Once you have a first draft you can delete material that is unrelated to your thesis andadd material necessary to illustrate your points and make your paper convincing.
【分析】復合句。主句主干為 you can delete material and make your paper convincing。句首的once 引導條件狀語從句;that 引導的定語從句修飾其前的 material;形容詞短語 necessary to illustrateyour points 做后置定語修飾第二個 material。
【譯文】一旦初稿寫成，你就可以刪除與文章主題無關的材料，添加需要的材料來證明你的觀點并使文章具有說服力。
【分析】復合句。主句主干為 you can delete material and make your paper convincing。句首的once 引導條件狀語從句;that 引導的定語從句修飾其前的 material;形容詞短語 necessary to illustrateyour points 做后置定語修飾第二個 material。
【譯文】一旦初稿寫成，你就可以刪除與文章主題無關的材料，添加需要的材料來證明你的觀點并使文章具有說服力。