個人陳述(PS)是國內(nèi)學(xué)生申請英國大學(xué)研究生必須要提交的申請材料之一。個人陳述也是申請者對自己的評述，如個人能力、性格、愛好等。個人陳述的好壞有時和申請成功緊密相關(guān)。那么如何出一篇好的個人陳述呢?首先大家要反思自己的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷;確立文章的主題，寫作也要有自己的特色。同學(xué)們可以多參看寫優(yōu)秀的個人陳述范文，結(jié)合自己的實際情況才能寫出好的PS.由于商科類申請的同學(xué)偏多，無憂考*地為大家分享一篇商科類的個人陳述，希望大家可以從中找到靈感。
AsachildIoftenaccompaniedmyfathertohissmallcoinshopandspenthourswatchinghimwork.WhenIwasolder,Isometimessetupdisplays,waitedoncustomers,andevenbalancedthebooks.Thisexperienceinstilledinmethedesiretoownandmanagemyownbusinesssomeday,yetIunderstandthatthebusinessworldtodayismorecomplex.Thiscomplexityrequiresmoreeducation,andwiththatinmind,IamapplyingtotheMaster’sofBusinessAdministrationprogramatIndianaUniversityBloomington(IUB).
通過一個故事開頭，講述自己為何對business感興趣。
Inadditiontomyhelpingoutinmyfather’sbusiness,Ihavehadnumerousotherworkexperiencesthatfurtherenhancemyqualificationsforthisprogram.MyresumeenumeratesthevariouspositionsIhaveheldatKerasotesTheaters,Chili’srestaurants,andIndianaUniversity’snewStudentRecreationalSportsCenter(SRSC),andwhatallofthesepositionshaveincommonisanemphasisonservingthepubliceffectively.Further,asanassistantmanagerattheShowplace11andastaffcoordinatorattheSRSC,Ihavegainedvaluableexpertiseinmanagingemployeesandcreatingworkschedules.Bothofthesepositionshaveallowedmetodevelopmysalesandpeopleskills,whichareextremelyimportantinanincreasinglyservice-drivenmarketplace.
講述自己的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。但是感覺在談及經(jīng)歷時候不夠具體，應(yīng)該說明具體做了什么事情，從中得到什么經(jīng)驗或者教訓(xùn)。
Notallofmyworkexperiencehasbeenasapaidemployee.PartofmyvolunteeringexperienceatMiddlewayHouse,thelocalbatteredwomen’sshelter,involvedextensiveworkoncomputers,includingwordprocessing,organizingdatabasesandcreatingspreadsheets.Also,IrecentlyparticipatedinaninternshipprogramforacademiccreditwiththeEliLillycorporationinthepersonneldivision.Asamanagementintern,IwasabletowatchtheworkingsofamajorcorporationupcloseandwouldliketheopportunitytocombinemyexperienceswiththetheoreticalbackgroundavailableintheMBAprogramatIUB,withitsemphasisoncomputers,marketingandhumanresources.
志愿者活動同樣值得在ps中講述。
MysuccessfulinternshipisoneelementofmyoverallacademicsuccessasanundergraduatehereatIUB,yetIhavealsomadetimeforavarietyofextracurricularactivities,includingworkingformysororityandcompetinginintramuralbasketball.MypositiveexperiencesherehaveresultedinmydesiretostayinBloomingtontocontinuemyacademicendeavors;furthermore,continuingmyeducationherewouldallowmetomakeimportantbusinesscontacts,withthecareergoalofopeningmyowncomputerconsultingfirmintheMidwest.
AsachildIoftenaccompaniedmyfathertohissmallcoinshopandspenthourswatchinghimwork.WhenIwasolder,Isometimessetupdisplays,waitedoncustomers,andevenbalancedthebooks.Thisexperienceinstilledinmethedesiretoownandmanagemyownbusinesssomeday,yetIunderstandthatthebusinessworldtodayismorecomplex.Thiscomplexityrequiresmoreeducation,andwiththatinmind,IamapplyingtotheMaster’sofBusinessAdministrationprogramatIndianaUniversityBloomington(IUB).
通過一個故事開頭，講述自己為何對business感興趣。
Inadditiontomyhelpingoutinmyfather’sbusiness,Ihavehadnumerousotherworkexperiencesthatfurtherenhancemyqualificationsforthisprogram.MyresumeenumeratesthevariouspositionsIhaveheldatKerasotesTheaters,Chili’srestaurants,andIndianaUniversity’snewStudentRecreationalSportsCenter(SRSC),andwhatallofthesepositionshaveincommonisanemphasisonservingthepubliceffectively.Further,asanassistantmanagerattheShowplace11andastaffcoordinatorattheSRSC,Ihavegainedvaluableexpertiseinmanagingemployeesandcreatingworkschedules.Bothofthesepositionshaveallowedmetodevelopmysalesandpeopleskills,whichareextremelyimportantinanincreasinglyservice-drivenmarketplace.
講述自己的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。但是感覺在談及經(jīng)歷時候不夠具體，應(yīng)該說明具體做了什么事情，從中得到什么經(jīng)驗或者教訓(xùn)。
Notallofmyworkexperiencehasbeenasapaidemployee.PartofmyvolunteeringexperienceatMiddlewayHouse,thelocalbatteredwomen’sshelter,involvedextensiveworkoncomputers,includingwordprocessing,organizingdatabasesandcreatingspreadsheets.Also,IrecentlyparticipatedinaninternshipprogramforacademiccreditwiththeEliLillycorporationinthepersonneldivision.Asamanagementintern,IwasabletowatchtheworkingsofamajorcorporationupcloseandwouldliketheopportunitytocombinemyexperienceswiththetheoreticalbackgroundavailableintheMBAprogramatIUB,withitsemphasisoncomputers,marketingandhumanresources.
志愿者活動同樣值得在ps中講述。
MysuccessfulinternshipisoneelementofmyoverallacademicsuccessasanundergraduatehereatIUB,yetIhavealsomadetimeforavarietyofextracurricularactivities,includingworkingformysororityandcompetinginintramuralbasketball.MypositiveexperiencesherehaveresultedinmydesiretostayinBloomingtontocontinuemyacademicendeavors;furthermore,continuingmyeducationherewouldallowmetomakeimportantbusinesscontacts,withthecareergoalofopeningmyowncomputerconsultingfirmintheMidwest.