TOEFL考試作文常見錯誤簡析2

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標(biāo)點問題來源:考試大
    I love animals. and I like to help them. because they are helpless. so I want to become a vet.
    這是一個非常普遍的問題!許多學(xué)生在句子中使用了太多的句號,尤其是當(dāng)他們用手寫的時候。
    重復(fù)冗余來源:考試大
    Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.
    一種意思的表述不止一次,或者某個詞語不必要。
    單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù)來源:考試大
    Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.
    單詞需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù),或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)。
    單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞來源:考試大
    單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單獨使用,應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞(a, the, my, his, her, Gary's, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。
    拼寫錯誤
    主語、動詞或賓語有問題來源:考試大
    I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it.
    There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.
    句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問題  缺少主語、動詞或賓語,或者這些成分重復(fù)。
    語氣與文章不符來源:考試大
    I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me.
    I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.
    語氣與文章其他部分不相符 可能是過于正式或者太不正式。
    代詞指代不明來源:考試大
    If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication.
    I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.
    代詞所指代的指示詞(介詞所代替的名詞)不清楚。
    過于籠統(tǒng)來源:考試大
    We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.
    句子或它所表達的意思過于籠統(tǒng),不能提供多少信息。
    動詞時態(tài)錯誤來源:考試大
    Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.
    動詞時態(tài)不正確 檢查一下是應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時、過去時、將來時還是完成時等等。
    選詞不恰當(dāng)來源:考試大
    I was late getting home because I lost my way.
    在這種情況下不應(yīng)該使用該詞 可選擇更好的詞語或者所使用的詞語與文章的總體語氣不符。
    單詞形式不當(dāng)來
    I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.
    所使用的單詞的形式不正確 檢查一下應(yīng)該使用該詞的名詞、形容詞或副詞形式的哪一種。
    用詞錯誤來源
    Even I don’t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store.
    I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.
    用詞錯誤或在此種情況下該詞不是用詞。