新東方:好作文是想出來(lái)的 不是背出來(lái)的

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這是五年的小作文題目和參考范文,我把里面好的不好的內(nèi)容都簡(jiǎn)單做了分析,請(qǐng)同學(xué)們看的時(shí)候多結(jié)合自己的情況和水平來(lái)思考造句,不要盲目背誦,還是要說(shuō)那句話——作文是想出來(lái)的,不是背出來(lái)的!
    祝大家夢(mèng)想成真,前方的路你并不孤獨(dú),因?yàn)橛形?,有你,還有他; 雖然前方的路很黑很長(zhǎng),但漫長(zhǎng)的黑夜同樣給了我們安靜的思考和冒險(xiǎn)的精神,大家努力!
    2009年考研小作文
    51.Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions. “White pollution ”is still going on. Write a letter to the editor(s) of your local newspaper to
    1)give your opinions briefly and
    2) make two or three suggestions
    You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. You do not need to write the address
    參考范文
    Dear Sir,
    Nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious environmental problem. White pollution has become a common concern of the public. According to a survey,in some areas the ban on the use of plastic bags are not very successful,so white pollution continues.(開頭寫的太羅嗦,其實(shí)就簡(jiǎn)單的說(shuō)白色污染再繼續(xù),所以寫信要給建議)
    In my humble opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions. The first action is that,your newspaper would strengthen to report the problem about the bad of plastic bags. The second action is that ,your newspaper should persuade people not to use plastic bags. The last action is that your newspaper should allow the Government to formulate some policies to ban on the use of plastic bags. (這個(gè)中間段落結(jié)構(gòu)上雖然清晰,但是結(jié)構(gòu)句式卻乏善可陳,沒有任何句式的變化,的優(yōu)點(diǎn)就是在詞匯上)
    I hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
    Yours sincerely
    Li Ming
    2008年考研小作文試題
    51. Directions:
    You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob,your landlord there. Write him a letter to
    1)make an apology,and
    2)suggest a solution.
    You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
    Do not write the address. (10 points)
    參考范文
    Dear Bob,
    I am writing to express my apology to you.
    Several days ago,I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house. Unfortunately,after I came back from Canada,I found it in my luggage. I was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you. I will send it to you by post or express as soon as possible. If necessary,I will compensate for any troubles it may cause.(這個(gè)部分寫的實(shí)在是沒什么亮點(diǎn),就是比較準(zhǔn)確,沒有錯(cuò)誤,但可以寫成, Firstly,the reason why i took away your beloved cd player and found it in my luggage is that i forgot to return it to you when i was leaving. And moreover,i am sure the terrible effect,namely the great inconvenience might be that you fail to listen to your favourite songs when you wnat. Lastly,I am confident that i will never make the same mistakes by avoiding my carelessness and irresponsiblity and try to return this cd play to you as soon as possibe by means of EMS.
    Once again,I feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused. Please accept my apology.
    Sincerely yours,
    Liming
    2007年考研真題 小作文
    51.Directions
    Write a letter to you university library,making suggestions for improving its service.
    You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
    Do not write the address. (10 points)
    Dear Sir or Madam,
    I’m a student in the university and a loyal reader of this library. I’m writing to tell some of my ideas,which I hope to be helpful for you. (第一段寫的還不錯(cuò),而且加入了身份的介紹,同時(shí)寫出了題目要求---建議,且?guī)в卸ㄕZ(yǔ)從句)
    I notice that many magazines in our library are out of date(過期). It would be beneficial to us students if they could be updated in time. And I suggest introducing some new journals so as to bring new fresh air to the library. Furthermore(邏輯連貫),since we have a huge number of books,it is not easy to find the right one easily. However,if we can introduce some new searching means(引進(jìn)新的搜索方式,比較好的思路, 如果按湘湘講的寫可以說(shuō)書太多找起來(lái)不方便,帶來(lái)的壞影響就是太浪費(fèi)時(shí)間),such as implementing new information management system that would be useful. (他沒有寫服務(wù),其實(shí)就寫了兩點(diǎn)建議)
    Thank you for taking time reading this letter and I’m looking forward to seeing some new changes soon. (模板語(yǔ)言)
    Sincerely Yours,
    Li Ming
    2006年考研小作文
    51.Directions
    You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned,asking them to help find a candidate
    You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.
    Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
    Do not write the address. (10 points)
    Dear Sir or Madam,
    As a college student who is studying and living in a good environment,I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial assistance to a child in a remote area. Having conceived such a plan for a long time,I write this letter to request your help to recommend a proper candidate. (開頭太長(zhǎng),不過語(yǔ)言很好,而且有身份介紹,同時(shí)說(shuō)出了很清晰的目的,但是不建議基礎(chǔ)不好的同學(xué)模仿)
    I wonder if it is convenient for you if three things concerning the child are taken into consideration. First,the child should come from Gansu Province,for I intend to help a child from my hometown. Second,it will be better if the child is a primary school student. I hope I will help him/her from the very beginning. In addition,he/she must be willing to return to his hometown to help built it after graduation from university.(注意看其中的內(nèi)容,詞匯沒有任何特殊之處,基本全部是初高中詞匯,就是搭配的比較好,且沒有任何的錯(cuò)誤)
    My plan will be carried out as follows. On one hand,I will remit at least 2,000 Yuan in cash every year until he/she finishes his/her education before entering college. On the other hand,I decide to teach the child一 math and English in person during my summer vacation,which will surely be more beneficial to the child. (這個(gè)段落作者依然是在使用自己最會(huì)用的句式結(jié)構(gòu),但大家無(wú)論如何要盡量使用定語(yǔ)從句!!!!而詞匯他只用了幾個(gè)他會(huì)的難詞,所以大家記得,句式簡(jiǎn)單詞匯難,詞匯簡(jiǎn)單句式難是你可以二選一的方式,如果做不到,那就保證少出錯(cuò),哪怕簡(jiǎn)單.)
    Your prompt help would be highly appreciated. And I am looking forward to your reply very soon.(模板!!)
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    2005年考研小作文題目
    51.Directions:
    Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions,But n5ow you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss,Mr. Wang,telling him your decision,stating your reason (s),and making an apology.
    Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
    You do not need to write the address. (10 points)
    Dear Mr. Wang,
    First of all,please allow me to express my deep sorry to you for my resignation(目的詞). I do know that this will bring about much trouble to you so that I write to you for my explanation.
    I decided to quit for some reasons as follows.(理由) To begin with,the job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions is not suitable to me. What’s more,I am preparing for another degree and I prefer to further my study. Again,I apologize for my resignation to you! (這個(gè)范文的中間段寫的之爛不評(píng)價(jià)了,沒什么內(nèi)容,當(dāng)然它具備一個(gè)它具備的優(yōu)點(diǎn),那就是沒出錯(cuò).....)
    I am looking forward to your early reply. (模板太爛!!!!更好的句式比如說(shuō) i will be right here to wait for your early approval and once agian feel deeply sorry for the inconvenience my resignation has cause to you.
    Sincerely yours,
    Li Ming