2021年6月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)優(yōu)秀作文賞析

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    【篇一】2021年6月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)優(yōu)秀作文賞析
    There are many ways of traveling. People may t ravel by plane if they want to t ravel far andreach their destination in a shorter time. I t is the most comfor table but expensive way. Mostpeople travel by train because it is a less expensive way but the compar tments are crampedand stuffy. Bus journey is a cheaper way but it is spent on narrow, bumpy roads which arecrowded with traffic. Trips by ship may be the cheapest and most comfortable way but it takestoo much time.
    I like traveling by bike. I can set out when I like and stop when I like. I can go wherever I likeso that I can enjoy delightful spots rarely visited by other travelers. When I feel tired, I sitdown by the bike and have a good rest. Besides, I can save much money for tickets and muchtime in waiting for thet rain or bus. I can cover more places by riding a bike than going on foot.
    Traveling by bike is good to health. It is really a sort of good exercise to st rengthen one'smuscles and to test one's will. Moreover, it brings no pollution to the air. So it helps to cleanthe atmosphere.
    CET6六級(jí)作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析:
    ·旅游的方式有多種
    * Plane
    * Train
    * Bu s
    * Ship
    ·我愛騎車出游
    * Convenient
    * Accessible to any place
    * Save money and time
    ·騎車出游有益健康
    * St rengthen one's will
    * Test one's will
    * No pollution
    CET6六級(jí)作文內(nèi)容分析:
    本文是一篇簡(jiǎn)單的議論文, 文中首先列舉了多種交通工具并說(shuō)明優(yōu)缺點(diǎn), 然后落實(shí)到作者自己的喜好———騎車出游, 接著說(shuō)出喜好的理由。最后一段為總結(jié)。本文篇幅不長(zhǎng), 但層次清楚, 又很連貫, 每一段的第一句均為主題句, 段中意思統(tǒng)一, 不跑題。本文應(yīng)是一篇四級(jí)作文。
    CET6六級(jí)作文萬(wàn)能句型:
    destination n. 目的地
    compartment n. 車廂
    cramped and stuffy 擁擠
    narrow, bumpy roads 狹窄而顛簸的路面
    set out 出發(fā)
    strengthen one's muscle and test one's will 增強(qiáng)體魄鍛煉意志
    【篇二】2021年6月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)優(yōu)秀作文賞析
    Everywhere you go, you'll see people, male or female, old or young, wearing jeans. Indeed, jeans have grown more and more popular since the first pair was born. In newspapers andmagazines or on TV you often come across such ads as "Buy these jeans they are cheap. Buythem — they are hardwea ring. Buy them — they are comfortable." I think there is no cheatingin these ads.
    In the first place, jeans are so cheap that almost everyone can afford to buy a pair, especiallyfor students and wage-earners. No one would not pay less and get more.
    That jeans wear well and wash well is their second superiority to other kinds of trousers. Wherever you go and whatever you do, you'll find jeans your good companion. Made of purecotton, jeans are very comfortable. What is more, they produce a good image and make youlook casual, sporty, tough, elegant, and sophisticated.
    Modern fashions come and go quickly, but, thanks to Levi Strauss, jeans alwaysr emain people'sfirst choice.
    CET6六級(jí)作文內(nèi)容分析:
    本文是一篇說(shuō)明文, 是一篇三段式作文。第一段說(shuō)明牛仔褲流行的現(xiàn)象, 并以三句廣告詞說(shuō)出流行的原因, 即三大特點(diǎn)———價(jià)廉、耐穿和舒適。第二段中有三小段, 分述上述三大特點(diǎn), 并加上評(píng)論。在最后一小段中自然地補(bǔ)充了牛仔褲其他特點(diǎn), 使論述內(nèi)容更加豐富。結(jié)尾段只有一句, 但簡(jiǎn)練且總結(jié)性強(qiáng)。
    CET6六級(jí)作文萬(wàn)能句型:
    see...+ ing 看到……做某事
    There is no cheating in these ads. 這些廣告并沒有欺騙。
    wage-earner n. 工薪階層
    No one would not pay less and get more. 人人都愿要價(jià)廉物美。( 本句中用了雙重否定的表達(dá))
    wear well and wash well 耐穿耐洗
    produce a good image 產(chǎn)生一好的形象
    sporty a. 如運(yùn)動(dòng)員
    tough a. 堅(jiān)韌
    【篇三】2021年6月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)優(yōu)秀作文賞析
    "Playing a Game Is Fun Only When You Win." Do You Agree or Disagree with ThisStatement?
    Some people argue that athletes, while playing games, should adhere to the principle "Friendship first, competition second," and that is the true sportsman ship.
    Personally, I disagree with this point of view. There is no denying that competitors should befriendly with each other. However, the primary concern of every player, after hard training fora year or two, is to win the game. His/ Her sole motivation, either during the training or in therace, is prompted by a looming hope and a prospective championship. Be it a chess game or acompetition of weight-lifting or a race of a hundred-metre dash, the case is always true. If he/ she wins the game, high rewards, flowers and honour will pile upon him/ her. If he/ she losesonce or twice, he/ she will become less courageous for the third time. However, several lossesmay beat him/ her down, and his/ her next battle, if he/she is daring to fight, will probably bea fiasco.
    So, in my mind, the fun or happiness of playing a game lies in the athlete's ultimateachievement of the goal. We all know Napoleon's famous saying that a soldier who does nothave the ambition to become a marshal is not a real soldier. I agree that an unambitiousathlete is not a real athlete.
    CET6六級(jí)作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析:
    ·some people's a rgue — "Friendship first, competition second" = true sportsmanship
    ·My argue
    * Primary concern of every player — to win the game
    * Motivated by championship
    * Several losses — fiasco
    ·Conclusion
    * Fun or happiness in ultimate achievement
    * Unambitious athlete — not a real athlete
    CET6六級(jí)作文內(nèi)容分析:
    本文是一篇議論文, 作者的論點(diǎn)打破了“ 友誼第一, 比賽第二”的常規(guī)原則, 而認(rèn)為比賽就是要贏, 文中充滿了競(jìng)爭(zhēng)意識(shí), 但說(shuō)理性很強(qiáng), 很難讓人不信服。在結(jié)尾段中借用了拿破侖的名言“ 不想當(dāng)元帥的士兵不是一個(gè)真正的士兵”, 并依此證明“沒有雄心的運(yùn)動(dòng)員就不是一個(gè)真正的運(yùn)動(dòng)員”。此文很值得六級(jí)和托福應(yīng)試者學(xué)習(xí)。
    CET6六級(jí)作文萬(wàn)能句型:
    adhere to = follow
    sportsmanship n. 運(yùn)動(dòng)員精神
    There is no denying that... 不可否認(rèn)
    be f riendly with 與……友好
    prima ry concern 主要關(guān)切的事
    be prompted by a looming hope and a prospective championship 受到一種隱約的希望和未來(lái)冠軍的激勵(lì)
    Be it a chess game... =Whether it be a ches s game... 這是一讓步狀語(yǔ)從句,句中謂語(yǔ)為虛擬語(yǔ)氣
    weight-lif ting 舉重
    a hundered-metre dash 百米賽跑
    become less cour ageous 銳氣頓減
    fiasco n. 慘敗
    Napoleon's famous saying that a soldier who does not have the ambition to become a marshalis not a real soldier拿破侖的名言“不想當(dāng)元帥的士兵不是一個(gè)真正的士兵”
    unambitious a. 無(wú)雄心的