全面分析托福獨立口語TPO3Task1

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What characteristics do you think make someone a good parent? Explain why these characteristics are important to you.
    一.審題
    首先,從題目中的good parent中我們可以斷定這個題目是一個人物類話題,而且限定在了好父母這個話題中,其中的characteristics讓考生形容的是好父母所應(yīng)該具有的品質(zhì),所以考生在論述的時候,就應(yīng)該著重從這個方面來論證自己的觀點。
    二.構(gòu)建答題思路
    1.好的聆聽者
    父母肯定是我們身邊存在的人,而交流是幫助我們了解他人的手段,父母在你心煩意亂的時候可以聽聽你說什么,這也是成為一個好的父母所應(yīng)該具備的品質(zhì)。
    2.耐心
    (1)父母愿意花費大量的時間去幫助你解決你遇到的問題
    (2)父母在你犯錯誤的時候,第一反映不是懲罰你或者辱罵你,而是幫你分析你為什么會犯錯,下次再遇到類似的情況該怎么改正
    3.supportive
    (1)經(jīng)濟(jì)上
    ①父母為你上學(xué)提供了經(jīng)濟(jì)上的支持,而且父母在你學(xué)習(xí)上遇到問題的時候,會幫助你分析課本中的問題,充當(dāng)了助教的角色
    ②父母給你提供了食物和衣服,這些都是要用錢買的
    (2)情感上
    ①父母尊重你的意見和觀點,比如說在你選擇大學(xué)的時候,會充分的考慮你自己的觀點。
    三.例文
    My mom has many good characteristics that I think all parents should have; let me give you some of them.(總論點,總體陳述我要論述的是我的母親所擁有的一些良好的品質(zhì)) First, she is a good listener who always pays attention to what I have to say, that makes her the person who knows me the best in our family. (用first引出了自己要論述的第一個觀點,我的母親是一個很好的傾聽者)And also, she has a good manner.(用and also引起了第二個觀點,我的母親待人和善) I’ve learned from her how to treat others around me with dignity and respect since I was young, thanks to her I made many good friends in my life. Also, she’s very supportive of me. (第三個觀點,母親總是十分的支持我的選擇)For example, she’s always wanted me to get in to Finance, but my passion is in Art. Although we had different views of what I should be studying in college, she was very supportive of me and my goals and decided to send me to the best Art school in the country.