咱們新題當(dāng)中出現(xiàn)了一道題:叫
Describe the first time you ate a kind of snack or food
我的天吶!!! 這么簡(jiǎn)單一道題,但是大家想說(shuō)出彩還是很難的.
為啥呢?
往下看!
來(lái)!咱們看看學(xué)生咋說(shuō)!
I ate red bean pie with my friend for the first time, and it was very delicious, and it was very sweet, and I ate two of them, and I like them very much.
不是老師故意這么寫,這真的是一個(gè)學(xué)生在前兩天上課的時(shí)候的“作品”,可能大家有千言萬(wàn)語(yǔ),但是當(dāng)你在考試的時(shí)候,那么緊張,可能說(shuō)出來(lái)的也就只有這些了。
所以:
大家千萬(wàn)不要覺得自己什么都懂,因?yàn)椋?BR> 懂不等于會(huì)說(shuō), 會(huì)說(shuō)不等于能說(shuō)好,能說(shuō)好不等于能考好!
所以大家一定要練!練!練!
咱們來(lái)看看我當(dāng)時(shí)是怎么給他修改的,大家一定要注意,學(xué)我說(shuō)東西,不要單單學(xué)個(gè)皮毛,那么什么是根本的東西呢?---【就是咱們?cè)诨卮饐栴}的時(shí)候的小框架---邏輯!!!】
how did you feel about this?
Well, I felt a little bit curious, you know, about how it would taste, cos I heard that it was tasty, but I didn't know whether it was my cup of tea, so I just took a little bite, and it was crispy and sweet, so I smiled and took a larger bite, you know what, my mouth was filled with creamy and soft cheese, it was amazing, you know. So I just let my firend have a try, the same as me, she also said that it was unbelievable. So I guess this is how I felt at that time.
這個(gè)是不是感覺豐滿很多了,而且這些詞兒一點(diǎn)兒也不難吶,我就用了crispy, creamy 這樣的加分詞匯,其他的你們是不是都認(rèn)識(shí)?那么我是怎么說(shuō)出來(lái)這個(gè)畫面的呢?那就是邏輯啦!!!
所以:
在我的課上,我都會(huì)講,什么時(shí)候用時(shí)間邏輯,地點(diǎn)邏輯,內(nèi)容邏輯,空間邏輯等等等等,讓你畫面感足足的,考試的時(shí)候,才能更有可能把你學(xué)過(guò)的一些詞兒都用上!

