Gre寫作是美國(guó)所有作文考試中時(shí)刻最長(zhǎng)而質(zhì)量要求最高的一類作文考試，而在短期內(nèi)提高gre寫作能力不是一天兩天可以完成額，所以我們?cè)趥淇?011新gre寫作時(shí)必然要對(duì)問題問題深切的剖析，體味以下優(yōu)異范文的文章結(jié)構(gòu)，以提高新gre寫作的整體分?jǐn)?shù)。
Finally, the argument suffers from "either-or" reasoning. Based on the fact that Monroetown
residents are opposed to Brown's proposed tax cut, the author unfairly concludes that they
must be in favor of Greene's proposal. However, the author overlooks the possibility that
Monroetown residents are not in favor of either proposal.
In sum, the author's argument that Monroetown residents oppose Brown's proposal and are
in favor of the proposals set forth by Greene is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the
author must provide clear evidence that Monroetown residents voted contrary to their own
positions on the issues when they reelected Brown. To better evaluate the argument I would
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need to know how much time passed between the collection of the statistics showing the
national tendency cited by the author and the election. I would also need to know how much
time passed between the election and the survey showing that Monroetown residents oppose
Brown's proposal. Finally, I would need to know what portion of Monroetown's residents voted
in the election, and what portion of these residents were shown by the survey to oppose
Brown's policies.
Argument 37
The following is a memorandum from the director of personnel to the president of Get-Away
Airlines.
"Since our mechanics are responsible for inspecting and maintaining our aircraft, Get-Away
Airlines should pay to send them to the Quality-Care Seminar, a two-week seminar on proper
maintenance procedures. I recommend this seminar because it is likely to be a wise
investment, given that the automobile racing industry recently reported that the performance of
its maintenance crews improved markedly after their crews had attended the seminar. These
maintenance crews perform many of the same functions as do our mechanics, including
refueling and repairing engines. The money we spend on sending our staff to the seminar will
inevitably lead to improved maintenance and thus to greater customer satisfaction along with
greater profits for our airline." 感謝您閱讀《GRE作文范文大全（109） 》一文，出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。
Finally, the argument suffers from "either-or" reasoning. Based on the fact that Monroetown
residents are opposed to Brown's proposed tax cut, the author unfairly concludes that they
must be in favor of Greene's proposal. However, the author overlooks the possibility that
Monroetown residents are not in favor of either proposal.
In sum, the author's argument that Monroetown residents oppose Brown's proposal and are
in favor of the proposals set forth by Greene is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the
author must provide clear evidence that Monroetown residents voted contrary to their own
positions on the issues when they reelected Brown. To better evaluate the argument I would
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need to know how much time passed between the collection of the statistics showing the
national tendency cited by the author and the election. I would also need to know how much
time passed between the election and the survey showing that Monroetown residents oppose
Brown's proposal. Finally, I would need to know what portion of Monroetown's residents voted
in the election, and what portion of these residents were shown by the survey to oppose
Brown's policies.
Argument 37
The following is a memorandum from the director of personnel to the president of Get-Away
Airlines.
"Since our mechanics are responsible for inspecting and maintaining our aircraft, Get-Away
Airlines should pay to send them to the Quality-Care Seminar, a two-week seminar on proper
maintenance procedures. I recommend this seminar because it is likely to be a wise
investment, given that the automobile racing industry recently reported that the performance of
its maintenance crews improved markedly after their crews had attended the seminar. These
maintenance crews perform many of the same functions as do our mechanics, including
refueling and repairing engines. The money we spend on sending our staff to the seminar will
inevitably lead to improved maintenance and thus to greater customer satisfaction along with
greater profits for our airline." 感謝您閱讀《GRE作文范文大全（109） 》一文，出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。