三、英語寫作高分要注意的幾種情況
（一）避免低級錯誤，提高語言表達的準確性
1、詞匯問題
1）搭配錯誤
Low price而不是cheap price.
Price has been more and more cheap. Prices has been declining.
2) 虛假同義詞問題
有很多英語單詞被當作同義詞來處理，如economical, economic, financial, economics等。實際上這些同義詞并非真正意義上的同義詞。只因為漢語解釋非常籠統(tǒng)，造成漢語詞匯重復。語義的區(qū)別沒有體現(xiàn)出來，才造成誤用。
下面都是中國學生在作文中常用并出錯多的“同義詞”。
rise, raise, arise
effect, affect, influence
maybe, may
病句：
As college students, we have to learn/study knowledge. [acquire]
The prices raised when the harvest was poor. [rose]
He cost $2000 to buy the new computer. [He spent $2000 on the …或The new computer cost him $2000.]
I won't take you much time.
Because of economic difficulty, he had to drop out.
3) 分詞的混亂。
動詞ing與過去分詞作形容詞時常混用。Exciting, excited; satisfied, satisfying;
The good news made all of us very exciting.
4) 關于“有”的表達，誤用較多。
There are many people think …
2、時態(tài)錯誤、混亂
I did not expect he will come.
3、句子結構錯亂，常見的是不使用連接詞，直接用逗號連接兩句話。影響檔次分!
There is no doubt that western culture is the leading one, it has changed the world deeply.
4、一致性，尤其是主謂一致。
The issue have become more and more serious.
5、比較級錯誤
常見錯誤：more better.
The society is changing more and more faster…
Problems have been more and more. 問題越來越多。
6、大小寫錯誤
一般來說，每一句的首字母應該大寫，人名地名等專有名詞的首字母大寫。
china is still a developing country.
it is well-known that…
7、拼寫錯誤 此類錯誤相當普遍，而且習慣一旦養(yǎng)成，較難改掉。下面是幾個經(jīng)常容易搞混淆或拼錯的單詞，課下多寫幾遍。
environment（環(huán)境，容易寫成enviroment）,
government（政府，容易誤拼成goverment）,
modern（現(xiàn)代的，容易拼成morden）
（二）、常見錯誤對照分析
請大家檢查對照，自己是否犯過此類錯誤，寫下正確表達形式。
1．Since…, people's life level is improving fast. (living standard)
2．He told me he wanted to contact me when I was convenient, but I was cheated. (available)
3. This issue is very serious, and people are very dangerous. (in great danger)
4. After this incident, I was very painful and did not want to go to school. (upset)
5. My hometown must become very beautiful in the future.
6. A man who is too proud must not take other people's advice.
Must表示推測的用法：
Must be +形容詞
Must be+現(xiàn)在分詞
Must have+過去分詞（對過去的推測）
絕對不是must+實義動詞！
7. Only when you insist on working hard, can you realize your ideal. (keep)
8. I was very angry that she doubted that I cheated in her exam. (suspected)
9. Especially, science and technology are highly important and emphasized. (In particular)
10. This certainly effects the people's lives; they can choose any kind if they want. (affect)
11. It seemed that no one who can cause my attention. (attract/capture)
12. It (maths problem) was that hard that (it) spent him a whole night. (took)
13. The old man appreciated him very much. (liked)
14. When we touch the other people in the society, … (are in contact with)
15. I disagree the opinion “l(fā)eaning about the past has no … in the present”. (disagree with)
16. When we meet difficulties, we must face them calmly. (meet with)
17. In modern society, people's nervous work often makes them too tired. (stressful)
18 In big cities, there is always crowded traffic, while in the countryside… (heavy/congested)
19. I think it is very right to say pride leads to failure. (quite)
20. The short of exercises makes me can not work well enough. (prevent …from)
21. You may be like this position.
（三）正確使用關聯(lián)詞
順序: to begin with, moreover, last but not the least; 【用于列舉多個方面的原因】
舉例：take…as an example, for instance, such as, that is, in other words
強調：especially【絕對不可以用于主句句首!!!】, particularly, by all means, in particular
比較：likewise, similarly 【表示類似的東西，用于句首】
對比：by striking contrast【用于句首】
讓步：For all【后面只能緊跟名詞性結構】；however+形容詞/副詞
For all the advantages mentioned above, XXX is not without its limitations.
However grave the situation may be, …
原因：now that, since, because of, for this reason, as, due to, owing to, thanks to【常表示積極原因】
結果：therefore, accordingly, hence, thus,【前面這幾個單詞只能做副詞，不能單獨直接連接兩個句子】連詞so可以。
總結：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, in summary, as has been mentioned above
遞進：in addition, furthermore, moreover, what's more 【需要單獨引起一句話】
時間：afterwards, at length, meanwhile, 【單獨引起一句話】
例子： For all the advantages mentioned above, 【讓步】【承上】Internet is by no means without its limitations【啟下】. To begin with, 【舉例】we cannot always tell whether or not the information it provides is true. We may be misled by wrong information and make wrong judgments or conclusions. Moreover, we may find too much information on the same topic and to pick out what we need will take us much time…Last but not least, there are quite many viruses in the Internet, which may cause great damages to our computer.
