find it difficult to adopt the new way of shopping and still stick to he old way.
組段成篇
讀讀范文，看看文章的謀篇方式。先談悄然興起的網上購物熱，引出中心議題“人們對網上購物的兩種不同觀點”。最后作者從中得出自己的結論。