為了幫助在眾多考生解決托福作文的常見問題，出國留學網小編整理的關于托福作文技巧的知識，希望可以幫助考生度過考試的難關，下面是小編搜集的托福獨立寫作常見審題誤區(qū)的相關資訊，歡迎參考!
托福獨立寫作常見審題誤區(qū)
托福獨立寫作常見審題雷區(qū)，每當問考生，寫獨立寫作時，最重要的一環(huán)是什么，往往聽到的答案都會是諸如“辭藻華麗”、“句式豐富”或“大詞難詞高逼格詞”等答案，偶有一些聲音可能會提到“文章邏輯”、“行文連貫”等跟文章組織結構相關的思考。參看過獨立寫作的評分標準之后，我們其實能清晰明確地理解，考官想要的絕不只是單方面的一個點。那么，如果非要選一個“最重要”來當作答案的話，真正在考場上寫獨立寫作時，最最重要的一環(huán)，應歸屬審題二字。
我們將審題的雷區(qū)大致歸結為兩個方面，一是宏觀層面踩到了大雷，即題目回答角度完全跑偏，非但“fail to address the task and the topic effectively”，更是“fail to address the task and the topic”;二是微觀層面被散彈擊中，即題目雖然沒有理解錯，但在論述過程中因為審題不仔細或論述不嚴謹，亦或是論述過程中思路出現(xiàn)偏差而帶來的論述跑偏。
首先我們先來看一下所謂宏觀層面的審題雷區(qū)，這樣的審題錯誤往往是由于考生錯誤地理解考題的本意，而給出了可謂“驢唇不對馬嘴”的答案，以TPO 25為例：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
以下是一個學生給出的一個主體段：
The main reason for my disagreement is that community service could help students gain knowledge and abilities that cannot be acquired in school. They can get acquainted with people in different age, with different backgrounds, and having different hobbies in helping neighborhoods. This means that students may have to learn how to express ideas, listen to others and cooperate with others, since much team work tends to be involved in the process of doing community service. Last month, I helped plant several trees in my community, and met a retired professor who is also a volunteer. He imparted me a great deal of knowledge about trees and planting. Because of his age, I also helped him finish nearly all labor work and he was more like a director who gave me suggestions and guidance. Evidently, if rejecting community service, I would definitely lose such a precious opportunity.
如果單看上面這個段落，不難看出，作者思路清晰、文字流暢、論述有理有據，但是如果結合題目，其實也不難體會到，作者清晰的思路其實都用在了一個跑偏的方向上。題目問我們“是否同意：如今的年輕人并沒有花足夠的時間做社區(qū)服務”，上文中第一句里的“disagree”告訴我們他不同意，但是讀完整個段落，你是否發(fā)現(xiàn)，他不同意的并不是題目，而是這樣一個命題，即“如今的年輕人不應該花時間來做社區(qū)服務”，因為整個段落他講的都是做社區(qū)服務的好處。
如果回答題目，很明顯應該分析的是年輕人為什么已經花了/并沒有花足夠的時間做社區(qū)服務。所以分析的角度也自然應該從年輕人出發(fā)，比如如果同意，可能會說現(xiàn)在年輕人太忙了，或是服務意識下降了，或是現(xiàn)在的社會足夠健全，不需要年輕人了;如果不同意可以說現(xiàn)在的年輕人服務意識更強了，學校組織或公司組織的服務活動很多，或一些民間NGO等等都讓現(xiàn)在的年輕人花了更多時間在help communities上。
這樣，才是正確的解題思路，而按照上文的思路，就算文字再好，邏輯再連貫，也只能接受成績不理想的后果了。這種跑題我們可以稱之為是一種宏觀的、徹頭徹尾的跑題，像踩中了地雷，還是那種一踩即爆的雷，基本后果只能是粉身碎骨。不過如果在考試之前加以足夠的練習，這種嚴重的跑題大部分同學基本都可以避免，然而接下來這種微觀的審題失誤造成文章跑題就稍顯麻煩了。
我們來看一下以下這道題目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities.
以下是一位學生的作文片段，開頭段和第一主體段(讓步段)：
In almost every form of media, including television, newspapers and magazines, a great deal of attention is paid to the personal lives of celebrities. It seems that the public cannot get enough of this kind of news. However, I believe that what the media should do is to protect and respect the lives of public figures rather than giving too much exposure.
