2016年托福寫(xiě)作常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤:中國(guó)信息技術(shù)

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    找出下列句子的一處 語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤:
    As China intensifies its efforts to upgrading its traditional industries with information technologies, a large number of internet data centers have mushroomed, triggering a huge demand for server chips.
    ♜ 適用考題:
    Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvements for the quality of people's lives have already taken place. (2012.9.22)
    答案:
    As China intensifies its efforts to upgrade its traditional industries with information technologies, a large number of internet data centers have mushroomed, triggering a huge demand for server chips.