Being thinly clad and consequently trembling a lot， a poor guy hunted around for a job in the cold winter times. Unbelievably， he became an arrogant millionaire just a few days later.What caused the total difference？ The answer was "lottery".
Although such a dramatic miracle seldom happens. Some conservative people think that lottery equals to "gamble"， which is called the source of sins in the dark old days. The new type of "gamble" permitted by government is likely to induce speculators to be addicted in it.
Nevertheless， most people hold an opposite concept over what lottery has brought about； it does more good than harm and the value of it should not be underestimated. First and fore most， aiming at devoting to the social welfare project， the nature of lottery distinguished itself from gamble. Secondly， this business is healthy and safe on the whole. A two-yuan lottery ticket's attraction is limited that an ambitious gambler will never reckon on it to make profit. East but no least， though a person may buy lottery tickets in order to seize a chance to seek private gain initially， he will be touched and happy when he sees what he has done helps persons such as the disabled and orphans a lot. So to speak， lottery plays a part in purifying one's heart and helping to promote the construction of spiritual civilization.
Every coin has double sides. As a good source of collecting money for people who cry out for it， lottery's positive side strongly overwhelms the other side. Therefore， I appeal not to deny the advantages of lottery.
簡 評
本文討論彩票發(fā)展的利與弊，結(jié)構(gòu)較簡單，但條理清晰。作者先以一個生動的例子開篇：窮小子因彩票而成為百萬富翁，令人印象深刻。接下來，作者從正反兩方面論述彩票的作用。反對者認為：購買彩票即賭博，為萬惡之源。但顯然作者認同正方觀點，提出三大好處：促進社會福利；與賭博相比，健康且安全；購買者會因他人得到救助而得到滿足。此三點連接流暢，用了first and foremost，secondly，last but not least等，使條理清晰。結(jié)尾總括全文，照應(yīng)前面觀點，以"every Coin has double sides"比喻事物的兩面性。對正反觀點進行總結(jié)，清楚表明自己的觀點。當然如果能夠?qū)γ織l論點展開，做更多的論述，效果會更好。
Although such a dramatic miracle seldom happens. Some conservative people think that lottery equals to "gamble"， which is called the source of sins in the dark old days. The new type of "gamble" permitted by government is likely to induce speculators to be addicted in it.
Nevertheless， most people hold an opposite concept over what lottery has brought about； it does more good than harm and the value of it should not be underestimated. First and fore most， aiming at devoting to the social welfare project， the nature of lottery distinguished itself from gamble. Secondly， this business is healthy and safe on the whole. A two-yuan lottery ticket's attraction is limited that an ambitious gambler will never reckon on it to make profit. East but no least， though a person may buy lottery tickets in order to seize a chance to seek private gain initially， he will be touched and happy when he sees what he has done helps persons such as the disabled and orphans a lot. So to speak， lottery plays a part in purifying one's heart and helping to promote the construction of spiritual civilization.
Every coin has double sides. As a good source of collecting money for people who cry out for it， lottery's positive side strongly overwhelms the other side. Therefore， I appeal not to deny the advantages of lottery.
簡 評
本文討論彩票發(fā)展的利與弊，結(jié)構(gòu)較簡單，但條理清晰。作者先以一個生動的例子開篇：窮小子因彩票而成為百萬富翁，令人印象深刻。接下來，作者從正反兩方面論述彩票的作用。反對者認為：購買彩票即賭博，為萬惡之源。但顯然作者認同正方觀點，提出三大好處：促進社會福利；與賭博相比，健康且安全；購買者會因他人得到救助而得到滿足。此三點連接流暢，用了first and foremost，secondly，last but not least等，使條理清晰。結(jié)尾總括全文，照應(yīng)前面觀點，以"every Coin has double sides"比喻事物的兩面性。對正反觀點進行總結(jié)，清楚表明自己的觀點。當然如果能夠?qū)γ織l論點展開，做更多的論述，效果會更好。