英語(yǔ)作文，是指用英語(yǔ)針對(duì)某一內(nèi)容寫出一篇文章，是英語(yǔ)考試最常見的一種題目類型，英語(yǔ)作文要求閱讀、寫作能力比較高，也是考生最容易失分的題型。以下是整理的《小學(xué)六年級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文及點(diǎn)評(píng)》，希望幫助到您。
【Zoom’s Weekend】
Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
寫法：這篇習(xí)作是按時(shí)間順序記敘了Zoom的周末活動(dòng)。
時(shí)態(tài)：這篇文章可以用三種時(shí)態(tài)來寫，由于本單元主要講的是一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，所以我們采用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)比較合適。
句型：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)詞過去式+過去時(shí)間。
注意：活動(dòng)的相關(guān)表達(dá)法采用新舊知識(shí)結(jié)合的方法，但要注意動(dòng)詞過去式的拼寫。
【A Farewell Party】
It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.
Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.
Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：
寫法：這篇習(xí)作記敘了一個(gè)告別晚會(huì)。記敘了學(xué)年末的告別晚會(huì)上大家都表演了什么節(jié)目，以及晚會(huì)后大家要去看望劉蕓的故事。
時(shí)態(tài)：這篇習(xí)作可采用三種時(shí)態(tài)來寫。由于本單元主要出現(xiàn)的時(shí)態(tài)是一般將來時(shí)和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，所以這里我們才用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)來寫。
句型：
一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)詞原形+其他。
現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)：主語(yǔ)+現(xiàn)在分詞+其他。
一般將來時(shí)：主語(yǔ)+ be going to / will +動(dòng)詞原形+其他。
注意：由于本篇文章中所涉及的時(shí)態(tài)比較多，所以要注意一下時(shí)態(tài)的變化。學(xué)生們都在表演什么節(jié)目可以用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，將要去做什么，要用將來時(shí)。另外還要注意，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)在肯定句中，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞也要用第三人稱單數(shù)。
【Tom’s Holiday】
Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
寫法：這篇習(xí)作是按照地點(diǎn)的順序記敘假期里的活動(dòng)，記敘了假期里去北京做了哪些活動(dòng)以及對(duì)活動(dòng)的感受。
時(shí)態(tài)：這篇文章可采用兩種時(shí)態(tài)來寫。由于本單元主要講述的是一般過去時(shí)的用法，所以這里大部分我們采用一般過去時(shí)比較合適。
句型：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)詞過去式+其他?? 主語(yǔ)+will+動(dòng)詞原形+其他
注意：活動(dòng)的相關(guān)表達(dá)法可采用舊知識(shí)和新知識(shí)相結(jié)合去寫，但要注意動(dòng)詞過去式的變化規(guī)則。例：eat 的過去式為ate，為不規(guī)則變化。
【Zoom’s Weekend】
Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
寫法：這篇習(xí)作是按時(shí)間順序記敘了Zoom的周末活動(dòng)。
時(shí)態(tài)：這篇文章可以用三種時(shí)態(tài)來寫，由于本單元主要講的是一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，所以我們采用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)比較合適。
句型：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)詞過去式+過去時(shí)間。
注意：活動(dòng)的相關(guān)表達(dá)法采用新舊知識(shí)結(jié)合的方法，但要注意動(dòng)詞過去式的拼寫。
【A Farewell Party】
It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.
Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.
Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：
寫法：這篇習(xí)作記敘了一個(gè)告別晚會(huì)。記敘了學(xué)年末的告別晚會(huì)上大家都表演了什么節(jié)目，以及晚會(huì)后大家要去看望劉蕓的故事。
時(shí)態(tài)：這篇習(xí)作可采用三種時(shí)態(tài)來寫。由于本單元主要出現(xiàn)的時(shí)態(tài)是一般將來時(shí)和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，所以這里我們才用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)來寫。
句型：
一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)詞原形+其他。
現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)：主語(yǔ)+現(xiàn)在分詞+其他。
一般將來時(shí)：主語(yǔ)+ be going to / will +動(dòng)詞原形+其他。
注意：由于本篇文章中所涉及的時(shí)態(tài)比較多，所以要注意一下時(shí)態(tài)的變化。學(xué)生們都在表演什么節(jié)目可以用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，將要去做什么，要用將來時(shí)。另外還要注意，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)在肯定句中，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞也要用第三人稱單數(shù)。
【Tom’s Holiday】
Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
寫法：這篇習(xí)作是按照地點(diǎn)的順序記敘假期里的活動(dòng)，記敘了假期里去北京做了哪些活動(dòng)以及對(duì)活動(dòng)的感受。
時(shí)態(tài)：這篇文章可采用兩種時(shí)態(tài)來寫。由于本單元主要講述的是一般過去時(shí)的用法，所以這里大部分我們采用一般過去時(shí)比較合適。
句型：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)詞過去式+其他?? 主語(yǔ)+will+動(dòng)詞原形+其他
注意：活動(dòng)的相關(guān)表達(dá)法可采用舊知識(shí)和新知識(shí)相結(jié)合去寫，但要注意動(dòng)詞過去式的變化規(guī)則。例：eat 的過去式為ate，為不規(guī)則變化。