5月22日托福寫(xiě)作真題回顧
As the leader of a city, what would you doto ensure the prosperity and success of the city?
A. creating job opportunities for theunemployed;
B. lowering food price;
C. providing affordable housing
5月22日托福寫(xiě)作范文及解析
題目大意：作為一個(gè)城市的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)想要保障城市的繁榮，要做以下三項(xiàng)：為失業(yè)人員提供就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)，降低食物價(jià)格，提供經(jīng)濟(jì)適用房。波波建議選擇為失業(yè)人員提供工作，證明其重要性，然后另外一段將兩個(gè)選項(xiàng)的不必要性闡述明白。
In a society changing amazingly, that how to gurantee the prosperity and success of a city， the common target of all citizens，has always been brought under the spotlight of the massive media. When talking about which factor plays the most crucial role in ensuring city's smooth development, among creating job vacancy, lowering food price or adjusting housing price, people’s notion varies from one to another. From my perspective, providing job opportunities for the unemployed is the best choice.
In the first instance, offering job vacancies to the laid-offs will not only guarantee the social security and safety but also strengthen the purchasing power of the public. For one thing, given the indisputable fact that the unemployed without any income are likely to commit crimes such as theft of wallets or burglaries due to lack of daily necessities, it is self-evident that the greater the number of laid-offs is, the more unstable our society will become. Therefore, after satisfying their basic needs of life with the income from the job offered by the government, they will no longer be a threat to the stability of the whole society, which is the solid foundation for social progress and prosperity. For another, as long as citizens with jobs have more free disposable money and thus possess stronger purchasing monitory power, the various industries will be stimulated and propelled to a large extent. To be specific, with the accruing wealth, an increasing number of people will purchase a private car to commute to their office, with the result that the whole industry of automobiles will experience a booming period. The same logic can also be true of other industries and fields.
Furthermore, there are obvious disadvantages of the other two policies, lowering the food price and making the price of house affordable. Despite the fact that keeping the food price low and providing affordable housing will lessen the financial burden of the dwellers in the city in a short term, these two practices would hinder the future success of the whole society. To illustrate, the low price of food will definitely decrease the income of food producers, especially the farmers who support their family by selling what they plant and raise. As a result, they are likely to have great difficulty in making their ends meet, thus ending up becoming homeless or jobless. Also, in a long run, increasing housing affordability will put a damper on the citizens’ passion for creating wealth and thus decrease the dynamics of the whole society. Specifically speaking, when the price is so cheap that nearly everyone can afford it with ease, no one will work hard any more.
In a nutshell, I am convinced that the most effective and efficient way to boom a city is to create more job opportunities for the jobless.
5月22日托福綜合寫(xiě)作
閱讀：歐洲人大概1520年左右就到了澳大利亞而不是1606年那么晚
1，歐洲發(fā)現(xiàn)的1550年左右的地圖上面就有澳大利亞部分地區(qū)的名字，很可能葡萄牙商人早在這個(gè)時(shí)期就到了澳大利亞
2，歐洲一本1593年的書(shū)中提到了一種叫Marsupials的袋鼠，由于袋鼠是很典型的澳大利亞動(dòng)物，所以很可能1606年以前就被歐洲人發(fā)現(xiàn)了
3，在澳大利亞發(fā)現(xiàn)了歐洲的鑰匙，土壤分析顯示年代可以追溯到1500s
聽(tīng)力：只能1606，不能更早
1，那些地區(qū)名字相同但是形狀不同，很可能是繪制地圖的人受水手的second hand story的影響
2，這種袋鼠不光澳大利亞有，南北美都有，所以書(shū)中描述的興許是美洲的袋鼠
3，后來(lái)的升級(jí)的檢測(cè)發(fā)現(xiàn)那些土壤不能用來(lái)推測(cè)鑰匙掉落的時(shí)間。
5月22日托福寫(xiě)作范文
The reading passage claims that the European people might have reached Australia around 1520 and provides three evidences to support this claim, but the speaker casts doubt on those evidence and believes the Europeans arrived in 1606.