In conclusion, we college students need to use the Internet properly for our studies and entertainment….
（四）句式要靈活
改變句子的開頭方式，不要都千篇一律的主謂賓或主系表結構。可以把狀語置于句首，或用分詞作狀語等。然后注意適當穿插下面的幾種句式會使整個文章增色很多。
1）定語從句（限定性和非限定性）
Example 1: To the best of my knowledge, there are many reasons why SMS is so popular nowadays.
Example 2: The public have noticed and been worried about this new trend, which has generated a variety of negative effects on the young people.
2）分詞短語狀語
The use of cell phone makes the world more like a global village, giving us the opportunity to stay in touch at any time and at any place.
3）強調句
It is this severe issue that brought about the heated discussion among the public.
4）倒裝句
Only by enforcing these measures can we hope to solve the problem eventually.
5）反問
Shouldn't we take effective measures to curb this situation?
6）插入成分[介詞短語]
It is sensible, by any means, for us to make scientific analysis.
It is necessary, therefore, to use the resources appropriately.
（五）使用必要模板，要看清作文要求，切忌胡亂照搬
1）開頭段常用句型
Along with the advance of the society, there is a growing concern with the problem of …
In the past few years, there is an increasing popularity among people with…Take…as an example….
Recently the phenomenon has aroused in the society wide concern.
2）中間段常用句型
Although the popular belief is that …, a recent study (survey / poll / investigation) indicates that ….
The increase/change in … largely / partly results/arises from….
The increase in … is largely due to the fact that ….
There are a variety of causes for this marked change / decline / increase或其它表示變化的名詞
3）結尾段常用句型
From what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that ….
It is high time that we placed considerable emphasis on the improvement/development of ….
However hard it might be, I do believe there will always be a way out, as long as we are determined to change the present situation.
（六）避免使用低級詞匯，盡量使用中高級詞匯（主要是形容詞和形容詞）
Good resultsàfavorable results
Bad effectsànegative effects
Big changesàgreat changes;
(Data )show thatàindicate; demonstrate
Importantàsignificant; crucial; vital
More and more (problems等名詞)àan increasing number of (problems)
More and more (important等形容詞或副詞)à increasingly (important)
All kinds of à a variety of
Manyà a number of
Deal withà tackle
Possibleàlikely (可用人或討論的問題做主語)
（一）避免低級錯誤，提高語言表達的準確性
1、詞匯問題
1）搭配錯誤
Low price而不是cheap price.
Price has been more and more cheap. Prices has been declining.
2) 虛假同義詞問題
有很多英語單詞被當作同義詞來處理，如economical, economic, financial, economics等。實際上這些同義詞并非真正意義上的同義詞。只因為漢語解釋非常籠統(tǒng)，造成漢語詞匯重復。語義的區(qū)別沒有體現(xiàn)出來，才造成誤用。
下面都是中國學生在作文中常用并出錯多的“同義詞”。
rise, raise, arise
effect, affect, influence
maybe, may
病句：
As college students, we have to learn/study knowledge. [acquire]
The prices raised when the harvest was poor. [rose]
He cost $2000 to buy the new computer. [He spent $2000 on the …或The new computer cost him $2000.]
I won't take you much time.
Because of economic difficulty, he had to drop out.
3) 分詞的混亂。
動詞ing與過去分詞作形容詞時常混用。Exciting, excited; satisfied, satisfying;
The good news made all of us very exciting.
4) 關于“有”的表達，誤用較多。
There are many people think …
2、時態(tài)錯誤、混亂
I did not expect he will come.
3、句子結構錯亂，常見的是不使用連接詞，直接用逗號連接兩句話。影響檔次分!
There is no doubt that western culture is the leading one, it has changed the world deeply.
4、一致性，尤其是主謂一致。
The issue have become more and more serious.
5、比較級錯誤
常見錯誤：more better.
The society is changing more and more faster…
Problems have been more and more. 問題越來越多。
6、大小寫錯誤
一般來說，每一句的首字母應該大寫，人名地名等專有名詞的首字母大寫。
china is still a developing country.