Of course, close reports of super stars, especially news about their private lives and relationships, can satisfy fans’ curiosity and therefore promote the sales of fan magazines and other related products. Those celebrities can also achieve more affection and appear more on TV shows or entertainment news. However, the media should respect the privacy of every individual, including public figures. It is true that celebrities may have chosen to be in the public eye, but that does not give the public the right to know everything about them. Zhang Bozhi, a famous Chinese actress, has to change her dwelling places for three times to protect her sons due to the fanatical paparazzi. It is definitely understandable that a super star should have privacy and an ordinary life.
相信你如果只看以上兩個段落可能并不會覺得有什么問題，但是如果我們結合起來題目，不免會產生一些猶疑，也就是很多學生經常有的一種感受，叫做“怪怪的”，這樣寫得話真的對嗎?
我們先來分析下題目：
“你是否同意：電視、報紙、雜志以及其他媒體過于關注名人(比如公眾人物或者明星)的私生活了。”
對于這樣的問題，我們該如何切題得回答呢?咱們不妨來打個比方，如果你跟你的朋友抱怨“我媽最近太關注我學習了”，那么接下來你的解釋應該選擇以下哪種思路呢?
1. 她老人家天天盯著我寫作業(yè)，每天檢查我做了多少道題，每周都會跟我們班主任溝通我上課的情況，導致我現(xiàn)在壓力非常大，每天都神經緊繃，上課也非常緊張，怕老師跟我媽打小報告;
2. 我媽不應該這么關注我學習，她這樣做導致我每天都神經緊繃，上課也非常緊張，怕老師跟我媽打小報告，她也應該關心關心我的心理狀態(tài)還有我的日常生活。
很明顯，第一種回答方法，是先對于“我媽關注我學習”進行了解釋，然后又說了下這樣的關注產生的后果，來說明“已經過頭了”，而第二種回答方式，雖然也有說到“關注的后果”，但是重點則是在討論“我媽該不該這樣做，我媽應該怎樣做才對”。雖然上面兩種回答中有相同的地方，但是出發(fā)點不一樣，導致終點勢必有些區(qū)別。很明顯第一種答法更符合題目要求，既回應了“關注”又回應了“太”。
類比一下上面的作文題目，如果我同意，應該論述的是“媒體就是太關注了”，反之，應該論述的是“媒體并沒有過分關注”，至于“媒體是否應該關注”，這個論題并不是我們重點要討論的內容，但是“媒體過分關注所產生的后果”可以作為一部分支持論述來支持“too much”。
在上文的寫作片段中，作者從開頭段開始就已經走在了一條不太正確的道路上：“…a great deal of attention is paid to the personal lives of celebrities … However, I believe that what the media should do is to protect and respect the lives of public figures rather than giving too much exposure.”他用一句話回應了題目，而立場則開始帶入了明顯的評價。接下來在讓步段，前半段他說明的是媒體這樣做的意義或產生的正作用，但是接下來話鋒一轉，說媒體不該這樣做，這樣的做法其實并沒有尊重名人們的隱私，并用影星張柏芝的例子來證明，媒體這樣的報道所產生的問題。如此種種，該考生已經沉浸在自己所設定的題目中了，即討論“媒體是否應該過分關注明星”，至于“pay attention”這個關鍵詞卻并沒有給出明確的回應，因此即使語言再好，恐怕得分也不會太高。
那么該如何改正呢?既然題目只是問我們一個客觀事實，那么論述的過程要么就是用事實說話，擺事實講道理，比如記者會跟蹤、偷拍明星，并將他們的一舉一動在第一時間發(fā)布;電視上會邀請明星來參加真人秀(reality shows)，甚至還會到明星家里去拍親子秀，這樣明星的整個生活都暴露在公眾視野;為了博眼球，他們甚至還會將一些信息進行拼接來制造新聞，甚至是假新聞，然后引發(fā)公眾關注，企圖明星能更多地曝光自己的生活等等，然后再說明這樣的關注已經過分了。以下是一個參考主體段：
… I do agree that the media have laid too much emphasis on the privacy of famous people.(開頭段)
Firstly, a tendency has emerged that some producers of reality TV shows are willing to allocate large amounts of money to invite celebrities and even their children or families. It is evident that viewers could have an opportunity to get access to the real life of a super star, i.e., to see what a working day or a weekend of a star is, how different a star’s growing experience is from ordinary people, or what a star will do in a relationship. These shows can thus gain its popularity and then earn more from commercials but the celebrities have lost all their privacy and their families’ lives may be bothered as well.
