Thank you for your offer invite me to the free 1. __________
summer English course in your school. As for my 2. __________
choice of the two courses, I’d prefer the five-weeks 3. __________
course for 50 hours. This would allows me more 4. __________
time to see your beautiful country while learned 5. __________
language. I’d like to do some traveling and make 6. __________
a few new friends. In all the subjects I’m learning 7. __________
at school, I like English best. I hope me to take this 8. __________
chance to improve my spoken English level as much 9. __________
as possibly. I believe I will have a wonderful time 10. _________
in England this summer.
【答案解析】
1. 把invite改為inviting?，F(xiàn)在分詞作定語(yǔ)修飾offer。
2. 此行正確。
3. 把five-weeks改為five-week?！皵?shù)詞+連字符號(hào)+名詞”作定語(yǔ)，其中的名詞要用單數(shù)。
4. 把a(bǔ)llows改為allow。在助動(dòng)詞will, would及情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can, may, must等后面，永遠(yuǎn)要用動(dòng)詞原形。
5. 把learned改為learning。while learning=while I’m learning。
6. 在language前加the。特指英語(yǔ)這種語(yǔ)言。
7. 把In改為Of。subjects“科目”，English是其中一個(gè)“科目”，表示級(jí)的比較范圍，若是整體與個(gè)別的關(guān)系，就用of。指時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)范圍，才用in。
8. 去掉me。主語(yǔ)希望自己做某事，直接用hope to do sth，事實(shí)上，也不能用hope sb to do sth這一句型。
9. 去掉level。這是中文式英語(yǔ)。improve=make…better。
10. 把possibly改為possible。as…as possible(盡……)是習(xí)語(yǔ)。
summer English course in your school. As for my 2. __________
choice of the two courses, I’d prefer the five-weeks 3. __________
course for 50 hours. This would allows me more 4. __________
time to see your beautiful country while learned 5. __________
language. I’d like to do some traveling and make 6. __________
a few new friends. In all the subjects I’m learning 7. __________
at school, I like English best. I hope me to take this 8. __________
chance to improve my spoken English level as much 9. __________
as possibly. I believe I will have a wonderful time 10. _________
in England this summer.
【答案解析】
1. 把invite改為inviting?，F(xiàn)在分詞作定語(yǔ)修飾offer。
2. 此行正確。
3. 把five-weeks改為five-week?！皵?shù)詞+連字符號(hào)+名詞”作定語(yǔ)，其中的名詞要用單數(shù)。
4. 把a(bǔ)llows改為allow。在助動(dòng)詞will, would及情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can, may, must等后面，永遠(yuǎn)要用動(dòng)詞原形。
5. 把learned改為learning。while learning=while I’m learning。
6. 在language前加the。特指英語(yǔ)這種語(yǔ)言。
7. 把In改為Of。subjects“科目”，English是其中一個(gè)“科目”，表示級(jí)的比較范圍，若是整體與個(gè)別的關(guān)系，就用of。指時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)范圍，才用in。
8. 去掉me。主語(yǔ)希望自己做某事，直接用hope to do sth，事實(shí)上，也不能用hope sb to do sth這一句型。
9. 去掉level。這是中文式英語(yǔ)。improve=make…better。
10. 把possibly改為possible。as…as possible(盡……)是習(xí)語(yǔ)。