it is well-known that…
7、拼寫錯誤 此類錯誤相當普遍，而且習慣一旦養(yǎng)成，較難改掉。下面是幾個經(jīng)常容易搞混淆或拼錯的單詞，課下多寫幾遍。
environment（環(huán)境，容易寫成enviroment）,
government（政府，容易誤拼成goverment）,
modern（現(xiàn)代的，容易拼成morden）
（二）、常見錯誤對照分析
請大家檢查對照，自己是否犯過此類錯誤，寫下正確表達形式。
1．Since…, people's life level is improving fast. (living standard)
2．He told me he wanted to contact me when I was convenient, but I was cheated. (available)
3. This issue is very serious, and people are very dangerous. (in great danger)
4. After this incident, I was very painful and did not want to go to school. (upset)
5. My hometown must become very beautiful in the future.
6. A man who is too proud must not take other people's advice.
Must表示推測的用法：
Must be +形容詞
Must be+現(xiàn)在分詞
Must have+過去分詞（對過去的推測）
絕對不是must+實義動詞！
7. Only when you insist on working hard, can you realize your ideal. (keep)
8. I was very angry that she doubted that I cheated in her exam. (suspected)
9. Especially, science and technology are highly important and emphasized. (In particular)
10. This certainly effects the people's lives; they can choose any kind if they want. (affect)
11. It seemed that no one who can cause my attention. (attract/capture)
12. It (maths problem) was that hard that (it) spent him a whole night. (took)
13. The old man appreciated him very much. (liked)
14. When we touch the other people in the society, … (are in contact with)
15. I disagree the opinion “l(fā)eaning about the past has no … in the present”. (disagree with)
16. When we meet difficulties, we must face them calmly. (meet with)
17. In modern society, people's nervous work often makes them too tired. (stressful)
18 In big cities, there is always crowded traffic, while in the countryside… (heavy/congested)
19. I think it is very right to say pride leads to failure. (quite)
20. The short of exercises makes me can not work well enough. (prevent …from)
21. You may be like this position.
（三）正確使用關聯(lián)詞
順序: to begin with, moreover, last but not the least; 【用于列舉多個方面的原因】
舉例：take…as an example, for instance, such as, that is, in other words
強調：especially【絕對不可以用于主句句首!!!】, particularly, by all means, in particular
比較：likewise, similarly 【表示類似的東西，用于句首】
對比：by striking contrast【用于句首】
讓步：For all【后面只能緊跟名詞性結構】；however+形容詞/副詞
For all the advantages mentioned above, XXX is not without its limitations.
However grave the situation may be, …
原因：now that, since, because of, for this reason, as, due to, owing to, thanks to【常表示積極原因】
結果：therefore, accordingly, hence, thus,【前面這幾個單詞只能做副詞，不能單獨直接連接兩個句子】連詞so可以。
總結：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, in summary, as has been mentioned above
遞進：in addition, furthermore, moreover, what's more 【需要單獨引起一句話】
時間：afterwards, at length, meanwhile, 【單獨引起一句話】
例子： For all the advantages mentioned above, 【讓步】【承上】Internet is by no means without its limitations【啟下】. To begin with, 【舉例】we cannot always tell whether or not the information it provides is true. We may be misled by wrong information and make wrong judgments or conclusions. Moreover, we may find too much information on the same topic and to pick out what we need will take us much time…Last but not least, there are quite many viruses in the Internet, which may cause great damages to our computer.
In conclusion, we college students need to use the Internet properly for our studies and entertainment….
（四）句式要靈活
改變句子的開頭方式，不要都千篇一律的主謂賓或主系表結構。可以把狀語置于句首，或用分詞作狀語等。然后注意適當穿插下面的幾種句式會使整個文章增色很多。
1）定語從句（限定性和非限定性）
Example 1: To the best of my knowledge, there are many reasons why SMS is so popular nowadays.
Example 2: The public have noticed and been worried about this new trend, which has generated a variety of negative effects on the young people.
2）分詞短語狀語
The use of cell phone makes the world more like a global village, giving us the opportunity to stay in touch at any time and at any place.
3）強調句
It is this severe issue that brought about the heated discussion among the public.
4）倒裝句
Only by enforcing these measures can we hope to solve the problem eventually.
5）反問
Shouldn't we take effective measures to curb this situation?
6）插入成分[介詞短語]
It is sensible, by any means, for us to make scientific analysis.
It is necessary, therefore, to use the resources appropriately.
（五）使用必要模板，要看清作文要求，切忌胡亂照搬
1）開頭段常用句型
Along with the advance of the society, there is a growing concern with the problem of …
In the past few years, there is an increasing popularity among people with…Take…as an example….
Recently the phenomenon has aroused in the society wide concern.
2）中間段常用句型
Although the popular belief is that …, a recent study (survey / poll / investigation) indicates that ….
The increase/change in … largely / partly results/arises from….
The increase in … is largely due to the fact that ….
There are a variety of causes for this marked change / decline / increase或其它表示變化的名詞
3）結尾段常用句型
From what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that ….
It is high time that we placed considerable emphasis on the improvement/development of ….
However hard it might be, I do believe there will always be a way out, as long as we are determined to change the present situation.
（六）避免使用低級詞匯，盡量使用中高級詞匯（主要是形容詞和形容詞）
Good resultsàfavorable results
Bad effectsànegative effects
Big changesàgreat changes;
(Data )show thatàindicate; demonstrate
Importantàsignificant; crucial; vital
More and more (problems等名詞)àan increasing number of (problems)
More and more (important等形容詞或副詞)à increasingly (important)
All kinds of à a variety of
Manyà a number of
Deal withà tackle
Possibleàlikely (可用人或討論的問題做主語)