上文中從事實切入，說了所謂“媒體關注”的方式，考生們在寫的時候也可以用具體的例子，接下來點到這對于明星來說會產生的問題，以此來回應“too much”。當然這不是唯一的解題思路，對于這道題我們也可以分析這個現(xiàn)象背后存在的原因，但歸根結底需要的是命題這個結論。
再來看一下TPO 20這道題目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
以下是來自一位學生的開頭段和第一個主體段：
Nowadays there is a controversial issue about how people achieve success. Someone holds the opinion that by trying new things and taking risks that they become successful, while others think that they already know how to do well. From my perspective, I agree that it’s the spirit of adventure that plays the most important role in being successful.
First of all, trying new things could bring people more creativity and inspiration. To achieve success, you must make your products or services outstanding from the competitors. How to do it? I think the key factor is to be creative. In order to be creative, people must try new things. Let us take Jobs for example. The Apple was nearly bankrupt before Steve Jobs was invited to come back. As the CEO, what Jobs had done was trying his best to make products full of creativity. Iphone is the first cellphone using the technique of multi-touch, Macbook air is thinner than any laptops. Therefore, it is creativity that brings Apple from the edge of bankruptcy to the biggest company in the world.
如果有關注到上文中加粗的位置，相信你心里也一定在犯嘀咕了，也許也會有一種感覺，叫做“文不對題吧”。我們還是先來翻譯一下這道題目的問題：
你是否同意如下觀點：成功人士(往往都是)嘗試新鮮事物，而不是只做自己確定能做好的事。
刷過一些獨立寫作題目的考生可能會有一個思維定式，就是認為獨立寫作基本就在考察某些事情的好與不好。很明顯上文中的同學，就把這道題想成了“如何成功”或“成功的要素”，于是他的思路就變成了“冒險創(chuàng)新”跟“穩(wěn)中求進”，哪個更能讓人成功。于是也就有了他的第一個理由：“嘗試新事物可以讓人更有創(chuàng)造力?！庇型瑢W可能會問，這難道不對嗎?成功的人不就是這樣的嗎?問題就在這里，我們需要論證的是，“成功的人都會嘗試新事物”，而不是“嘗試新事物使人成功”，細說來，后者應該是前者論題在論述中的一個部分或環(huán)節(jié)，我們最終需要證明的是一個事實，即“成功人士更愛冒險嘗試新事物還是只做自己確定能做好的事”。
于是到這里可能有人會問，剛剛上面的段落中不也舉了赫赫有名的喬幫主和他的蘋果帝國作例子嗎?這恰好不也從正面印證了這個事實嗎?沒錯，如果單獨看這個例子其實并無問題，但因為例子去證明的觀點并不是考官所問的，所以即使例子對，也會顯得文不對題。筆者將上面的例子進行了修正，將它們改成了相對比較正確的內容，讀者可以參考對比：
Successful people have long been regarded as the role models for ordinary people and the ones many are willing to imitate. How they succeed in their fields has also been a topic of discussion among public. Although it is sometimes believed that only doing things one person is good at will make success, I still think it is trying new things that should be defined as the determining factor for success, since a diversity of examples have proven this statement.
First of all, the success of a great many business elites should be undoubtedly ascribed to the attempts to develop new fields. Most of them were faced with similar situations when starting their business: being negated, doubted, refused, even despised, just because things they had done were totally new and risky, not only for themselves, but for the market. The only positive side probably lies in the number of their rivals, zero. However, just by doing this, they finally exploit new opportunities, open new markets, and become the winner in the competition. Ma Yun, now the richest man in China, is a good example. After being turned down for hundreds of times, he has built his e-commercial empire all over the world, which used to be labeled as “impossible”. Steve Jobs, used to be the CEO of Apple, has been a legend and the God for billions of fans, largely due to his on-going efforts on the innovation of his products. It is not difficult to imagine that if they had only done what they know they can do well: Ma would have been teaching English in a school and Jobs perhaps a common Harvard undergraduate.
再次提到喬幫主，但提到喬幫主的意義是為了證明一個事實。那么相似地，對于其他類似題目的回答，考生們也應該避免簡單的利弊分析，思考清楚，從事實出發(fā)，講道理，切莫“一本正經地胡說八道”。
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