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【第一篇：I can help do housework】
I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?
【要領點評】
本篇作文的題目是“我可以幫助做家務”，作者主要敘述自己在家?guī)椭龅氖虑?，介紹自己的名字，所在年級及在家能做的家務，很詳細，到位。
小朋友們在寫作時，應盡量寫一些親自經歷的事情，這樣會避免在作文時顯得太空，因為只有自己經常做的事情印象才會特別深刻。寫作時還要注意大小寫和時態(tài)。
【第二篇：My Favourite Food】
Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
How about you? What’s your favourite food?
【要領點評】
My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是簡單地列舉出自己喜歡的每一種食物，而是有詳有略地進行介紹。整篇文章用詞準確、語言流暢、沒有語法錯誤。另外，文章中出現了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心查字典了。
【第三篇：My weekend】
There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.
【要領點評】
寫法：這篇習作是按照時間順序記敘周末的活動，記敘了周六和周日的上午和下午分別做了哪些活動及對活動的感受。
即：周六上午：舞蹈課→下午：做作業(yè)和幫媽媽做清潔→周日上午：看望祖父母→下午：閱讀→晚上：看電視，與父母交流→感受：高興和愉快。
我們還可以選取周六和周日中的幾個比較主要的活動來寫，先說明什么時間在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活動順序把活動內容寫清楚，后抒發(fā)一下對這次活動或這個周末的感想。
時態(tài)：這篇短文我們可以用三種時態(tài)來寫: a.一般過去時(主要描述你上個周末是怎樣度過的);b.一般現在時(主要描述你經常怎樣度過周末);c.一般將來時(主要描述你要怎樣過周末)。這里我們來表述平時是如何過周末的，所以采用一般現在時來寫。
注意：活動的相關表達方法可采用舊知識，eg.(例)起床get up，和新知識，eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易錯寫成nu。還要注意不要出現病句，eg. “I often watch TV with my parents.”不要寫成 “I often with my parents watch TV .” 詞量上控制在50 ~ 80 之間。
【第一篇：I can help do housework】
I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?
【要領點評】
本篇作文的題目是“我可以幫助做家務”，作者主要敘述自己在家?guī)椭龅氖虑?，介紹自己的名字，所在年級及在家能做的家務，很詳細，到位。
小朋友們在寫作時，應盡量寫一些親自經歷的事情，這樣會避免在作文時顯得太空，因為只有自己經常做的事情印象才會特別深刻。寫作時還要注意大小寫和時態(tài)。
【第二篇：My Favourite Food】
Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
How about you? What’s your favourite food?
【要領點評】
My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是簡單地列舉出自己喜歡的每一種食物，而是有詳有略地進行介紹。整篇文章用詞準確、語言流暢、沒有語法錯誤。另外，文章中出現了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心查字典了。
【第三篇：My weekend】
There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.
【要領點評】
寫法：這篇習作是按照時間順序記敘周末的活動，記敘了周六和周日的上午和下午分別做了哪些活動及對活動的感受。
即：周六上午：舞蹈課→下午：做作業(yè)和幫媽媽做清潔→周日上午：看望祖父母→下午：閱讀→晚上：看電視，與父母交流→感受：高興和愉快。
我們還可以選取周六和周日中的幾個比較主要的活動來寫，先說明什么時間在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活動順序把活動內容寫清楚，后抒發(fā)一下對這次活動或這個周末的感想。
時態(tài)：這篇短文我們可以用三種時態(tài)來寫: a.一般過去時(主要描述你上個周末是怎樣度過的);b.一般現在時(主要描述你經常怎樣度過周末);c.一般將來時(主要描述你要怎樣過周末)。這里我們來表述平時是如何過周末的，所以采用一般現在時來寫。
注意：活動的相關表達方法可采用舊知識，eg.(例)起床get up，和新知識，eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易錯寫成nu。還要注意不要出現病句，eg. “I often watch TV with my parents.”不要寫成 “I often with my parents watch TV .” 詞量上控制在50 ~ 80 之間。