托?？谡Z獨(dú)立話題：
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Who should be more responsible for children's education, schools or parents?
學(xué)生托福口語內(nèi)容 Student
Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's educations. For me, that I think that the school should be more responsible for children's educations. First, that childrens spend a large amount of time in school, and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and teach the knowledge. And therefore, I think that children is more influenced by the schools and so school should be more responsible for teach students to educate the childrens.
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發(fā)音 Pronunciation
1 therefore
語法 Grammar
1 educations education
2 childrens spend children spend
3 children is children are
4 and therefore Therefore
表達(dá) Expression
1 for childrens education (delete)
2 For me, I think I think
3 and teach the knowledge and be knowledgable
外教托?？谡Z示范 Teacher
Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's education, I think that the school should be more responsible. First, children spend a large amount of time in school, and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and be knowledgable. Therefore, I think the children are more influenced by the schools. Schools should be more responsible to educate the children.
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Who should be more responsible for children's education, schools or parents?
學(xué)生托福口語內(nèi)容 Student
Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's educations. For me, that I think that the school should be more responsible for children's educations. First, that childrens spend a large amount of time in school, and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and teach the knowledge. And therefore, I think that children is more influenced by the schools and so school should be more responsible for teach students to educate the childrens.
批改前 Before 批改后 After
發(fā)音 Pronunciation
1 therefore
語法 Grammar
1 educations education
2 childrens spend children spend
3 children is children are
4 and therefore Therefore
表達(dá) Expression
1 for childrens education (delete)
2 For me, I think I think
3 and teach the knowledge and be knowledgable
外教托?？谡Z示范 Teacher
Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's education, I think that the school should be more responsible. First, children spend a large amount of time in school, and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and be knowledgable. Therefore, I think the children are more influenced by the schools. Schools should be more responsible to educate the children.