「要求」
以“我最難忘的經(jīng)歷”為題,寫一篇100字左右的短文。
「范文」
My Most Unforgettable Experience
One day on my way to school, I ran across a traffic accident, in which a boy was seriously injured by a motorcycle. I rushed to his rescue instinctively. I lifted him in my arms and hailed a taxi, which took us quickly to nearby hospital. After emergency treatment, the boy came to. I felt at ease when I knew that he had only suffered from minor bone fractures and would rceover in a couple of weeks. I left the hospital without giving my name, but my heart was full of joy and peace. Not until then did I understand the meaning of the proverb:“Helping others is the source of happiness.”This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life.
「評語」
本文敘述清楚,結(jié)尾部分的點題,使結(jié)構(gòu)顯得完整。
以“我最難忘的經(jīng)歷”為題,寫一篇100字左右的短文。
「范文」
My Most Unforgettable Experience
One day on my way to school, I ran across a traffic accident, in which a boy was seriously injured by a motorcycle. I rushed to his rescue instinctively. I lifted him in my arms and hailed a taxi, which took us quickly to nearby hospital. After emergency treatment, the boy came to. I felt at ease when I knew that he had only suffered from minor bone fractures and would rceover in a couple of weeks. I left the hospital without giving my name, but my heart was full of joy and peace. Not until then did I understand the meaning of the proverb:“Helping others is the source of happiness.”This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life.
「評語」
本文敘述清楚,結(jié)尾部分的點題,使結(jié)構(gòu)顯得完整。