First of all, the reading passage argues that European maps around 1550 includes names of Australian areas, which can be an indicator the 16th century trip of the Europeans, but the speaker uses the different shapes of the areas on the maps and the actual areas in Australia to contradict the passage, then he speculates that, since second hand story referred to at that time, the information on the maps may come from Asian sailors who have reached Australia and spread second hand story but not Europeans themselves.
Second, the speaker claims that the mention of Marsupials in European book in 1593 cannot be used to prove an earlier arrive because Marsupials do not live exclusively in Australia, they also live in North and South Americas, and due to the fact that Europeans had already explored the Americas, that European book depicted Marsupials does not mean Europeans made it to Australia before 1593.
Finally, the dating of soil around the European keys found in Australia cannot convince the speaker because later, an improved dating method indicates that the soil around the keys could not be used to speculate when the keys were dropped, and previous calculation was not accurate enough.
5月22日托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作
Which of the following is the most important thing for a country’s leader to do to ensure the prosperity and success of the country.
1, create more jobs for the unemployed;
2,improve agriculture and lower the food prices;
3,provide affordable housing.
近幾次考試的三選一類題目比較多，建議大家多練習(xí)練習(xí)機(jī)經(jīng)里面的三選一的題目，有的題目要求選好的、重要的，有的題目要求選次要的。像這道題就是一道擇優(yōu)的題目?？梢詤⒖家韵掠^點(diǎn)：
選擇improve agriculture and lower the food prices.
分論點(diǎn)一：解決基本的“溫”和“飽”問(wèn)題，這是每個(gè)國(guó)家發(fā)展的前提;
分論點(diǎn)二：比create more jobs for the unemployed更好操作和執(zhí)行;
分論點(diǎn)三：比provide affordable housing惠及更多的人。
5月22日托福寫(xiě)作例文：
All governments on the planet engage in finding the best methods to develop their country into a more powerful nation with abundant resources. These methods are supposed to cover as many people as possible and with no doubt, be effective enough to bring about profits as soon as possible. Among all the approaches that are aiming at advancing a country, I firmly believe that the issues associated with food is more important and should be paid more attention to by countries.
First of all, under no circumstances can human live without food supply, which is the premise of all human activities. As a result, solving the problems in agriculture and the availability of food to all people is an essential factor in the development of a country. When people have rice to eat, they have more energy to work in the fields; when people are supplied with meat, they are more passionate in manufacturing crafts and tools; when people have cheaper fruits on the markets, they become more willing to serve his customers at work; when people have easier access to clothes, they are more inspired in doing researches and experiments. No progress can be made with hungry stomachs.
Second, it is easier to advance agriculture than to create more job positions for unemployed workers. Increasing agricultural production depend largely on good command of planting or farming knowledge and technology. For the knowledge aspect, information can be obtained through diverse channels like books, magazines and the internet, where information is not only authorized but also comprehensive. For the technology aspect, the governments can either invest in researches in crop properties or genetic modification or purchase equipment or technology from those few highly developed countries who fulfill the responsibility to help more other countries. Nonetheless, creating work opportunities is not that easy, since companies, either state owned or privately owned, have certain precise requirement for the number of workers according to the types of business they undertake and current situation of the market.
Finally, promoting the food industry benefit more people than affordable housing can do. As we have discussed above, food is needed by everybody and better agricultural conditions make a so great difference that it extends how far a government can go. In contrast, few people need houses, especially in this modernized society, as a direct consequence of building more housing apartments, most individuals already possess a house to live in, where means whether the houses are affordable or not has little or no influence on the overall development of the country.
To sum up, I believe what we eat means more than what we do and where we live. The leaders of all countries should focus more on the improvement of food availability and more and more people will live a happier life.
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