高三英語作文 涉外酒店暑期兼職工應聘信

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假如你是李華,最近你從報紙上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼職工的廣告,請你根據(jù)下列要點提示寫一封應聘信。
    1.李華,女,18歲,身體健康。
    2.擅長英語,口語流利。
    3.性格外向,交際能力強。
    注意:
    1.詞數(shù)100左右。
    2.書信格式已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。
    3.可以適當拓展。
    Dear Sir or Madame,
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    參考范文
    Dear Sir or Madame,
    I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper. My name is Li Hua and I am 18 years old. I think I will be fit for the job as a waitress in your hotel thi s summer vacation. My advantages are as follows:
    Firstly, I am healthy and strong. I can work for long hours in summer. Secondly, my English is excellent. I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners.
    Finally , I am outgoing and good at communicating with others. As a result, I am popular among my classmates and teachers.
    I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel. Im looking forward to your reply.
    Yours,
    Wang Hua
    【解析】
    試題分析:假如你是李華,最近你從報紙上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼職工的廣告,請你根據(jù)要點提示寫一封應聘信。寫作時不要逐句翻譯,可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全,語句通順,同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞,同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。
    【亮點說明】I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper. 開頭表明自己的目的,一目了然;I think I will be fit for the job as a waitress in your hotel this summer vacation. 運用賓語從句;I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners.運用固定句式與高級詞組結(jié)合;同時運用連接詞,使文章連接自然,如Firstly首先,F(xiàn)inally最后等,I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel. Im looking forward to your reply.此句式為文章增色,顯得文章很有檔次。